Part II of the initial prologue done remaking.

This covers the whole pre prologue.

6 files changed, 40 insertions, 47 deletions

diff --git a/game/ATTRIBUTION b/game/ATTRIBUTION
index c24abcf..60030b2 100644
--- a/game/ATTRIBUTION
+++ b/game/ATTRIBUTION
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ Where relevant, you must also include a link to https://tmw2.org in your credit.
 	gfx/off.png (Jesusalva)	(CC0)
 	gfx/spinner.png
 ## BG
-	gfx/bg/academy.webp
+	gfx/bg/academy.webp (Santiago Iborra)	(CC BY SA)	(Arcmage/Modified)
 	gfx/bg/battle.png (Écrivain)	(CC0)	(OpenGameArt)
 	gfx/bg/darklands.png (Écrivain)	(CC0)	(OpenGameArt)
 	gfx/bg/forest_sunset_fg.png (Faewild)	(CC BY 3.0)	(LemmaSoftForums)
@@ -76,8 +76,10 @@ Where relevant, you must also include a link to https://tmw2.org in your credit.
 	gfx/dialog/darkmana.webp (Santiago Iborra)	(CC BY SA)	(Arcmage/Modified)
 	gfx/dialog/deadlyshock.webp (Santiago Iborra)	(CC BY SA)	(Arcmage/Modified)
 	gfx/dialog/detective.webp (Sapiboong)	(Sapiboong*)	(LemmaSoftForums)
+	gfx/dialog/giulio.png (David Revoy)	(CC BY 3.0)	(From OpenGameArt)
 	gfx/dialog/mentor.webp (Santiago Iborra)	(CC BY SA)	(Arcmage)
 	gfx/dialog/rebel.png
+	gfx/dialog/spearman.webp (Santiago Iborra)	(CC BY SA)	(Arcmage)
 ## GUI
 	gfx/gui/cog_hover.png (JellyCat)	(CC0)	(OpenGameArt/Modified)
 	gfx/gui/cog_idle.png (JellyCat)	(CC0)	(OpenGameArt/Modified)
diff --git a/game/gfx/bg/academy.webp b/game/gfx/bg/academy.webp
index 1fe81bb..45fadbd 100644
--- a/game/gfx/bg/academy.webp
+++ b/game/gfx/bg/academy.webp
diff --git a/game/gfx/dialog/giulio.webp b/game/gfx/dialog/giulio.webp
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..f9132f4
--- /dev/null
+++ b/game/gfx/dialog/giulio.webp
diff --git a/game/gfx/dialog/spearman.webp b/game/gfx/dialog/spearman.webp
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..92871c0
--- /dev/null
+++ b/game/gfx/dialog/spearman.webp
diff --git a/game/script.rpy b/game/script.rpy
index 0c82ad8..3606a86 100644
--- a/game/script.rpy
+++ b/game/script.rpy
@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 # The script of the game goes in this file.
 # Declare images
 #image bg room = Frame("gfx/bg/port.png", 0, 0)
-image dialog rebel = "gfx/dialog/rebel.png"
 image banner_ = "gfx/actionarea.png"
 
 
@@ -36,7 +35,6 @@ label start:
     # Open game
     scene bg town with Dissolve(0.3)
     pause 0.1
-    #show dialog rebel
     $ password=persistent.password
     $ email=""
 
@@ -189,7 +187,6 @@ label loop:
 label restore:
     # Restore town view
     scene bg town
-    #show dialog rebel
     play music MUSIC_TOWN fadein 0.5
     $ hud_show()
     jump loop
diff --git a/game/story.rpy b/game/story.rpy
index 76ec7b4..2647f55 100644
--- a/game/story.rpy
+++ b/game/story.rpy
@@ -18,12 +18,16 @@
 ########################################################################################
 # Game Story labels
 define e = Character("Player")
+define you = Character("[persistent.nickname]")
 
 define e_dt = Character("???", color="#cccccc")
 define e_dtk = Character("Inspector", color="#cccccc")
 define e_ds = Character("???", color="#8e96d3")
 define e_dsk = Character("Deadly Shadow", color="#8e96d3")
 
+define e_ot = Character("???", color="#cccccc")
+define e_gg = Character("Giulio", color="#ffaacc")
+
 label SQ00001_prologue:
     python:
         while persistent.nickname is None:
@@ -49,7 +53,7 @@ label SQ00001_prologue:
     e_dt "So, these are the darklands."
     e_dt "I didn't realize they were real. Or at least, I hoped so. If it is here..."
     e_dt "...Then there can be only one meaning. I have to report this at once!"
-    e_ds "Going somewhere, darling?"
+    e_ds "Going somewhere, darling? ♪"
     show dialog_detective at prologue_right1
     show dialog_deadlyshock at prologue_right2
     with move
@@ -59,46 +63,44 @@ label SQ00001_prologue:
     show dialog_deadlyshock at prologue_right2
     show dialog_darkmana at prologue_left
     with move
-    e_ds "Humans, always in hurry... Why don't you dance with us, darling?"
+    e_ds "Humans, always in hurry... Why don't you dance with us, darling? ♪"
     e_dt "I appreciate the invite, but I cannot afford to fail this mission. En garde!"
     scene black with vpunch
     stop music fadeout 2.5
     pause 1.0
-    centered "Meanwhile\nExactly where we are..."
+    centered "Meanwhile\n{w=0.5}{nw}"
+    centered "Meanwhile\nAcademy of Weisheit"
     scene bg academy with Dissolve(0.5)
+    show dialog_spearman at toffscreenright with None
     play music MUSIC_PROLOGUE02.id() fadein 1.0
 
-    "Signet Academy\nGraduation Ceremony"
-    show dialog_mentor at tcenter with Dissolve(0.5)
-    "Professor" "And with this, I declare graduate the fifteenth group of knights and captains."
-
-    "{color=#0f0}*cheers*{/color}"
-
-    "You" "The day has finally arrived. The day I graduate as Captain."
-    "You" "All my hard work is finally paying off..."
+    #show dialog_mentor at tcenter with Dissolve(0.5)
+    "{color=#0f0}*bustling noises*{/color}"
 
-    "Professor" "And with this, the final test shall take place, before you can truly declare yourselves Captains and Knights."
+    you "It surely is crowded here today! Who would think so many people would show up..."
+    show dialog_giulio at tcenter with Dissolve(0.5)
+    e_gg "OF COURSE so many people would show up, [persistent.nickname]. {i}He{/i} is a seasoned war veteran!"
+    
+    you "I would not know that, Giulio. You know how much time I've spent studying magic!"
 
-    "{color=#0f0}*silence falls over the crowds*{/color}"
+    e_gg "Yes, you Mana Mages are the strangest kind of mages I ever heard about."
 
-    "Professor" "You all should travel to the Capital and met Marshall Luhmer."
-    "Professor" "This task sounds simple, but many lose their lives at it. Lack of care will be your death!"
-    "Professor" "As long that you report to him in one piece, you'll have passed the trial, and will be able to start working."
+    e_gg "It might be easy for those like you, who can control the Mana Spheres..."
 
-    "Professor" "{color=#0f0}*cough cough*{/color} With this, you are all dismissed."
+    you "Excuse me?! I barely can bring them forth, let alone controlling them."
 
-    scene bg forest_sunset with fade#Dissolve(0.5)
-
-    "As a Captain, I can use summons, but I'm lacking in fight skills."
-    "I could try to have a summon fighting for me, but could I survive long enough to finish the chant...?"
+    show dialog_spearman at prologue_right2
+    show dialog_giulio at tleft
+    with move
 
+    e_ot "Excuse me, are you both enrolled at the Weisheit Academy?"
+    e_gg "Uhm... You are an imperial spearman, right? What... Are you doing here?"
+    you "Actually, Giulio... When did everyone left??"
     play music MUSIC_PROLOGUE03.id() fadein 0.6
-    "{color=#0f0}As you think on the best route to use, a newly appointed knight approaches you.{/color}"
+    e_ot "Oh great, you {i}are{/i} students! I was afraid of returning to the base without any kills."
+    e_ot "Die for me!!"
 
-    "Giulio" "Hey, you're a new Captain, right? I was thinking, a top grade knight like me should not risk myself needlessly."
-    "Giulio" "So, perhaps we should travel together. It's not against the rules, right?"
-    "You" "No..."
-    "Giulio" "So, it's decided then! haha, those monsters are no match for me, even if they get annoying! Let's go!"
+    e_gg "{color=#0f0}*psst*{/color} [persistent.nickname], be careful. You are no match for an imperial spearman, leave combat for a top grade knight like myself."
 
     # Giulio joins you!
     window hide
@@ -112,26 +114,18 @@ label SQ00001_prologue:
         renpy.hide("unit_10000000")
         _window_show(None)
 
-    scene bg forest_sunset with fade#Dissolve(0.5)
-    pause 0.2
-    show dialog_archmage at tcenter with Dissolve(0.5)
-    "Arch mage" "Oho, I see at least some students were smart enough to join forces!"
-    "Arch mage" "No doubts you have a chance at arriving to the Capital."
-    show dialog_rebel at toffscreenright with None
-    show dialog_rebel at tright
-    show dialog_archmage at tleft
-    with move
-
-    "Female Rebel" "Why don't we have a friendly spar, though? If you are impressive enough, others may want to travel with you."
 
-    "Giulio" "Hahah, you would never be able to defeat a top-tier knight like me!"
-    "Giulio" "{color=#0f0}*psst*{/color} Well, you're a Captain, so I'll leave this strategy thing to you."
 
-    "Giulio" "In case you forgot, in the battle screen, you can swipe cards down to use Spheres, or up to use skills."
-    "Giulio" "Click on End turn at the upper right corner to advance the wave. As time passes, you'll eventually be able to use the summon!"
+    #scene bg forest_sunset with fade#Dissolve(0.5)
+    pause 0.2
+    e_gg "You just focus at giving me spheres to fight. If you {color=#0f0}swipe my card down{/color}, I'll use the sphere there against these enemies."
+    e_gg "I know you cannot control much beyond that right now, but that will suffice to defeat this spearman."
+    e_gg "When you click on {color=#0f0}End turn{/color} at the upper right corner, we will fight. There are other things a mana mage can do, like summons or allowing us to use skills, but don't worry with that now."
 
-    show dialog_rebel at tcenter with move
-    "Female Rebel" "Let's do it!"
+    show dialog_giulio at prologue_left
+    show dialog_spearman at tcenter
+    with move
+    e_gg "Let's do it! It is our time to shine!"
     return
 
 ####################################################