Rewrite the first part of the first prologue

9 files changed, 37 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/game/ATTRIBUTION b/game/ATTRIBUTION
index a16b67e..c24abcf 100644
--- a/game/ATTRIBUTION
+++ b/game/ATTRIBUTION
@@ -73,8 +73,8 @@ Where relevant, you must also include a link to https://tmw2.org in your credit.
 ## DIALOG
 	gfx/dialog/0.png (-)	(-)	(-)
 	gfx/dialog/archmage.webp
-	gfx/dialog/assassinshadow.png
-	gfx/dialog/deadlyshadow.webp (Santiago Iborra)	(CC BY SA)	(Arcmage/Modified)
+	gfx/dialog/darkmana.webp (Santiago Iborra)	(CC BY SA)	(Arcmage/Modified)
+	gfx/dialog/deadlyshock.webp (Santiago Iborra)	(CC BY SA)	(Arcmage/Modified)
 	gfx/dialog/detective.webp (Sapiboong)	(Sapiboong*)	(LemmaSoftForums)
 	gfx/dialog/mentor.webp (Santiago Iborra)	(CC BY SA)	(Arcmage)
 	gfx/dialog/rebel.png
diff --git a/game/gfx/dialog/assassinshadow.png b/game/gfx/dialog/assassinshadow.png
deleted file mode 100644
index 8c1cac9..0000000
--- a/game/gfx/dialog/assassinshadow.png
+++ /dev/null
diff --git a/game/gfx/dialog/darkmana.webp b/game/gfx/dialog/darkmana.webp
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..032b007
--- /dev/null
+++ b/game/gfx/dialog/darkmana.webp
diff --git a/game/gfx/dialog/deadlyshadow.webp b/game/gfx/dialog/deadlyshadow.webp
deleted file mode 100644
index fbad313..0000000
--- a/game/gfx/dialog/deadlyshadow.webp
+++ /dev/null
diff --git a/game/gfx/dialog/deadlyshock.webp b/game/gfx/dialog/deadlyshock.webp
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..e3b5707
--- /dev/null
+++ b/game/gfx/dialog/deadlyshock.webp
diff --git a/game/gfx/dialog/detective.webp b/game/gfx/dialog/detective.webp
index cd6e53f..bd3ddf2 100644
--- a/game/gfx/dialog/detective.webp
+++ b/game/gfx/dialog/detective.webp
diff --git a/game/gui/transforms.rpy b/game/gui/transforms.rpy
index e19952b..0e2ccc4 100644
--- a/game/gui/transforms.rpy
+++ b/game/gui/transforms.rpy
@@ -93,7 +93,14 @@ transform prologue_right1:
     ypos (1824-gui.textbox_height)
 
 transform prologue_right2:
-    xalign 1.1
+    xanchor 1.0
+    xpos 1.5
+    yanchor 1.0
+    ypos (1824-gui.textbox_height)
+
+transform prologue_right2:
+    xanchor 1.0
+    xpos 1.25
     yanchor 1.0
     ypos (1824-gui.textbox_height)
 
@@ -102,6 +109,12 @@ transform prologue_center:
     yanchor 1.0
     ypos (1824-gui.textbox_height)
 
+transform prologue_left:
+    xanchor 0.0
+    xpos -0.32
+    yanchor 1.0
+    ypos (1824-gui.textbox_height)
+
 
 transform tcenter:
     xalign 0.5
diff --git a/game/script.rpy b/game/script.rpy
index 97fa919..0c82ad8 100644
--- a/game/script.rpy
+++ b/game/script.rpy
@@ -4,11 +4,6 @@
 image dialog rebel = "gfx/dialog/rebel.png"
 image banner_ = "gfx/actionarea.png"
 
-# Declare characters used by this game. The color argument colorizes the
-# name of the character.
-
-define e = Character("Player")
-
 
 # Inform you are now ingame
 label start:
diff --git a/game/story.rpy b/game/story.rpy
index 3aa985e..76ec7b4 100644
--- a/game/story.rpy
+++ b/game/story.rpy
@@ -17,6 +17,12 @@
 #     Foundation, Inc., 51 Franklin St, Fifth Floor, Boston, MA  02110-1301  USA
 ########################################################################################
 # Game Story labels
+define e = Character("Player")
+
+define e_dt = Character("???", color="#cccccc")
+define e_dtk = Character("Inspector", color="#cccccc")
+define e_ds = Character("???", color="#8e96d3")
+define e_dsk = Character("Deadly Shadow", color="#8e96d3")
 
 label SQ00001_prologue:
     python:
@@ -34,26 +40,27 @@ label SQ00001_prologue:
     centered "{cps=36}{b}Somewhere distant{/b}{/cps}"
     scene bg darklands with Dissolve(2.0)
     centered "{b}Somewhere distant{/b}\n\n{fast}{cps=36}Darklands{/cps}"
-    show dialog_detective at tcenter with Dissolve(1.0)
+    show dialog_deadlyshock at toffscreenright with None
+    show dialog_darkmana at toffscreenright with None
     window show
-    "???" "..."
-    "???" "This high peak... This dark cloud..."
-    "???" "So, these are the darklands."
-    "???" "I didn't realize they were real. If it is here..."
-    "???" "...Then there can be only one meaning. I have to report this at once!"
-    show dialog_deadlyshadow at toffscreenright with None
+    show dialog_detective at tcenter with Dissolve(1.0)
+    e_dt "..."
+    e_dt "This high peak... This eerie atmosphere... And, ugh, this smell..."
+    e_dt "So, these are the darklands."
+    e_dt "I didn't realize they were real. Or at least, I hoped so. If it is here..."
+    e_dt "...Then there can be only one meaning. I have to report this at once!"
+    e_ds "Going somewhere, darling?"
     show dialog_detective at prologue_right1
-    show dialog_deadlyshadow at prologue_right2
+    show dialog_deadlyshock at prologue_right2
     with move
-    "???" "Uh oh..."
-    show dialog_assassinshadow at toffscreenright with None
+    e_dt "Uh oh..."
 
     show dialog_detective at prologue_center
-    show dialog_deadlyshadow at tright
-    show dialog_assassinshadow at tleft
+    show dialog_deadlyshock at prologue_right2
+    show dialog_darkmana at prologue_left
     with move
-    "???" "This won't end well..."
-    "???" "But still, I cannot afford to fail this mission."
+    e_ds "Humans, always in hurry... Why don't you dance with us, darling?"
+    e_dt "I appreciate the invite, but I cannot afford to fail this mission. En garde!"
     scene black with vpunch
     stop music fadeout 2.5
     pause 1.0