Minor edits

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/news.d/99-00-news-2024-05-03.txt b/world/map/news.d/99-00-news-2024-05-03.txt
index 15b442ee..1ae8a667 100644
--- a/world/map/news.d/99-00-news-2024-05-03.txt
+++ b/world/map/news.d/99-00-news-2024-05-03.txt
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ Event had 3 parts.
     Rick Lime, a leprechaun, made an appearance.
 Tricky and mischievous fun and chaos ensued. All
 online players received their choice of Clover Top Hat,
-Leprechaun Hat, Leprechaun Head or a Rainerang (bugged
-as a melee weapon, currently).
+Leprechaun Hat, Leprechaun Head or a Rainerang (expect
+changes as it's the wrong weapon type, currently).
 
     The next day, pirates landed on Tonori Desert shores,
 but it wasn't so simple. They were coming from the past,
@@ -56,10 +56,10 @@ Event summary and follow-ups:
 We faced server related fallouts, but despite life
 giving us pressure we survived and continued with
 our 20 year anniversary anyway.
-    We had to reduce server VM specs to stay within
+    We reduced server VM specs to stay within
 budget. It's still more than enough to keep the game
 server fast. Thanks to Freeyorp for wrangling this.
-    We had to move wiki to an external resource. It's
+    We also moved the wiki to an external resource. It's
 now migrated to miraheze.org. Data migration was done
 by thorbjorn.
     We would like to thank Jak1 for providing us with
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ and Sewers.
     Rainerang (rainbow version of boomerang)
 and Leprechaun Hat
     GM Amulet added
-    Assasin set and Mana Pearl added. Assasin
+    Assassin set and Mana Pearl added. Assasin
 set got brawling bonus added. Female assasin
 mask added.
     Crozenite, gold and bromenal items added
@@ -121,8 +121,8 @@ Skel (all types), Fallen, Bee, Snail, Terranite,
 Mana Ghost, Pollet, all pirates, Reaper, Ball
 Lightning, Scythe, Slimes and mothers, Luvia,
 Tormenta, doomsday mobs, Floyd
-    Magic and punch SFX added, quest and skill-up
-SFX changed
+    Magic and punch SFX added, quest and skill-up SFX
+changed
     Lum and inma spells SFX added
     Grenadier SFX changed from bell to boom and Upmarmu
 SFX changes
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ betsanc no longer hurts delay
     Crypt > Moor
     Northern Farmsteads > West adjacent map
     Mining camp (outside) > Mining camp (inside)
-Travel prohibitions are our only punishment for deaths,
+The only punishment for death is having to walk back,
 which seems an improvement over none at all.
 
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