Batch of typo fixes and rewording.

Also minor tweaks to Helena rewards and Pylon production.

2 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/npc/015-2/guard.txt b/npc/015-2/guard.txt
index 28d505e25..2ff63ed64 100644
--- a/npc/015-2/guard.txt
+++ b/npc/015-2/guard.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //    Jesusalva
 // Description:
 //    Part of Helena's quest
-//    Gives spoilers about what Jesusalva plans in doing with Bryant
+//    Gives spoilers about what Jesusalva plans on doing with Bryant
 
 015-2,28,199,0	script	Helena's Teammate	NPC_ORC,{
     .@q=getq(HurnscaldQuest_Bandits);
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     if (.@q == 6) goto L_BanditLord;
     mesn;
     mesq lg("Welcome.");
-    mesq l("This small island is a good place to heal our wounds, and the monsters here are not threating.");
+    mesq l("This small island is a good place to rest, as the monsters here are not very threatening.");
     close;
 
 L_SilverKey:
@@ -23,13 +23,13 @@ L_SilverKey:
     getitem PiberriesInfusion, 3;
     setq HurnscaldQuest_Bandits, 6;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("I guess she sent you to kill another Bandit Lord, right? Ok, I'll give you the key for his room.");
+    mesq l("I guess she sent you to kill another Bandit Lord, right? I'll give you the key for his room.");
     next;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("It is pretty close to here. I advise you to use a good sword, and heal yourself often.");
+    mesq l("It is pretty close to this island. I advise you to use a good weapon, like a well-made sword, and heal yourself often.");
     next;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("I will give you 3 @@. Use them on this fight, or you're doomed to fail.", getitemlink(PiberriesInfusion));
+    mesq l("I gave you 3 @@. Use them in this fight, or you're doomed to fail.", getitemlink(PiberriesInfusion));
     close;
 
 L_BanditLord:
@@ -44,13 +44,13 @@ L_BanditLord:
         close;
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("...Have you ever gone there yet?");
+    mesq l("...Have you even gone there yet?");
     next;
     mesn;
     mesq l("This is not The Mana World. My name is not Bryant.");
     next;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("In fact, Bryant is my brother, and he lives in a cave, and he probably have a high level quest too, but that's not important now.");
+    mesq l("In fact, Bryant is my brother, and he lives in a cave, and he probably has a high level quest too, but that's not important now.");
     next;
     mesn;
     mesq l("Go kill the Bandit Lord!");
diff --git a/npc/015-2/lordcave.txt b/npc/015-2/lordcave.txt
index 6303b2c19..e39c4e72a 100644
--- a/npc/015-2/lordcave.txt
+++ b/npc/015-2/lordcave.txt
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ OnLordDeath:
     .@q=getq(HurnscaldQuest_Bandits);
     if (.@q == 6 && !ispcdead()) {
         setq HurnscaldQuest_Bandits, 7;
-        dispbottom l("Phew! The Bandit Lord was killed.");
+        dispbottom l("The Bandit Lord was killed. Return to Helena.");
     }
     end;
 }