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authorThe Kandiman <kandiman@kandiman.(none)>2012-04-30 09:56:26 -0400
committerJessica Tölke <jtoelke@mail.upb.de>2012-04-30 17:29:34 +0200
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Spelling and grammar corrections for Blue Sage quest.
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diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt
index e422f96a..37f6aaf1 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt
@@ -25,12 +25,12 @@ L_Progress:
L_Thank:
mes "[Arvo]";
mes "\"Good work with the slimes. This will make our task much easier.\"";
- mes "He sighs and has a careful look around.";
+ mes "He sighs and takes a careful look around.";
next;
mes "[Arvo]";
- mes "\"But it shows that Nikolai's position isn't what it used to be. There's disturbance in the great circle of our Sages and things have changed. About one year ago, Nikolai's helpers wouldn't have needed help of a mere adventurer - no offense.\"";
+ mes "\"But it shows that Nikolai's position isn't what it used to be. There's disturbance in the great circle of our Sages and things have changed. About one year ago, Nikolai's helpers wouldn't have needed the help of a mere adventurer - no offense.\"";
next;
- mes "\"But it seems we were focusing too much on researches and this lead to neglect of other duties of a Sage's household. This is dangerous in times of changes. I'm worried about the future.\"";
+ mes "\"But it appears we were focusing too much on research and this lead to neglect of other duties of a Sage's household. This is dangerous in times of changes. I'm worried about the future.\"";
goto L_Investigate;
L_Investigate:
@@ -41,27 +41,27 @@ L_Investigate:
L_Ask_Visitor:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
"I need to leave.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Helper:
menu
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"See you later.",L_Close;
L_Ask_Both:
menu
- "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
- "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+ "Can you tell me anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
+ "What's your opinion of Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
"Bye.",L_Close;
L_Visitor:
mes "[Arvo]";
- mes "\"Yes, I remember that one! I welcomed him in the libary and showed him around. But I didn't have the impression he was really listening to what I was selling, though that's hard to tell with the mask.\"";
+ mes "\"Yes, I remember that one! I welcomed him in the libary and showed him around. But I didn't have the impression he was really listening to what I was saying, though that's hard to tell with the mask.\"";
next;
- mes "\"But when I left him to look at the books on his own, he sneaked over to the workshop area. Visitors are allowed to have a look there, but only if they don't interfere with any researches and experiments. But it seems he was rather disturbing, they sent them back to the library part.\"";
+ mes "\"But when I left him to look at the books on his own, he sneaked over to the workshop area. Visitors are allowed to have a look there, but only if they don't interfere with any research and experiments. But it seems he was being rather disturbing, since they sent them back to the library part.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I tried to have a look at him after that, but when I got distracted by some newly arriving visitor he went over to the workshop again! Usually I enjoy my job, because I like talking to people, but this guy... was a pain, really.\"";
+ mes "\"I tried to keep an eye on him after that, but when I got distracted by some newly arriving visitor he went over to the workshop again! Usually I enjoy my job, because I like talking to people, but this guy... was a pain, really.\"";
if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9))
goto L_Close;
set @investigate, @investigate + 1;
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ L_Visitor:
L_Helper:
mes "[Arvo]";
- mes "\"Peetu? That's one of the high rank helpers, as far as I know he's very talented with magic and takes part in some important researches. But I don't really know about those things.\"";
+ mes "\"Peetu? That's one of the high rank helpers. As far as I know, he's very talented with magic and takes part in some important research. But I don't really know about those things.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close: