Various dialog fixes in Tulim

viz., the Kylian quest, the tombstones, and various other NPCs

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt
index b6159583..ddfddd95 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt
@@ -3,21 +3,21 @@
 001-1,43,48,0|script|Ched|113
 {
     mes "[Ched]";
-    mes "\"I'm trying to get a spell to work. It's supposed to combine two potions, but I can't seem to figure out which two those are...\"";
+    mes "\"I'm trying to get a spell to work, but I'm having some trouble.\"";
+    mes "\"It's supposed to combine two potions, but I can't seem to figure out which two to combine...\"";
     next;
     menu
-        "Well, good luck with that!", L_Done,
-        "What spell is that?", L_Next;
+        "Good luck with that.", L_Done,
+        "What spell is it?", L_Next;
 
 L_Next:
+    mes "";
     mes "[Ched]";
-    mes "\"Well, I don't know what it's called... I took it out of `Timbleweed's Advanced Transmutations.'  It seems awfully hard to cast, somehow.\"";
+    mes "\"Well, I don't remember what it's called... I took it out of 'Timbleweed's Advanced Transmutations,' but it seems awfully hard to cast.\"";
     next;
-    mes "[Ched]";
-    mes "\"Well, the invocation is `" + getspellinvocation("merge-concentration-potions") + "'. You're supposed to just hold up the potions and cast it, and then they're supposed to merge.\"";
+    mes "\"If you want to try it, the invocation is '" + getspellinvocation("merge-concentration-potions") + ".' I just can't get the hang of it though.\"";
     next;
-    mes "[Ched]";
-    mes "\"Maybe I should go back to `detect magic' until I can cast that one properly.\"";
+    mes "\"Maybe I should go back to practicing '" + getspellinvocation("detect-magic") + "' until I can cast it properly.\" %%6";
     goto L_Done;
 
 L_Done: