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-rw-r--r--npc/003-1/aidan.txt6
-rw-r--r--npc/003-1/constableperry.txt17
-rw-r--r--npc/003-1/hasan.txt27
-rw-r--r--npc/003-1/ishi.txt28
-rw-r--r--npc/003-1/lieutenantdausen.txt30
5 files changed, 55 insertions, 53 deletions
diff --git a/npc/003-1/aidan.txt b/npc/003-1/aidan.txt
index 47c7cf387..400529d84 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/aidan.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/aidan.txt
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
{
select
rif(Zeny >= 2000, l("Register")),
- rif(Zeny < 2000, l("How do I get so much money?!")),
+ rif(Zeny < 2000, l("Where do I get so much money?!")),
l("Not at the moment"),
l("Information");
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
if (getq(General_Hunter) == 0) goto L_Assign;
mes "";
goto L_Assign;
- close; // Will never be reach.
+ close; // Will never be reached.
L_Weak:
mesn;
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ L_Register:
mesq l("The alliance also have a special program, called ##BGrand Hunter Quest##b, where you kill 10,000 of a monster and get great rewards.");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("You can gain rares, even. Come register for this special program. It's free!");
+ mesq l("You can gain rare treasures, even. Come register for this special program. It's free!");
if (askyesno() == ASK_YES) {
GHQUEST=1;
setarray GHMEMO, 0, 0, 0;
diff --git a/npc/003-1/constableperry.txt b/npc/003-1/constableperry.txt
index 9eb9b292c..610809534 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/constableperry.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/constableperry.txt
@@ -15,21 +15,20 @@ L_Intro:
next;
mesq l("Yes, I am a mouboo. Why? Can't a mouboo be a law and order enforcer?!");
next;
- mesq l("Have you ever felt struck? Lost? Didn't know about a quest, or an item is troubling you?");
- mesq l("Have no idea where in the world you are? Or what a certain mob drops, or even if you should challenge it?");
+ mesq l("Have you ever felt stuck? Lost? Didn't know about a quest, or an item is troubling you?");
+ mesq l("Have no idea where in the world you are? Or what a certain foe drops, or if you should even dare to challenge it?");
next;
mesn;
mesq l("Fear not! You can check our [@@https://wiki.moubootaurlegends.org|Wiki@@] to find that and other awesome stuff!");
- //mesq l("Fear not! You can check our [@@https://gitlab.com/TMW2/Docs/wikis/home|Wiki@@] to find that and other awesome stuff!");
mesc l("(To see the rules, use ##B@rules##b.)");
next;
mesq l("You can even join the project there. Contributors are greatly appreciated! %%N");
close;
L_Quest:
- // Quest Requeriment of 48 hours or idle before speaking for 60 min
+ // Quest Requirement of 48 hours or idle before speaking for 60 min
if (AFKING < 57600 && checkidle() < 3600) {
- npctalkonce l("What's that? He seems to be AFK but is not?");
+ npctalkonce l("What's that? They seem to be AFK but are not?");
if (.@touchevent)
end;
else
@@ -38,10 +37,10 @@ L_Quest:
// No warning given
if (!@afkbotwarned) {
mesn;
- mesq l("Stop right there, meliant. I can see you're AFK, it is written in your hat!");
+ mesq l("Stop right there, miscreant. I can see you're AFK, it is written on your hat!");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("Moving while AFK is botting! I'll send you to a %s if you move while AFK! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!", b(l("cold, hard, iron cell")));
+ mesq l("Moving while AFK is botting! I'll send you to a %s if you move while AFK! ##BYOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!##b", b(l("cold, bleak and isolated cell")));
@afkbotwarned=true;
close;
}
@@ -52,7 +51,7 @@ L_Quest:
L_NowYouHaveDoneIt:
mesn;
- mesq l("NOW YOU HAVE DONE IT! By the powers to me vested as a Constable and Game Master, I sentence you to HALF HOUR IN A %s!", b(strtoupper(l("cold, hard, iron cell"))));
+ mesq l("##BNOW YOU HAVE DONE IT!##b By the powers to me vested as a Constable and Game Master, I sentence you to HALF AN HOUR IN A %s!", b(strtoupper(l("cold, bleak and isolated cell"))));
next;
mesn;
mesq l("Do you have any last wishes before being JAILED for your CRIMES?!");
@@ -81,7 +80,7 @@ L_NowYouHaveDoneIt:
getitem Blanket, 1;
setq1 FrostiaQuest_AFKCap, 3;
} else {
- mesq l("This is not the first time you're arrested for AFK botting, so, NO!");
+ mesq l("This is not the first time you've been arrested for AFK botting, so, ##BNO!##b");
}
break;
case 5:
diff --git a/npc/003-1/hasan.txt b/npc/003-1/hasan.txt
index 11df5e8ce..08d9cacdb 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/hasan.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/hasan.txt
@@ -2,20 +2,20 @@
// Author:
// Jesusalva
// Description:
-// Hasan is the city bully and steals the player. He lost his father to a Murderer
-// Scorpion. Will respect player if they kill one. His mother is Sorfina, whom
-// explains this and cries that he never touched a Soul Menhir. Allowing player
-// to kill scorpion on Mahoud's Basement.
+// Hasan is the city bully and steals from the player. He lost his father to a Murderer
+// Scorpion. Will respect player if they kill one. His mother is Sorfina, who
+// explains this and cries that he never touched a Soul Menhir. Allows the player
+// to kill the scorpion on Mahoud's Basement.
//
// Player must report theft first to Dausen, who will tell the player that's
-// normal and nobody messes with Hasan, and giving player pointer that he should
+// normal and nobody messes with Hasan, and giving player a pointer that they should
// tell his mother, Sorfina.
//
-// Reward: Cotton Short, Hasan won't steal you anymore.
+// Reward: Cotton Short, Hasan won't steal from you anymore.
//
// GETQ1 Variable Value;
-// 0 - Never stolen by Hasan
-// 1 - Already stolen by Hasan
+// 0 - Hasan has never stolen from the player
+// 1 - Hasan already stole from the player
// 2 - Dausen pointed player to Sorfina
// 3 - Sorfina unlocked Mahoud's Basement
// 4 - Player killed Murderer Scorpion
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
if (getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) == 4) goto L_Finish;
if (getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) >= 5) goto L_Complete;
mesn strcharinfo(0);
- mesq l("Give me back what you've stole, thief!");
+ mesq l("Give me back what you stole, thief!");
next;
mesn;
mesq l("I stole nothing from you. Do you have any proof?");
@@ -62,16 +62,17 @@ L_Print:
mesq l("Photoshopped. Definitely. Good luck convincing somebody with that! %%a");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("If you go to Lieutenant Dausen, he'll say that you used Gimp. Just give up.");
+ mesq l("If you go to Lieutenant Dausen, he'll say that you used GIMP. Just give up.");
close;
// TODO
L_Finish:
mesn;
- mesq l("Is that... Wait... Wow. You... Killed a murderer scorpion.");
+ // The scorpion and not a scorpion because of dramatic buildup.
+ mesq l("Is that... Wait... Wow. You... Killed the murderer scorpion.");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("I promise I'll never steal from you again. Here, take this shorts.");
+ mesq l("I promise I'll never steal from you again. Here, take these shorts.");
mesq l("Good job, man!");
setq TulimsharQuest_Hasan, 5;
getitem CottonShorts, 1;
@@ -164,7 +165,7 @@ OnTouch:
end;
L_Steal:
- npctalkonce(l("*whistle*"));
+ npctalkonce(l("*whistles*"));
if (getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) == 0) goto L_DoSteal;
if (getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) <= 4 && rand(0,100) < 20) goto L_DoSteal;
end;
diff --git a/npc/003-1/ishi.txt b/npc/003-1/ishi.txt
index 5f1dbb99f..797f0b424 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/ishi.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/ishi.txt
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
// Crazyfefe
// Jesusalva
//
-// Do not add void items to array.
-// note : the rare item system suck.
+// Do not add void items to the array.
+// note: the rare item system sucks.
003-1,97,97,0 script Ishi NPC_PLAYER_ARGAES,{
@@ -14,8 +14,9 @@
close;
}
if (BaseLevel < 10) {
- dispbottom l("##1Bug abuser detected! Automatically banning!!");
- atcommand "@ban 5mn "+strcharinfo(0);
+ // TODO: make jail stuff a function and replace this with the new function
+ dispbottom l("##1You abused a bug and will be jailed. If this was done in error, you have found a bug. Contact the nearest developer if this is the case.");
+ atcommand "@jailfor 5mn "+strcharinfo(0);
end;
}
@@ -37,8 +38,8 @@
if (Mobpt < @mpq_cost)
{
mesn l("Ishi, the Rewards Master");
- mesq l("Welcome! I see you have @@ Monster Points. But that isn't enough to get items at your current level, sorry!", Mobpt);
- mesc l("I need at minimum @@ Monster Points to get items at current level.",@mpq_cost);
+ mesq l("Welcome! I see you have %d Monster Points. But that isn't enough to get items at your current level, sorry!", Mobpt);
+ mesc l("I need at minimum %d Monster Points to get items at current level.",@mpq_cost);
close;
}
@@ -99,10 +100,11 @@
}
mesn l("Ishi, the Rewards Master");
- mesq l("Welcome! I see you have @@ Monster Points. Would you like to exchange some of those for items?", Mobpt);
+ // Highlight the amount of monster points in bold for better visibility since players will probably exchange monster points a lot
+ mesq l("Welcome! I see you have ##B%d Monster Points##b. Would you like to exchange some of those for items?", Mobpt);
next;
if (@mpq_cost > 0)
- mesc l("You can get up to @@ items.", (Mobpt/@mpq_cost));
+ mesc l("You can get up to %d items.", (Mobpt/@mpq_cost));
menuint
rif(Mobpt >= @mpq_cost, "1"), 1,
@@ -174,18 +176,18 @@ L_Items:
if (.@lucked) {
mes "";
mes l("Wow!");
- mes l("I can't believe.");
- mes l("you got lucky and got a(n) @@!", getitemlink(.@reward));
+ mes l("I can't believe it.");
+ mes l("You got lucky and got a(n) %s!", getitemlink(.@reward));
mes "";
} else {
- mesq l("You received one @@!", getitemlink(.@reward));
+ mesq l("You received one %s!", getitemlink(.@reward));
}
}
close;
L_Continue:
- mesq l("You still have @@ Monster Points! Do you want more items?", Mobpt);
+ mesq l("You still have ##B%d Monster Points##b! Do you want more items?", Mobpt);
select
l("Yes"),
l("No");
@@ -205,7 +207,7 @@ L_Give_all:
.@var = Mobpt / @mpq_cost;
if (.@var > 50) { // limit to avoid lag server. Probably a bad idea.
.@var = 50;
- mes l("You have too much points. I can't allow you to take all at once right now. I'll try to give you 50, and you come back later!");
+ mes l("You have too many points. I can't allow you to take all at once right now. I'll try to give you 50, and you can come back later!");
next;
}
diff --git a/npc/003-1/lieutenantdausen.txt b/npc/003-1/lieutenantdausen.txt
index 44b410dcf..d2edf6265 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/lieutenantdausen.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/lieutenantdausen.txt
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
next;
select
rif(!.@q, l("Yes sir. I will help them.")),
- rif(getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) == 1, l("A guy named Hasan stole me!")),
+ rif(getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) == 1, l("A guy named Hasan stole from me!")),
rif (strcharinfo(2) == "Monster King", l("I'm with the Monster King.")),
l("What can you say about the monsters here?"),
l("Good bye, sir.");
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
// Hasan Quest
case 2:
setq TulimsharQuest_Hasan, 2;
- speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE, lg("Ah, Hasan... Sorry pal, afraid I can't do anything for you. Try talking to his mother Sorfina, she is on Mahoud's house, near the Inn.");
+ speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE, lg("Ah, Hasan... Sorry pal, afraid I can't do anything for you. Try talking to his mother Sorfina, she is in Mahoud's house, near the Inn.");
break;
// The Monster King guild have a special menu
case 3:
@@ -89,11 +89,11 @@ L_Reward:
next;
- speech 0x0,
- l("Wait a minute..."),
- l("The Tulimshar guards needs an freelance employee who would help us in our work. We are searching for people as you."),
- l("Take this badge, so you can get access to the guard house. You will find more work there. Bye, and good luck!");
- close;
+ speech 0x0,
+ l("Wait a minute..."),
+ l("The Tulimshar guards needs an freelance employee who would help us with our work. We are searching for people like you."),
+ l("Take this badge, so you can enter the guard house. You will find more work there. Bye, and good luck!");
+ return;
// Mob Tutorial Quest
function DausenMobTutorial {
@@ -134,10 +134,10 @@ function DausenMobTutorial {
mesq l("So. Uhm. The monsters here have varying levels of strength... I think the best way is to witness that yourself.");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("Do you see the crocs, with their claws and such? They have high defense, this means your attacks deal less damage.");
+ mesq l("Do you see the crocs, with their claws and hard shell? They have high defense, this means your attacks deal less damage.");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("They're not too dangerous, but takes a lot to kill. So, if you kill 10 of them, I'll know you're dedicated in learning which monsters are out there.");
+ mesq l("They're not too dangerous, but they can take a lot of hits. So, if you kill 10 of them, I'll know you're dedicated in learning which monsters are out there.");
next;
mesn;
mesq l("Can you do that? I'll be waiting!");
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ function DausenMobTutorial {
// Level Requeriment (same as blubs)
if (BaseLevel < 14) {
mesn;
- mesq l("There's some diversity, but you should keep aiming at helping people and killing small-fry. If you ever want a challenge, there's a Giant Maggot inside the town which will one-shot you.");
+ mesq l("There's some diversity, but you should keep aiming at helping people and killing small-fry. If you ever want a challenge, there's a Giant Maggot inside the town which can kill you in one hit.");
next;
mesn;
mesq l("Have you found Tulimshar's Secret Beach yet? Tulimshar is full of secrets. Some NPCs which only say hi may say something else depending on your level or insistence.");
@@ -158,10 +158,10 @@ function DausenMobTutorial {
// Reward
if (.@k >= 37) {
mesn;
- mesq l("Hmm, that's some progress. Nobody goes to the beach because these slimes, but it looks like this might change sometime soon.");
+ mesq l("Hmm, that's some progress. Nobody goes to the beach because of these slimes, but it looks like this might change sometime soon.");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("Also, the Inn folks said the Ducks keep bothering them, but they've noticed a small decrease lately.");
+ mesq l("Also, the Inn folks said the Ducks keep bothering them, but they've noticed a small decrease already.");
next;
mesn;
mesq l("I don't know what you did, but both the Ducks and Blubs did got scared. I thank you in the name of the city guard. Please come back later.");
@@ -176,13 +176,13 @@ function DausenMobTutorial {
mesq l("West of here is a beach. There's a secret passage to it, underground. In there you'll find slime-like creatures called Blubs.");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("Some are small, others are bigger. But they all fight togheter, so be mindful when they're in groups.");
+ mesq l("Some are small, others are bigger. But they all fight together, so be mindful when they're in groups.");
next;
mesn;
- mesq b(l("The big one without hat"))+" "+l("is your target. They spawn smaller versions of itself! Kill @@ of them and make the beach safe for tourists.", 37);
+ mesq b(l("The big one without hat"))+" "+l("is your target. They spawn smaller versions of themselves! Kill @@ of them and make the beach safe for tourists.", 37);
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("Or make yourself useful killing a Duck. They steal all Cherry Cake from the Inn and the staff is getting angry at me. It'll serve, too.");
+ mesq l("Or make yourself useful by killing some Ducks. They snatch all the Cherry Cake from the Inn and the staff is getting angry at me. It'll serve, too.");
compareandsetq TulimsharQuest_MobTutorial, 2, 3;
close;
case 4:
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