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| -rw-r--r-- | npc/010-2/sawis.txt | 29 |
1 files changed, 16 insertions, 13 deletions
diff --git a/npc/010-2/sawis.txt b/npc/010-2/sawis.txt index 314e0774f..dd18d68cc 100644 --- a/npc/010-2/sawis.txt +++ b/npc/010-2/sawis.txt @@ -4,20 +4,20 @@ // Reviewer: // Jesusalva // Description: -// craft desert shirt refert to player msawis +// craft desert shirt. Reference to player msawis // id:193 HalinarzoQuest_Sawis 010-2,138,122,0 script Sawis NPC_PLAYER,{ - .@Miner = getq(HalinarzoQuest_Sawis); + .@q = getq(HalinarzoQuest_Sawis); if (BaseLevel < 37) goto L_TooWeak; - if (.@Miner == 1) goto L_Check; - if (.@Miner == 2) goto L_Complete; + if (.@q == 1) goto L_Check; + if (.@q == 2) goto L_Complete; L_GiveTask: mesn; mesq lg("Hello, wanderer!"); next; - mesq l("No one visit me, im in peace there."); + mesq l("No one visit me, I'mm in peace there."); next; menu @@ -30,15 +30,15 @@ L_Quest: mesq l("I do some research about evolution of snake skin subject to hard sunlight."); next; mesn; - mesq l("Then i craft some new typê of stronge desert shirt, to protect user from snake and sunlight."); + mesq l("Then I craft some new type of strong desert shirt, to protect users from snakes and sunlight."); next; mesn; - mesq l("If you bring me some items, I can craft one for you and you will be my test subject."); + mesq l("If you bring me some items, I can craft one for you. You will be my test subject."); next; menu - l("Yeah sure? What do you need?"), L_Start, - l("Nah, sorry everythings good for me."), L_Quit; + l("Yeah, sure? What do you need?"), L_Start, + l("Nah, sorry, everything is good with me."), L_Quit; L_Start: setq HalinarzoQuest_Sawis, 1; @@ -98,7 +98,10 @@ L_Give: L_Complete: mesn; - mesq l("As i see, you stay alive!."); + mesq l("As I see, you stay alive!"); + next; + mesn; + mesq l("I must keep notes of this."); close; // Funnier to write than to read, but the player lied. :angel: @@ -106,13 +109,13 @@ L_Lying: mesn; mesq l("No no no, that's wrong."); next; - mesc l("You dont have all item required."); + mesc l("Actually, you could be really useful testing Snake Poison. What do you think about that?"); next; goto L_List; L_TooWeak: mesn; - mesq l("What are you doing here this place is too dangerous for you!"); + mesq l("What are you doing here? This place is too dangerous for you!"); close; OnInit: @@ -124,7 +127,7 @@ OnInit: setunitdata(.@npcId, UDT_HAIRCOLOR, 7); .sex = G_MALE; - .distance = 4; + .distance = 5; end; } |