Simplify intro scenes on Juliet

1 files changed, 3 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/npc/002-3/juliet.txt b/npc/002-3/juliet.txt
index 114022623..b598f7cfd 100644
--- a/npc/002-3/juliet.txt
+++ b/npc/002-3/juliet.txt
@@ -182,23 +182,16 @@ OnTouch:
     mesn;
     mesq l("Hi, nice to see you!");
     next;
-    mesq l("My name is Juliet, it is me who took care of you after we found you in the sea.");
-    next;
-    mesq lg("I'm glad to see you're okay.");
+    mesq l("My name is Juliet, it is me who took care of you after we found you in the sea. I'm glad to see you're okay.");
     next;
     if (getq(ShipQuests_Julia) < 2) {
-        mesq l("I'm sure that you've got some questions for me, feel free to ask them, but first I need to tell you the rules of proper social conduct on board.");
-
-        mesq l("Here they are.");
+        mesq l("I'm sure that you've got some questions for me, feel free to ask them, but first I need to tell you the rules all adventurers must respect on this world.");
         next;
 
-        narrator S_LAST_NEXT,
-            l("There is a paper with some rules written on it.");
-
         GameRules 8 | 4;
 
         mesn;
-        mesq l("Oh, and I almost forgot! Do not give the password of your room to anybody! I am the only one who has the other key and I won't ask for yours so keep it secret and try not to use the same password for any other room in the future.");
+        mesq l("Oh, and I almost forgot! Do not share passwords or pincodes, not even with staff! And do not use the same password somewhere else, they can be stolen!");
         next;
         mesn;
         mesq l("If you want to read this page again, there is a copy up on the left wall.");