Inac is pretty good, I'm surprised. Just some english corrections. ¬.¬

Also, add a Tutorial part to it.

1 files changed, 22 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/npc/003-1/inac.txt b/npc/003-1/inac.txt
index 6c41848ee..5c541ad9d 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/inac.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/inac.txt
@@ -2,7 +2,9 @@
 // Author:
 //    Saulc
 //    Jesusalva
-// Inac Give a sharp knife for 20 Piou Feathers to player over level 12, // before Tycoon give it but only bafter level 18 that was too high !
+// Inac Give a sharp knife for 20 Piou Feathers to player over level 12,
+// before Tycoon give it but only bafter level 18 that was too high !
+
 003-1,55,82,0	script	Inac	NPC_PLAYER,{
 
     .@Inac = getq(TulimsharQuest_Inac);
@@ -12,55 +14,60 @@
 
 L_GiveTask:
     mesn;
-    mesq lg("Hello, wanderer! Welcome in Tulimshar");
+    mesq lg("Hello, wanderer! Welcome to Tulimshar.");
     next;
-    mesq l("Is Nard who bring you here?");
+    mesq l("Was it Nard who brought you here?");
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Yeah Nard's Sailors saved my life and bring me there!"), L_Quest,
+        l("Yeah, Nard's sailors saved my life and brought me here!"), L_Quest,
         l("I need to go."), L_Quit;
 
 L_Quest:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Tulimshar is surrounded by strong monster, if you go out with your poor equipment, you're going to be infamous, boy.");
+    mesq l("Quite benevolent, they are. Nard likes to help anyone who works hard. Anyway, there was something important I needed to say.");
+    next;
+    mesn;
+    .@g$=lg("girl", "boy");
+    mesq l("Tulimshar is surrounded by strong monsters. If you go out with your poor equipment, you're going to be dead in no time, @@.", .@g$);
+    if (TUTORIAL) mesc l("Protip: You can use \"@monsterinfo <monster name>\" to gauge a monster strength.");
     next;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("I probably can give you a Sharp Knife! If you want to?");
+    mesq l("I probably can give you my Sharp Knife, though! If you want to help me, that is.");
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Really? It would be great!"), L_Start,
-        l("Better do this some other time..."), L_Quit;
+        l("Really? That would be great!"), L_Start,
+        l("I better do this some other time..."), L_Quit;
 
 
 L_Start:
     setq TulimsharQuest_Inac, 1;
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("If you from Candor you probably have some fluffy's yellow feathers, i use them to make pillow:");
+    mesq l("Well, if you come from Candor, you probably will have some fluffy's yellow feathers. I use them to make pillows.");
     goto L_List;
 
 L_Quit:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Have a good day then..");
+    mesq l("Have a good day, then.");
     close;
 
 L_List:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mes l("To get my knife bring me this::");
+    mes l("I can give you my knife if you bring me this:");
     mes l("@@/20 @@", countitem(PiouFeathers), getitemlink(PiouFeathers));
     close;
 
 L_Check:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Did you brought me feathers?");
+    mesq l("Did you brought me the feathers?");
     next;
     menu
-        l("Yes! Here you are"), L_Give,
+        l("Yes! Here you are."), L_Give,
         l("I forgot what you need!"), L_List,
         l("Later."), L_Quit;
 
@@ -79,11 +86,10 @@ L_Give:
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Enjoy this new weapon, Hope you're going to be successful.");
+    mesq l("Enjoy this new weapon, I hope you're successful.");
     close;
 
 L_Complete:
-
     mesn;
     mesq l("Many stories are told about this city sewers.");
     next;
@@ -109,12 +115,11 @@ L_Lying:
     next;
     mesc l("I need more feathers for a fair deal.");
     next;
-
     goto L_List;
 
 L_TooWeak:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Hello little kid, Watch Out there's maggot behind you %%a !");
+    mesq l("Hello little kid. Watch out, there's a maggot behind you %%a !");
     close;
 
 OnInit: