NPC Improvements

2 files changed, 6 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/npc/002-1/chefgado.txt b/npc/002-1/chefgado.txt
index 4c45ea0a2..6eb08d94c 100644
--- a/npc/002-1/chefgado.txt
+++ b/npc/002-1/chefgado.txt
@@ -29,10 +29,10 @@
 
 L_Knife:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("I hate sea water, it always make knifes rusty. I already have a stockpile of rusty knifes, don't even know what to do with them.");
-    if (TUTORIAL) mesc l("That indeed is true, you can see a pile of rusty knifes on the nearby table.");
+    mesq l("I hate the sea, the salty air always lets my knives rust. I already have a stockpile of rusty knives, don't even know what to do with them.");
+    if (TUTORIAL) mesc l("That indeed is true, you can see a pile of rusty knives on the nearby table.");
     if (TUTORIAL) dnext;
-    tutmes l("Unlike talking, when trying to pick objects or read signs, you should be at arms distance of them."), l("NOTE"), false;
+    tutmes l("Unlike talking, when trying to pick objects or read signs, you should be at an arms distance of them."), l("NOTE"), false;
     tutmes l("This is often 1, 2 or 3 tiles. For talking, usually 4 or 5 tiles. Shouting can be done from 12 up to 18 tiles; But as shouting is rude, most NPCs won't react to it."), l("TUTORIAL"), false;
     close;
 
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ L_Ask:
 L_Start:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Great, I need 11 @@. Remember a good food makes a good crew.",getitemlink("PiouLegs"));
+    mesq l("Great, I need 11 @@. Only good food makes a good crew.",getitemlink("PiouLegs"));
     setq ShipQuests_ChefGado, 1;
     mes "";
     menu
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ L_Start:
 L_Continue:
     setq ShipQuests_ChefGado, 1;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Do you have the @@/11 @@ I requested? Sailors are getting hungry because you!",countitem("PiouLegs"),getitemlink("PiouLegs"));
+    mesq l("Do you have the @@/11 @@ I requested? The sailors are starving because of you!",countitem("PiouLegs"),getitemlink("PiouLegs"));
     mes "";
     menu
         rif(countitem("PiouLegs") >= 11, l("Yes, take them.")), L_Reward,
diff --git a/npc/002-1/knife.txt b/npc/002-1/knife.txt
index 5628e1650..de0e90b68 100644
--- a/npc/002-1/knife.txt
+++ b/npc/002-1/knife.txt
@@ -33,6 +33,7 @@ L_Give:
     setq ShipQuests_Knife, 1;
     getitem RustyKnife, 1;
 
+    // TODO: replace keys with variables since the player may have remapped them, possibly replace the messages below with tutorial messages?
     mesn l("Narrator");
     mesc l("To open your inventory, use the F3 key or use your mouse to select it in the above menu in your client.");
     next;