Added missing spaces at the end of some scripts.

Removed some spare lines in some scripts.
Reviewed language and punctuation in several scripts.

7 files changed, 19 insertions, 21 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-1/_mobs.txt b/npc/000-1/_mobs.txt
index c67148200..78ee8f461 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/_mobs.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/_mobs.txt
@@ -1,7 +1,5 @@
 // 000-1 mobs
 
-
-
 000-1.gat,0,0,0	script	Mob000-1	-1,{
 	end;
 }
diff --git a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
index 69e6ffe98..be76f99da 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@
     mesn;

     mesq l("A sunny and hot day,");

     next;

-    mesq l("A quiet place,");

+    mesq l("a quiet place,");

     next;

-    mesq l("A ground!");

+    mesq l("a ground!");

     next;

     mesq l("I hope that answers your question.") + " " + l("Hehe!");

 

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ l_Name:
     mesn;

     mesq l("A few moments ago, I heard your conversation with Darlin.");

     next;

-    mesq l("Oh, not everything, don't worry, but your name came up twice in the conversation.");

+    mesq l("Oh, not everything, don't worry, but your name came up at least twice in the conversation.");

 

     close;

 

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ l_Who:
     mesn;

     mesq l("My name is Astapolos, Q'Muller and I joined Nard's crew a few years ago when it was just a little merchant ship.");

     next;

-    mesq l("At this time, we were selling crab's food on our old mushroom island.");

+    mesq l("At this time, we were selling crab food on our old mushroom island.");

     next;

     mesq l("And now I'm a sailor, as you can see!");

 

@@ -53,10 +53,10 @@ l_Aquada:
     mesn;

     mesq l("This is a light blue sea fruit, they're highly desired around the archipelago.");

     next;

-    mesq l("You can find them on the ocean, around some corals and sea monsters.");

+    mesq l("You can find them on the ocean, near corals and other sea beings.");

     next;

-    mesq l("Or, you could try to kill some Tortugas, or some Crocs if you're strong enough, I'm sure that they'll drop one or two @@.", getitemlink("Aquada"));

+    mesq l("Orelse, if you feel capable, you can try killing Tortugas or Crocs if you're strong enough. I'm sure they could drop one or two @@.", getitemlink("Aquada"));

 

     close;

 

-}
\ No newline at end of file
+}
diff --git a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
index eb9ebd98e..168f31cf7 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
@@ -172,4 +172,4 @@ l_DangerAround:
  

     close;

 

-}
\ No newline at end of file
+}
diff --git a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
index d381571b6..bc634a0ac 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
@@ -37,4 +37,4 @@ l_Artis:
 

     close;

 

-}
\ No newline at end of file
+}
diff --git a/npc/000-1/muller.txt b/npc/000-1/muller.txt
index 8a7502904..5106b0412 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/muller.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/muller.txt
@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@
 
     close;
 
-}
\ No newline at end of file
+}
diff --git a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
index e9e238d4c..6a1261b81 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
     menu
         g(l("You're right, it's about you."),
           l("You're right, it's about Julia.")), l_Julia,
-        l("Oh look, there is a piou behind you."), l_Piou,        
+        l("Oh look, there's a piou behind you."), l_Piou,        
         l("What is Artis?"), l_Artis,
         l("None of them?"), -;
 
@@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ l_VeryImportantNoob:
     next;
 
     mesn;
-    mesq g(l("Duty is calling me, *hic*, see you later honey."),
-           l("Duty is calling me, *hic*, see you later dude."));
+    mesq g(l("Duty calls me, *hic*, see you later honey."),
+           l("Duty calls me, *hic*, see you later dude."));
 
     close;
 
@@ -107,29 +107,29 @@ l_Piou:
     mesn;
     mesq l("Seriously?!");
     next;
-    mesq l("Hurry hurry! Need to verify his teeth!");
+    mesq l("Hurry, hurry! Need to check his teeth!");
 
     close;
 
 l_Artis:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("It's a nice place... There are some nice chicks...");
+    mesq l("This is a nice place... There are some nice chicks...");
     next;
     mesq l("The elven from the library has tilted on me a while ago, as well as Enora from the warrior guild.");
     next;
     mesq l("Oh, and Olga from the market place as well!");
     next;
-    mesq l("You should look at them once we arrive at the port, they are worth it, eheh.");
+    mesq l("You should look at them once we arrive at the port, they are worth it, hehe...");
 
     close;
 
 l_ForeverAlone:
     mes "";
     mesn "Narrator";
-    mes col(l("Silvio starts to speak with his bottle, you leave the conversation."), 9);
+    mes col(l("Silvio starts to speak to his bottle, you leave the conversation."), 9);
 
 l_Quit:
     close;
 
-}
\ No newline at end of file
+}
diff --git a/npc/000-1/tarlan.txt b/npc/000-1/tarlan.txt
index c783f7342..f9c6c8085 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/tarlan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/tarlan.txt
@@ -61,4 +61,4 @@ l_Close:
     setnpcdir 4;
     close;
 
-}
\ No newline at end of file
+}