Outline how A Night In Red will turn out

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/npc/027-1/laura.txt b/npc/027-1/laura.txt
index d66303849..646f45eb0 100644
--- a/npc/027-1/laura.txt
+++ b/npc/027-1/laura.txt
@@ -349,18 +349,30 @@ L_Tier4:
     mesq l("%s! I see you are a(n) %s here, very good!", strcharinfo(0), academicrank());
     next;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Still interested in extra credit? Now that you're a(n) %s, you can sign this perfectly normal and standard %s, and by helping us out, we'll give you the extra credit. What do you say? Not a bad deal, right?", academicrank(), b(l("Non Disclosure Agreemeent")));
+    mesq l("Still interested in extra credit? Now that you're a(n) %s, you can sign this perfectly normal and standard %s, and by helping us out, by helping ME out, you'll gain the extra credit. What do you say? Not a bad deal, right?", academicrank(), b(l("Non Disclosure Agreemeent")));
     next;
     mesc l("Sign the non-disclosure agreement?");
     if (askyesno() == ASK_NO) close;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Perfect! So now that you swore secrecy, you can now help me! Thing is... there have been... a %s!", col(l("murder"), 1));
+    mesq l("Perfect! So now that you swore secrecy, you can help me! Thing is... there was... a %s!", col(l("murder"), 1));
     next;
     mesn;
     mesq l("You have access to the storehouse now, right? Well, that's where it happened!");
     next;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("You will find a statue different from the others. It is where the game was murdered and bugs added instead! No, not really - this is just a placeholder. Not cool!");
+    mesc l("*sighs*");
+    mesq l("And obviously, Professor Volrtaw assigned me to investigate! Look at me, do I look like an investigator to you? But, he told me I could pick any student to help me! And I choose you!");
+    next;
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("Please be a pal and help me! I'll be in a dire situation if you don't! Besides, you also want the extra credit, so it is a win-win situation!");
+    next;
+    mesn;
+    mesq l("You will find a statue different from the others. It is where the game balance was murdered and bugs added instead! No, not really - this is just a placeholder. Not cool!");
+    // Reward is 550k exp for this arc (investigate, interrogate, etc)
+    // Next T5 arc will give 2 million exp points (find the PoN)
+    // Then there'll be no more arcs nor extra credits
+    // You'll gain the "Summon Princess of Night skill"
+    // And a permanent MP boost
     close;
 
 /// Core code