NPC Improvements

18 files changed, 141 insertions, 134 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt
index d13802f85..629d58ec3 100644
--- a/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt
@@ -3,6 +3,7 @@
 //    Jesusalva
 // Description:
 //    Tutorial
+// TODO: Do not hardcode keyboard keys. The player may have changed the keyboard or even mouse bindings.
 
 000-0-0,30,34,0	script	Elmo#sailors	NPC_ELMO,{
 OnBegin:
@@ -98,23 +99,23 @@ L_Step3:
     setcamnpc;
     showavatar NPC_ELMO;
     mesn "Elmo";
-    mesq l("You learn fast, good job. These clothes aren't a mighty armor, but they'll help.");
+    mesq l("You learn fast, good job. These clothes aren't mighty armor, but they'll help.");
     next;
     mesn "Elmo";
-    mesq l("Let's jump straight to action, shall we? I'll spawn a mighty @@ to fight you!", getmonsterlink(Dummy));
+    mesq l("Let's jump straight to action, shall we? I'll build a mighty @@ to fight you!", getmonsterlink(Dummy));
     next;
     mesn "Elmo";
     mesq l("On a computer, you can press @@ to attack it. On mobile, that would be the big button with the number 1.", b(l("Ctrl")));
     next;
     mesn "Elmo";
-    mesq l("Another way to attack it is clicking on it. Now, there are some things you must know before fighting this dangerous creature!");
+    mesq l("Another way to attack it is clicking on it. Now, there are some things you must know before fighting this truly dangerous foe!");
     next;
     showavatar NPC_MAGIC_ARPAN;
     mesn l("Magic Arpan");
-    mesq l("Yayaya, by pressing @@ or clicking in @@, you'll open your char status window!", b(l("F2")), b(l("STA")));
+    mesq l("Yayaya, by pressing @@ or clicking in @@, you'll open your character status window!", b(l("F2")), b(l("STA")));
     next;
     mesn l("Magic Arpan");
-    mesq l("You should allocate some attributes to it. You need @@, @@ and @@, on this order of importance.", b(l("Agility")), b(l("Dexterity")), b(l("Strength"))); // b(l("")),
+    mesq l("You should allocate some attributes. You need @@, @@ and @@, on this order of importance.", b(l("Agility")), b(l("Dexterity")), b(l("Strength"))); // b(l("")),
     next;
     mesn l("Magic Arpan");
     mesq l("Once you allocate status points, you can fight it! Good luck, @@!", strcharinfo(0));
@@ -140,24 +141,24 @@ L_Step4:
     percentheal 100,100;
     mesn "Elmo";
     mesq l("Did something happen?");
-    mesc l("This is a menu, click on the option and then on send. You can use arrow keys if you prefer.");
+    mesc l("This is a menu, click on the option and then on submit. You can use arrow keys if you prefer.");
     mes "";
     select
         l(">.< \"The Dummy is a real killer!\""),
         l("T.T \"Someone else killed my Dummy!\""),
-        l("'.' \"I forgot how to allocate status!\""),
+        l("'.' \"I forgot how to allocate points!\""),
         l("-.- \"I forgot how to fight!\""),
-        l("._. \"What are these status useful for?\""),
+        l("._. \"What are these statuses useful for?\""),
         l("^.^ \"Nothing is wrong, don't worry!\"");
 
     mes "";
     switch (@menu) {
         case 1:
             mesn "Elmo";
-            mesq l("Well, you clearly don't have a weapon. So, let me explain some quick.");
+            mesq l("Well, you don't have a weapon. So, let me explain quickly.");
             next;
             mesn "Elmo";
-            mesq l("Don't be afraid of death. Of course, in most places, dying will reduce your Experience.");
+            mesq l("Don't be afraid of death. Of course, in most places, dying will make you lose some Experience you gathered.");
             next;
             mesn "Elmo";
             mesq l("But you don't have any experience at the moment, so what do you have to lose?");
@@ -166,7 +167,7 @@ L_Step4:
             mesq l("Try killing it, and if it kills you, just come back from death to continue killing it.");
             mes l("What I want to say is: Kill non-stop!");
             next;
-            mesc l("Actually, the Dummy don't fight back. Are you afraid?");
+            mesc l("Actually, the Dummy will not fight back. Are you afraid?");
             break;
         case 2:
             .@mct=mobcount("000-0-0", "Elmo#sailors::OnStep4");
@@ -213,7 +214,7 @@ L_Step4:
             mes l("Your @@ determines several small things, including critical attacks and, limited to a certain extent, affect drop rates.", b(l("luck")));
             next;
             mesn "Elmo";
-            mes l("But to defeat this dummy, I would say that %s should do the trick.", b(l("assigning 5 points to str, agi, dex and luck")));
+            mes l("But to defeat this dummy, I would say that %s should do the trick.", b(l("assigning 5 points each to str, agi, dex and luck")));
             break;
     }
     close;
@@ -256,7 +257,7 @@ L_Skip:
 
 L_Ready:
     #TUTORIAL_DONE=true;
-    //clearitem(); // The dummy don't drop anything :>
+    //clearitem(); // The dummy does not drop anything :>
     resetlvl(2);
     restorecam;
     setq General_Narrator, 0;
@@ -273,12 +274,12 @@ L_Ready:
 // Prevent players from forgetting what they were meant to do
 // But if they logout, this will never trigger
 OnSlow:
-    npctalk3 l("Hey @@! You haven't clicked on me yet!", strcharinfo(0));
+    npctalk3 l("Hey @@! You haven't talked to me yet!", strcharinfo(0));
     addtimer(30000,"Elmo#sailors::OnSlow2");
     end;
 
 OnSlow2:
-    npctalk3 l("@@, do you need help? Are you lost? Click me!", strcharinfo(0));
+    npctalk3 l("@@, do you need help? Are you lost? Talk to me!", strcharinfo(0));
     dispbottom l("Click on Elmo or Magic Arpan to continue and begin the game...");
     addtimer(60000,"Elmo#sailors::OnSlow");
     end;
diff --git a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
index 3a315b107..2e3c00821 100644
--- a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
@@ -28,13 +28,14 @@ OnTouch:
     if ($EVENT$ == "Steam") goto L_FiresOfSteam;
 
     mesn "Narrator";
-    mesc l("You open your eyes. The salt water is not helping your vision.");
+    mesc l("You open your eyes. The remants of the salt water in your eyes is not particularly helping you see.");
     mesc l("(Click next button to advance dialogs)"), 3;
     next;
     mesc l("What in the world is happening?! Where in Jesusalva's name are you?!");
     next;
-    mesc l("Actually. Who are you again? A headache which doesn't wants to pass strikes you.");
-    mesc l("And on the meanwhile, ships sailors are shouting at you.");
+    mesc l("Actually. Who are you again? A headache which doesn't want to pass strikes you.");
+    mesc l("You can hear creaking planks and a sail flapping in the storm. A ship?");
+    mesc l("You hear shouting directed at you. Sailors from the ship?");
     next;
 
     showavatar NPC_ORC_MAN;
@@ -53,7 +54,7 @@ OnTouch:
     setcamnpc "Sailors", 144, -80;
     mesn l("Tritan Voice");
     mesq l("We speak various languages on this world. Let's try gesturing!");
-    mesq l("Hey, you on the stranded island! Can you hear us?!");
+    mesq l("Hey, you on the dune! Can you hear us?!");
     next;
     restorecam;
 
@@ -67,13 +68,13 @@ OnTouch:
     next;
     showavatar NPC_TRITAN_MAN_SAILOR;
     setcamnpc "Sailors", 144, -80;
-    mesq lg("This girl needs help, we need to rescue her!", "This guy needs help, we need to rescue him!");
+    mesq lg("This girl needs help, we need to rescue her!", "This boy needs help, we need to rescue him!");
     next;
     mesn;
     mesc l("This is a menu. You can click on the desired option and press \"Send\", and double-clicking should work, too.");
     mes "";
     select
-        l("I don't need a rescue. I'm enjoying myself here."),
+        l("I don't need to be rescued. I'm enjoying myself here."),
         l("Thanks... I guess..."),
         l("(Don't respond)");
     mes "";
@@ -83,7 +84,8 @@ OnTouch:
         mesq l("What do you mean? Do you at least have a rowboat with you?!");
         next;
         mesn l("Billy Bons");
-        mesq l("We can't let you die from hunger! That wouldn't be cool at all! And I'm very cool!");
+        // Dying of thirst will set in waaaay sooner than dying of hunger.
+        mesq l("We can't let you die of thirst! That wouldn't be cool at all! And I'm very cool!");
         next;
     } else if (@menu == 2) {
         mes ""; // You don't need to thank us!
diff --git a/npc/002-1/chefgado.txt b/npc/002-1/chefgado.txt
index 4c45ea0a2..6eb08d94c 100644
--- a/npc/002-1/chefgado.txt
+++ b/npc/002-1/chefgado.txt
@@ -29,10 +29,10 @@
 
 L_Knife:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("I hate sea water, it always make knifes rusty. I already have a stockpile of rusty knifes, don't even know what to do with them.");
-    if (TUTORIAL) mesc l("That indeed is true, you can see a pile of rusty knifes on the nearby table.");
+    mesq l("I hate the sea, the salty air always lets my knives rust. I already have a stockpile of rusty knives, don't even know what to do with them.");
+    if (TUTORIAL) mesc l("That indeed is true, you can see a pile of rusty knives on the nearby table.");
     if (TUTORIAL) dnext;
-    tutmes l("Unlike talking, when trying to pick objects or read signs, you should be at arms distance of them."), l("NOTE"), false;
+    tutmes l("Unlike talking, when trying to pick objects or read signs, you should be at an arms distance of them."), l("NOTE"), false;
     tutmes l("This is often 1, 2 or 3 tiles. For talking, usually 4 or 5 tiles. Shouting can be done from 12 up to 18 tiles; But as shouting is rude, most NPCs won't react to it."), l("TUTORIAL"), false;
     close;
 
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ L_Ask:
 L_Start:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Great, I need 11 @@. Remember a good food makes a good crew.",getitemlink("PiouLegs"));
+    mesq l("Great, I need 11 @@. Only good food makes a good crew.",getitemlink("PiouLegs"));
     setq ShipQuests_ChefGado, 1;
     mes "";
     menu
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ L_Start:
 L_Continue:
     setq ShipQuests_ChefGado, 1;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Do you have the @@/11 @@ I requested? Sailors are getting hungry because you!",countitem("PiouLegs"),getitemlink("PiouLegs"));
+    mesq l("Do you have the @@/11 @@ I requested? The sailors are starving because of you!",countitem("PiouLegs"),getitemlink("PiouLegs"));
     mes "";
     menu
         rif(countitem("PiouLegs") >= 11, l("Yes, take them.")), L_Reward,
diff --git a/npc/002-1/knife.txt b/npc/002-1/knife.txt
index 5628e1650..de0e90b68 100644
--- a/npc/002-1/knife.txt
+++ b/npc/002-1/knife.txt
@@ -33,6 +33,7 @@ L_Give:
     setq ShipQuests_Knife, 1;
     getitem RustyKnife, 1;
 
+    // TODO: replace keys with variables since the player may have remapped them, possibly replace the messages below with tutorial messages?
     mesn l("Narrator");
     mesc l("To open your inventory, use the F3 key or use your mouse to select it in the above menu in your client.");
     next;
diff --git a/npc/003-0-1/professor.txt b/npc/003-0-1/professor.txt
index 0fa668d56..7a736c89d 100644
--- a/npc/003-0-1/professor.txt
+++ b/npc/003-0-1/professor.txt
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ OnSpeeching:
             if (ANCIENTLANGUAGEBOUNCER == 1) {
                 ANCIENTLANGUAGEBOUNCER=0;
                 skill TMW2_ANCIENTLANGUAGES, 1, 0;
-                dispbottom l("It was a boring speech, but you have learned ancient languages.");
+                dispbottom l("It was a boring lesson, but you have mastered Mananese.");
             }
         }
 
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ OnSpeeching:
             // were fighting instead...
             skill(TMW2_SPEECH, .@x, 0);
             AFKING+=1;
-            npctalk3 l("%s, you're a good student. You have a bright future if you keep listening to me.", strcharinfo(0));
+            npctalk3 l("%s, you're a good student. You will have a bright future if you keep studying.", strcharinfo(0));
             dispbottom l("Learning from seeing (aka. AFK-ing) skill LEVEL UP!!");
             break;
         }
diff --git a/npc/003-1/aidan.txt b/npc/003-1/aidan.txt
index 47c7cf387..400529d84 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/aidan.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/aidan.txt
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
         {
             select
             rif(Zeny >= 2000, l("Register")),
-            rif(Zeny < 2000, l("How do I get so much money?!")),
+            rif(Zeny < 2000, l("Where do I get so much money?!")),
             l("Not at the moment"),
             l("Information");
 
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
     if (getq(General_Hunter) == 0) goto L_Assign;
     mes "";
     goto L_Assign;
-    close; // Will never be reach.
+    close; // Will never be reached.
 
 L_Weak:
     mesn;
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ L_Register:
     mesq l("The alliance also have a special program, called ##BGrand Hunter Quest##b, where you kill 10,000 of a monster and get great rewards.");
     next;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("You can gain rares, even. Come register for this special program. It's free!");
+    mesq l("You can gain rare treasures, even. Come register for this special program. It's free!");
     if (askyesno() == ASK_YES) {
         GHQUEST=1;
         setarray GHMEMO, 0, 0, 0;
diff --git a/npc/003-1/constableperry.txt b/npc/003-1/constableperry.txt
index 9eb9b292c..610809534 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/constableperry.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/constableperry.txt
@@ -15,21 +15,20 @@ L_Intro:
     next;
     mesq l("Yes, I am a mouboo. Why? Can't a mouboo be a law and order enforcer?!");
     next;
-    mesq l("Have you ever felt struck? Lost? Didn't know about a quest, or an item is troubling you?");
-    mesq l("Have no idea where in the world you are? Or what a certain mob drops, or even if you should challenge it?");
+    mesq l("Have you ever felt stuck? Lost? Didn't know about a quest, or an item is troubling you?");
+    mesq l("Have no idea where in the world you are? Or what a certain foe drops, or if you should even dare to challenge it?");
     next;
     mesn;
     mesq l("Fear not! You can check our [@@https://wiki.moubootaurlegends.org|Wiki@@] to find that and other awesome stuff!");
-    //mesq l("Fear not! You can check our [@@https://gitlab.com/TMW2/Docs/wikis/home|Wiki@@] to find that and other awesome stuff!");
     mesc l("(To see the rules, use ##B@rules##b.)");
     next;
     mesq l("You can even join the project there. Contributors are greatly appreciated! %%N");
     close;
 
 L_Quest:
-    // Quest Requeriment of 48 hours or idle before speaking for 60 min
+    // Quest Requirement of 48 hours or idle before speaking for 60 min
     if (AFKING < 57600 && checkidle() < 3600) {
-        npctalkonce l("What's that? He seems to be AFK but is not?");
+        npctalkonce l("What's that? They seem to be AFK but are not?");
         if (.@touchevent)
             end;
         else
@@ -38,10 +37,10 @@ L_Quest:
     // No warning given
     if (!@afkbotwarned) {
         mesn;
-        mesq l("Stop right there, meliant. I can see you're AFK, it is written in your hat!");
+        mesq l("Stop right there, miscreant. I can see you're AFK, it is written on your hat!");
         next;
         mesn;
-        mesq l("Moving while AFK is botting! I'll send you to a %s if you move while AFK! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!", b(l("cold, hard, iron cell")));
+        mesq l("Moving while AFK is botting! I'll send you to a %s if you move while AFK! ##BYOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!##b", b(l("cold, bleak and isolated cell")));
         @afkbotwarned=true;
         close;
     }
@@ -52,7 +51,7 @@ L_Quest:
 
 L_NowYouHaveDoneIt:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("NOW YOU HAVE DONE IT! By the powers to me vested as a Constable and Game Master, I sentence you to HALF HOUR IN A %s!", b(strtoupper(l("cold, hard, iron cell"))));
+    mesq l("##BNOW YOU HAVE DONE IT!##b By the powers to me vested as a Constable and Game Master, I sentence you to HALF AN HOUR IN A %s!", b(strtoupper(l("cold, bleak and isolated cell"))));
     next;
     mesn;
     mesq l("Do you have any last wishes before being JAILED for your CRIMES?!");
@@ -81,7 +80,7 @@ L_NowYouHaveDoneIt:
                 getitem Blanket, 1;
                 setq1 FrostiaQuest_AFKCap, 3;
             } else {
-                mesq l("This is not the first time you're arrested for AFK botting, so, NO!");
+                mesq l("This is not the first time you've been arrested for AFK botting, so, ##BNO!##b");
             }
             break;
         case 5:
diff --git a/npc/003-1/hasan.txt b/npc/003-1/hasan.txt
index 11df5e8ce..08d9cacdb 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/hasan.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/hasan.txt
@@ -2,20 +2,20 @@
 // Author:
 //  Jesusalva
 // Description:
-//  Hasan is the city bully and steals the player. He lost his father to a Murderer
-//  Scorpion. Will respect player if they kill one. His mother is Sorfina, whom
-//  explains this and cries that he never touched a Soul Menhir. Allowing player
-//  to kill scorpion on Mahoud's Basement.
+//  Hasan is the city bully and steals from the player. He lost his father to a Murderer
+//  Scorpion. Will respect player if they kill one. His mother is Sorfina, who
+//  explains this and cries that he never touched a Soul Menhir. Allows the player
+//  to kill the scorpion on Mahoud's Basement.
 //
 //  Player must report theft first to Dausen, who will tell the player that's
-//  normal and nobody messes with Hasan, and giving player pointer that he should
+//  normal and nobody messes with Hasan, and giving player a pointer that they should
 //  tell his mother, Sorfina.
 //
-//  Reward: Cotton Short, Hasan won't steal you anymore.
+//  Reward: Cotton Short, Hasan won't steal from you anymore.
 //
 //  GETQ1 Variable Value;
-//  0 - Never stolen by Hasan
-//  1 - Already stolen by Hasan
+//  0 - Hasan has never stolen from the player
+//  1 - Hasan already stole from the player
 //  2 - Dausen pointed player to Sorfina
 //  3 - Sorfina unlocked Mahoud's Basement
 //  4 - Player killed Murderer Scorpion
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
     if (getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) == 4) goto L_Finish;
     if (getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) >= 5) goto L_Complete;
     mesn strcharinfo(0);
-    mesq l("Give me back what you've stole, thief!");
+    mesq l("Give me back what you stole, thief!");
     next;
     mesn;
     mesq l("I stole nothing from you. Do you have any proof?");
@@ -62,16 +62,17 @@ L_Print:
     mesq l("Photoshopped. Definitely. Good luck convincing somebody with that! %%a");
     next;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("If you go to Lieutenant Dausen, he'll say that you used Gimp. Just give up.");
+    mesq l("If you go to Lieutenant Dausen, he'll say that you used GIMP. Just give up.");
     close;
 
 // TODO
 L_Finish:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Is that... Wait... Wow. You... Killed a murderer scorpion.");
+    // The scorpion and not a scorpion because of dramatic buildup.
+    mesq l("Is that... Wait... Wow. You... Killed the murderer scorpion.");
     next;
     mesn;
-    mesq l("I promise I'll never steal from you again. Here, take this shorts.");
+    mesq l("I promise I'll never steal from you again. Here, take these shorts.");
     mesq l("Good job, man!");
     setq TulimsharQuest_Hasan, 5;
     getitem CottonShorts, 1;
@@ -164,7 +165,7 @@ OnTouch:
     end;
 
 L_Steal:
-    npctalkonce(l("*whistle*"));
+    npctalkonce(l("*whistles*"));
     if (getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) == 0) goto L_DoSteal;
     if (getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) <= 4 && rand(0,100) < 20) goto L_DoSteal;
     end;
diff --git a/npc/003-1/ishi.txt b/npc/003-1/ishi.txt
index 5f1dbb99f..797f0b424 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/ishi.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/ishi.txt
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
 // Crazyfefe
 // Jesusalva
 //
-// Do not add void items to array.
-// note : the rare item system suck.
+// Do not add void items to the array.
+// note: the rare item system sucks.
 
 003-1,97,97,0	script	Ishi	NPC_PLAYER_ARGAES,{
 
@@ -14,8 +14,9 @@
         close;
     }
     if (BaseLevel < 10) {
-        dispbottom l("##1Bug abuser detected! Automatically banning!!");
-        atcommand "@ban 5mn "+strcharinfo(0);
+        // TODO: make jail stuff a function and replace this with the new function
+        dispbottom l("##1You abused a bug and will be jailed. If this was done in error, you have found a bug. Contact the nearest developer if this is the case.");
+        atcommand "@jailfor 5mn "+strcharinfo(0);
         end;
     }
 
@@ -37,8 +38,8 @@
     if (Mobpt < @mpq_cost)
     {
         mesn l("Ishi, the Rewards Master");
-        mesq l("Welcome! I see you have @@ Monster Points. But that isn't enough to get items at your current level, sorry!", Mobpt);
-        mesc l("I need at minimum @@ Monster Points to get items at current level.",@mpq_cost);
+        mesq l("Welcome! I see you have %d Monster Points. But that isn't enough to get items at your current level, sorry!", Mobpt);
+        mesc l("I need at minimum %d Monster Points to get items at current level.",@mpq_cost);
         close;
     }
 
@@ -99,10 +100,11 @@
     }
 
     mesn l("Ishi, the Rewards Master");
-    mesq l("Welcome! I see you have @@ Monster Points. Would you like to exchange some of those for items?", Mobpt);
+    // Highlight the amount of monster points in bold for better visibility since players will probably exchange monster points a lot
+    mesq l("Welcome! I see you have ##B%d Monster Points##b. Would you like to exchange some of those for items?", Mobpt);
     next;
     if (@mpq_cost > 0)
-        mesc l("You can get up to @@ items.", (Mobpt/@mpq_cost));
+        mesc l("You can get up to %d items.", (Mobpt/@mpq_cost));
 
     menuint
         rif(Mobpt >= @mpq_cost,     "1"), 1,
@@ -174,18 +176,18 @@ L_Items:
         if (.@lucked) {
             mes "";
             mes l("Wow!");
-            mes l("I can't believe.");
-            mes l("you got lucky and got a(n) @@!", getitemlink(.@reward));
+            mes l("I can't believe it.");
+            mes l("You got lucky and got a(n) %s!", getitemlink(.@reward));
             mes "";
         } else {
-            mesq l("You received one @@!", getitemlink(.@reward));
+            mesq l("You received one %s!", getitemlink(.@reward));
         }
 
     }
     close;
 
 L_Continue:
-    mesq l("You still have @@ Monster Points! Do you want more items?", Mobpt);
+    mesq l("You still have ##B%d Monster Points##b! Do you want more items?", Mobpt);
     select
         l("Yes"),
         l("No");
@@ -205,7 +207,7 @@ L_Give_all:
     .@var = Mobpt / @mpq_cost;
     if (.@var > 50) { // limit to avoid lag server. Probably a bad idea.
         .@var = 50;
-        mes l("You have too much points. I can't allow you to take all at once right now. I'll try to give you 50, and you come back later!");
+        mes l("You have too many points. I can't allow you to take all at once right now. I'll try to give you 50, and you can come back later!");
         next;
     }
 
diff --git a/npc/003-1/lieutenantdausen.txt b/npc/003-1/lieutenantdausen.txt
index 44b410dcf..d2edf6265 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/lieutenantdausen.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/lieutenantdausen.txt
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
     next;
     select
         rif(!.@q, l("Yes sir. I will help them.")),
-        rif(getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) == 1, l("A guy named Hasan stole me!")),
+        rif(getq(TulimsharQuest_Hasan) == 1, l("A guy named Hasan stole from me!")),
         rif (strcharinfo(2) == "Monster King", l("I'm with the Monster King.")),
         l("What can you say about the monsters here?"),
         l("Good bye, sir.");
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
         // Hasan Quest
         case 2:
             setq TulimsharQuest_Hasan, 2;
-            speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE, lg("Ah, Hasan... Sorry pal, afraid I can't do anything for you. Try talking to his mother Sorfina, she is on Mahoud's house, near the Inn.");
+            speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE, lg("Ah, Hasan... Sorry pal, afraid I can't do anything for you. Try talking to his mother Sorfina, she is in Mahoud's house, near the Inn.");
             break;
         // The Monster King guild have a special menu
         case 3:
@@ -89,11 +89,11 @@ L_Reward:
 
     next;
 
-    speech 0x0,
-        l("Wait a minute..."),
-        l("The Tulimshar guards needs an freelance employee who would help us in our work. We are searching for people as you."),
-        l("Take this badge, so you can get access to the guard house. You will find more work there. Bye, and good luck!");
-    close;
+        speech 0x0,
+            l("Wait a minute..."),
+            l("The Tulimshar guards needs an freelance employee who would help us with our work. We are searching for people like you."),
+            l("Take this badge, so you can enter the guard house. You will find more work there. Bye, and good luck!");
+    return;
 
 // Mob Tutorial Quest
 function DausenMobTutorial {
@@ -134,10 +134,10 @@ function DausenMobTutorial {
         mesq l("So. Uhm. The monsters here have varying levels of strength... I think the best way is to witness that yourself.");
         next;
         mesn;
-        mesq l("Do you see the crocs, with their claws and such? They have high defense, this means your attacks deal less damage.");
+        mesq l("Do you see the crocs, with their claws and hard shell? They have high defense, this means your attacks deal less damage.");
         next;
         mesn;
-        mesq l("They're not too dangerous, but takes a lot to kill. So, if you kill 10 of them, I'll know you're dedicated in learning which monsters are out there.");
+        mesq l("They're not too dangerous, but they can take a lot of hits. So, if you kill 10 of them, I'll know you're dedicated in learning which monsters are out there.");
         next;
         mesn;
         mesq l("Can you do that? I'll be waiting!");
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ function DausenMobTutorial {
         // Level Requeriment (same as blubs)
         if (BaseLevel < 14) {
             mesn;
-            mesq l("There's some diversity, but you should keep aiming at helping people and killing small-fry. If you ever want a challenge, there's a Giant Maggot inside the town which will one-shot you.");
+            mesq l("There's some diversity, but you should keep aiming at helping people and killing small-fry. If you ever want a challenge, there's a Giant Maggot inside the town which can kill you in one hit.");
             next;
             mesn;
             mesq l("Have you found Tulimshar's Secret Beach yet? Tulimshar is full of secrets. Some NPCs which only say hi may say something else depending on your level or insistence.");
@@ -158,10 +158,10 @@ function DausenMobTutorial {
         // Reward
         if (.@k >= 37) {
             mesn;
-            mesq l("Hmm, that's some progress. Nobody goes to the beach because these slimes, but it looks like this might change sometime soon.");
+            mesq l("Hmm, that's some progress. Nobody goes to the beach because of these slimes, but it looks like this might change sometime soon.");
             next;
             mesn;
-            mesq l("Also, the Inn folks said the Ducks keep bothering them, but they've noticed a small decrease lately.");
+            mesq l("Also, the Inn folks said the Ducks keep bothering them, but they've noticed a small decrease already.");
             next;
             mesn;
             mesq l("I don't know what you did, but both the Ducks and Blubs did got scared. I thank you in the name of the city guard. Please come back later.");
@@ -176,13 +176,13 @@ function DausenMobTutorial {
         mesq l("West of here is a beach. There's a secret passage to it, underground. In there you'll find slime-like creatures called Blubs.");
         next;
         mesn;
-        mesq l("Some are small, others are bigger. But they all fight togheter, so be mindful when they're in groups.");
+        mesq l("Some are small, others are bigger. But they all fight together, so be mindful when they're in groups.");
         next;
         mesn;
-        mesq b(l("The big one without hat"))+" "+l("is your target. They spawn smaller versions of itself! Kill @@ of them and make the beach safe for tourists.", 37);
+        mesq b(l("The big one without hat"))+" "+l("is your target. They spawn smaller versions of themselves! Kill @@ of them and make the beach safe for tourists.", 37);
         next;
         mesn;
-        mesq l("Or make yourself useful killing a Duck. They steal all Cherry Cake from the Inn and the staff is getting angry at me. It'll serve, too.");
+        mesq l("Or make yourself useful by killing some Ducks. They snatch all the Cherry Cake from the Inn and the staff is getting angry at me. It'll serve, too.");
         compareandsetq TulimsharQuest_MobTutorial, 2, 3;
         close;
     case 4:
diff --git a/npc/014-2/mouboo.txt b/npc/014-2/mouboo.txt
index 2ed7f1b83..303310551 100644
--- a/npc/014-2/mouboo.txt
+++ b/npc/014-2/mouboo.txt
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
 L_Begin:
     .@q=getq(HurnscaldQuest_InjuriedMouboo);
     .@q2=getq2(HurnscaldQuest_InjuriedMouboo);
-    mesn l("Injuried Mouboo");
+    mesn l("Injured Mouboo");
     mesq l("Booo....");
     mesc l("The Mouboo seems to be lying in pain.");
     next;
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ L_Begin:
     switch (@menu) {
         case 3:
             mesc l("The Mouboo is lying down on the grass.");
-            mesc l("There doesn't seems to be any physical wound.");
+            mesc l("There doesn't seem to be any physical wound.");
             mesc l("A closer inspection suggests this mouboo has been... CURSED.");
             if (.@q == 0)
                 setq HurnscaldQuest_InjuriedMouboo, 1, 100;
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ L_Begin:
 
             // If ID is invalid, there's not enough items, it is bound = Cannot bury
             if (.@id < 1) {
-                mesc l("You are not using a weapon for a merciful (?) last blow.");
+                mesc l("You are not using a weapon for a merciful last blow.");
                 close;
             }
 
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ L_Begin:
             next;
             if (askyesno() == ASK_YES) {
                 .@atk=getiteminfo(.@id, ITEMINFO_ATK);
-                mesn l("Injuried Mouboo");
+                mesn l("Injured Mouboo");
                 if (.@q2 < 20)
                     mesq l("Re-ref... Reflect.");
                 else
@@ -187,19 +187,19 @@ L_Healed:
         mesc l("Give a @@ to the Mouboo?", getitemlink(Coffee));
         next;
         if (askyesno() == ASK_YES) {
-            mesn l("Injuried Mouboo");
-            mesc l("*scream*");
+            mesn l("Injured Mouboo");
+            mesc l("*screams*");
             mes "";
-            mesc l("The Mouboo doesn't wants to drink the Coffee. Try to force him to drink anyway?");
+            mesc l("The Mouboo doesn't want to drink the Coffee. Try to force it to drink anyway?");
             next;
             if (askyesno() == ASK_YES) {
                 delitem Coffee, 1;
-                mesc l("There's no change in the Mouboo condition.");
+                mesc l("There's no change in the condition of the poor Mouboo.");
                 next;
-                mesc l("Maybe Hurnscald alchemist, Wyara, could explain why.");
+                mesc l("Maybe the Hurnscald alchemist, Wyara, could explain why.");
             } else {
-                mesc l("Coffee is good, why the Mouboo don't want it?");
-                mesc l("Maybe someone in Hurnscald can help me?");
+                mesc l("Coffee is good, why does the Mouboo refuse to drink it?");
+                mesc l("Maybe someone in Hurnscald can help me.");
             }
         }
     }
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ L_Uncursed:
     close;
 
 L_Killed:
-    mesc l("Did this Mouboo just blinked? No, I made sure to kill it. Must have been my imagination.");
+    mesc l("Did this Mouboo just blink? No, I made sure it was truly dead. Must have been my imagination.");
     close;
 
 OnInit:
diff --git a/npc/functions/captcha.txt b/npc/functions/captcha.txt
index 9b69ad422..30e8b3c7a 100644
--- a/npc/functions/captcha.txt
+++ b/npc/functions/captcha.txt
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ function	script	CaptchVal	{
 
 function	script	CaptchExample	{
     if (!CAPTCHA_TIME || getarg(0, false)) {
-        dispbottom("##1TO REPLY TO CAPTCHAS: @capcha <numeric answer>##1");
+        dispbottom("##1TO REPLY TO CAPTCHAS: @captcha <numeric answer>##1");
         dispbottom l("Example: Give the answer for the following: one+1");
         dispbottom l("Reply: %s", b("@captcha 2"));
         dispbottom b(l("This example will not be shown again."));
@@ -105,19 +105,19 @@ OnCall:
         dispbottom l("CAPTCHA: An error happened, try again."); end;}
 
     // Verify answer
-	.@ans$ = implode(.@atcmd_parameters$, " ");
+    .@ans$ = implode(.@atcmd_parameters$, " ");
     .@ans=atoi(.@ans$);
     if (.@ans == CAPTCHA_ANSWER) {
         CAPTCHA_OK=gettimetick(2)+.cooldown;
         $@BOTCHECK_TARGET=0;
         dispbottom any(
-                        l("captcha successful"),
-                        l("captcha ok"),
-                        l("correct"),
-                        l("understood"),
-                        l("not bad"),
-                        l("hmpf. That'll do."),
-                        l("a bit longer and I would have jailed you %%\\ "),
+                        l("Captcha successful"),
+                        l("Captcha ok"),
+                        l("Correct"),
+                        l("Understood"),
+                        l("Not bad"),
+                        l("Hmpf. That'll do."),
+                        l("A bit longer and I would have jailed you %%\\ "),
                         l("%%\\ that'll do."),
                         l("%%N"));
         dispbottom l("Remember: Players can also help enforcing no-AFK-bot rule!");
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ OnTimer5000:
             // 2. Player must be jailed, and we continue
             if (CAPTCHA_TIME < CAPTCHA_OK) {
                 atcommand("@jailfor 40mn "+strcharinfo(0));
-                dispbottom l("You failed to reply captcha in time and was arrested for AFK Botting. You can use @jailtime to keep track of time left.");
+                dispbottom l("You failed to reply to the captcha in time and were arrested for AFK Botting. You can use @jailtime to keep track of time left.");
                 CAPTCHA_OK=CAPTCHA_TIME;
                 detachrid();
                 continue;
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ function captchaProbe {
     // Timer expired? Ban hammer
     if (CAPTCHA_TIME+.thr > gettimetick(2) && CAPTCHA_OK <= CAPTCHA_TIME) {
         atcommand("@jailfor 30mn "+strcharinfo(0));
-        dispbottom l("You failed to reply captcha in time and was arrested for AFK Botting. You can use @jailtime to keep track of time left.");
+        dispbottom l("You failed to reply to the captcha in time and were arrested for AFK Botting. You can use @jailtime to keep track of time left.");
         CaptchExample(true);
         $@BOTCHECK_TARGET=false;
         CAPTCHA_OK=CAPTCHA_TIME;
diff --git a/npc/functions/daily.txt b/npc/functions/daily.txt
index 5b75c801f..522d14a07 100644
--- a/npc/functions/daily.txt
+++ b/npc/functions/daily.txt
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ function	script	daily_login_bonus_handler	{
         } else if (#LOGIN_STREAK > 27) {
             getitem StrangeCoin, 2;
             getitem CasinoCoins, 1;
-            dispbottom l("##2 @@ Days login bonus: ##B2x @@, 1x @@##b", #LOGIN_STREAK, getitemlink(StrangeCoin), getitemlink(CasinoCoins));
+            dispbottom l("##2 %d Days login bonus: ##B2x %s, 1x %s##b", #LOGIN_STREAK, getitemlink(StrangeCoin), getitemlink(CasinoCoins));
         } else if (#LOGIN_STREAK == 27) {
             #LOGIN_ALLTIME+=1;
             .@am=1;
@@ -102,37 +102,37 @@ function	script	daily_login_bonus_handler	{
 
             if (.@am)
                 getitem .@prize, .@am;
-            dispbottom l("##2 27 Days login bonus: ##B1x @@##b", getitemlink(.@prize));
+            dispbottom l("##2 27 Days login bonus: ##B1x %s##b", getitemlink(.@prize));
         } else if (#LOGIN_STREAK == 21) {
             getitem BronzeGift, 1;
-            dispbottom l("##2 21 Days login bonus: ##B1x @@##b", getitemlink(BronzeGift));
+            dispbottom l("##2 21 Days login bonus: ##B1x %s##b", getitemlink(BronzeGift));
         } else if (#LOGIN_STREAK == 14) {
             getitem BronzeGift, 1;
-            dispbottom l("##2 14 Days login bonus: ##B1x @@##b", getitemlink(BronzeGift));
+            dispbottom l("##2 14 Days login bonus: ##B1x %s##b", getitemlink(BronzeGift));
         } else if (#LOGIN_STREAK == 7) {
             getitem StrangeCoin, 3;
-            dispbottom l("##2 7 Days login bonus: ##B3x @@##b", getitemlink(StrangeCoin));
+            dispbottom l("##2 7 Days login bonus: ##B3x %s##b", getitemlink(StrangeCoin));
         } else if (#LOGIN_STREAK == 3) {
             getitem StrangeCoin, 1;
-            dispbottom l("##2 3 Days login bonus: ##B1x @@##b", getitemlink(StrangeCoin));
+            dispbottom l("##2 3 Days login bonus: ##B1x %s##b", getitemlink(StrangeCoin));
         } else if (#LOGIN_STREAK % 3 == 0) {
             .@value=max(20, rand2(#LOGIN_STREAK, #LOGIN_STREAK*2));
             .@value+=(BaseLevel*5/2)+rand2(JobLevel, JobLevel*7/20);
             .@value=.@value * 5 / 4; // Bonus 25%
             Zeny=Zeny+.@value;
-            dispbottom l("##2Daily login bonus: ##B@@ GP##b", .@value);
+            dispbottom l("##2Daily login bonus: ##B%d GP##b", .@value);
         } else if (#LOGIN_STREAK % 3 == 2) {
             .@value=max(5, rand2(0, (#LOGIN_STREAK/4)));
             .@value+=(BaseLevel**2);
             .@value=(.@value*3/4)+#LOGIN_STREAK; // 50% → 75%
             getexp .@value, 0;
-            dispbottom l("##2Daily login bonus: ##B@@ EXP##b", .@value);
+            dispbottom l("##2Daily login bonus: ##B%d EXP##b", .@value);
         } else {
             .@value=max(5, rand2(0, (#LOGIN_STREAK/4)));
             .@value+=(JobLevel**2);
             .@value=(.@value/2)+#LOGIN_STREAK; // 33% → 50%
             getexp 0, .@value;
-            dispbottom l("##2Daily login bonus: ##B@@ Job Exp.##b", .@value);
+            dispbottom l("##2Daily login bonus: ##B%d Job Exp.##b", .@value);
         }
 
         // Handle event login bonus
diff --git a/npc/items/croconut.txt b/npc/items/croconut.txt
index 39c420316..eececb0f7 100644
--- a/npc/items/croconut.txt
+++ b/npc/items/croconut.txt
@@ -4,13 +4,13 @@
 //    Reid
 //    Jesusalva
 // Description:
-//    Allows to cut a Croconut in multiple parts.
+//    Allows to break a Croconut into multiple parts.
 
 -	script	Croconut	NPC_HIDDEN,{
     close;
 
 OnUse:
-    mesc l("Do you want to cut this @@?", getitemlink(Croconut));
+    mesc l("Do you want to break open this %s?", getitemlink(Croconut));
 
     select
         l("Yes."),
@@ -40,12 +40,13 @@ L_Weapon:
     }
 
 L_TooWeak:
+    // Croconuts do not heal much. So opening them without fail should be possible at relatively low strength levels.
     .@q = rand2(5);
-    if (readparam2(bStr) > 30)
+    if (readparam2(bStr) > 10)
         .@q = .@q + 1;
-    if (readparam2(bStr) > 60)
+    if (readparam2(bStr) > 25)
         .@q = .@q + 1;
-    if (readparam2(bStr) > 90)
+    if (readparam2(bStr) > 35)
         .@q = .@q + 1;
 
     if (.@q == 0) goto L_TooWeakLost;
@@ -54,23 +55,23 @@ L_TooWeak:
     if ( (.@q > 6) ) goto L_Good;
 
 L_TooWeakLost:
-    dispbottom l("Ops! You destroyed your @@.", getitemlink(Croconut));
+    dispbottom l("Oops! You destroyed your %s.", getitemlink(Croconut));
     close;
 
 L_TooWeakFail:
-    dispbottom l("Well... you did not succeed in opening this @@.", getitemlink(Croconut));
+    dispbottom l("Well... you did not succeed in opening this %s.", getitemlink(Croconut));
 
     getitem Croconut, 1;
     close;
 
 L_Weak:
-    dispbottom l("You opened the @@ in two parts, but you crushed one of them.", getitemlink(Croconut));
+    dispbottom l("You broke the %s into two parts, but you crushed one of them.", getitemlink(Croconut));
 
     getitem HalfCroconut, 1;
     close;
 
 L_Good:
-     dispbottom l("You perfectly cut your @@ into two edible parts.", getitemlink(Croconut));
+     dispbottom l("You perfectly cut your %s into two edible parts.", getitemlink(Croconut));
 
     getitem HalfCroconut, 2;
     close;
diff --git a/npc/items/emptybox.txt b/npc/items/emptybox.txt
index b49a12b6c..ec667ebdc 100644
--- a/npc/items/emptybox.txt
+++ b/npc/items/emptybox.txt
@@ -2,14 +2,14 @@
 // Authors:
 //    Jesusalva
 // Description:
-//    Allows to mount your own fish/plushroom/croconut box
+//    Allows to create your own fish/plushroom/croconut box
 
 -	script	Empty Box#it	NPC_HIDDEN,{
     close;
 
 OnUse:
     mesn;
-    mesc l("You can fill this box with the following:");
+    mesc l("You can fill this box with the following items:");
     mesc l("- @@ @@", 7, getitemlink(GrassCarp));
     mesc l("- @@ @@", 8, getitemlink(Croconut));
     mesc l("- @@ @@", 20, getitemlink(CommonCarp));
diff --git a/npc/items/miscrecipes.txt b/npc/items/miscrecipes.txt
index 1dee0861f..d0df7f3aa 100644
--- a/npc/items/miscrecipes.txt
+++ b/npc/items/miscrecipes.txt
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ function	script	TerraniteBlueprint	{
     // Lucky roll (0.25%)
     if (rand2(2500) < 1) {
         getitem AncientBlueprint, 1;
-        dispbottom l("Wait a minute... This is written in Mananese! I can't read!");
+        dispbottom l("Wait a minute... This is written in Mananese! I can't read it!");
         return;
     }
 
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ function	script	LegendaryBlueprint	{
     // Unlucky roll (0.25%)
     if (rand2(2500) < 1) {
         getitem AncientBlueprint, 1;
-        dispbottom l("Wait a minute... This is written in Mananese! I can't read!");
+        dispbottom l("Wait a minute... This is written in Mananese! I can't read it!");
         return;
     }
 
diff --git a/npc/items/shovel.txt b/npc/items/shovel.txt
index 7f5132a08..947d89eec 100644
--- a/npc/items/shovel.txt
+++ b/npc/items/shovel.txt
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ function	script	shovel_scatter	{
 
 
     function Dig {
-        // First check: Did some player burried a TREASURE? O.o
+        // First check: Did some player bury some TREASURE? O.o
         getmapxy(.@map$, .@x, .@y, 0);
         for (.@i = 0; .@i < getarraysize($WorldBuriedTreasures_id); .@i++)
         {
diff --git a/npc/items/teleporter.txt b/npc/items/teleporter.txt
index d08f006c7..b7e311b85 100644
--- a/npc/items/teleporter.txt
+++ b/npc/items/teleporter.txt
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@
 
 function Cooldown {
     mesn;
-    mesc l("Successive warps cause time-space distortions and thus, are not allowed.");
-    mesc l("You can use it again in @@.", FuzzyTime(TELEPORTER_TIME));
+    mesc l("Successive warps cause time-space distortions and are thus not allowed.");
+    mesc l("You can use it again in %s.", FuzzyTime(TELEPORTER_TIME));
     getitem @itemid, 1;
     close;
 }
@@ -26,14 +26,14 @@ OnUse:
     if (TELEPORTER_TIME > gettimetick(2))
         Cooldown();
     if (BaseLevel < 20) {
-        dispbottom l("This is too powerful to you. Get level 20 before attempting to use.");
+        dispbottom l("The might contained in this curious object is too powerful. You have to be at least level 20 to harness it.");
         ReturnItem();
     }
     // TODO: Are you already at target point?
 
-    // It have at least 20% chance to break
-    // Chances begin at 100%, and lower in 0.01% each second
-    // It will never be below 15%, which happens after x seconds
+    // The chance to break is always at least 20%
+    // Begins at 100% and each second will subtract 0.01%
+    // It will never go below 15%, which happens after x seconds
     .@timet=limit(0, gettimetick(2)-TELEPORTER_TIME, 3600);
     .@prop=.@timet*2777/1000; // Make it range from 0~10000
     .@adj_breakrate=limit(1500, .@prop, 9500 );