Rewrite zegas dialouge.txt

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/npc/005-1/zegas.txt b/npc/005-1/zegas.txt
index d0b3d750c..756bbb4a4 100644
--- a/npc/005-1/zegas.txt
+++ b/npc/005-1/zegas.txt
@@ -21,16 +21,17 @@
 
 L_Weak:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Do not enter in this storehouse, the maggots there will kill you.");
+    mesq l("Please don't go inside this storehouse, it is infested with aggressive maggots.");
     close;
 
 L_Meet:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Hey do you have a second?");
+    mesq l("Excuse me! Do you have a second?");
     next;
-    mesq l("The storehouse here is overrun with house maggots.");
+    mesq l("The storehouse here is overrun with house maggots. Those little bastard are eating and destroying everything inside.");
     next;
-    mesq l("Wouldn't you know it, the bug bomb Eomie gave us is in one of the store room barrels.");
+    mesq l("Lucky as we have, professor Eomie of Tulimshar Magic Academy gave us a bug bomb to deal with them."
+            Its inside one of the store room barrels but i don't remember which is.");
     next;
     mesq l("Can you search ##Bthe barrels##b for the bug bomb and set it off when you find it?");
     setq CandorQuest_Barrel, 1;
@@ -40,12 +41,12 @@ L_Meet:
 
 L_Find:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("The storehouse is still over run with house maggots.");
+    mesq l("Excuse me! The storehouse is still over run with house maggots.");
     next;
-    mesq l("Please help me find the bug bomb Eomie gave us is in one of the store room barrels?");
+    mesq l("Please get it done quickly. The villagers livelihood is depending on this storehouse!");
     menu
-        l("Sure."),L_Start,
-        l("Maybe some other time."),L_Close;
+        l("I'll finish it in no time. Don't worry."),L_Start,
+        l("I need more times to prepare."),L_Close;
 
 L_Start:
     mesn;
@@ -101,7 +102,7 @@ L_QuestEnd:
 
 L_Thanks:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Thanks for Helping with clear out the store room!");
+    mesq l("Thank you very much! You are a great help.");
     if (!getq(CandorQuest_Chest)) {
         next;
         mesn;