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authorAlige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr>2012-07-10 12:08:55 +0200
committerAlige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr>2012-07-10 12:08:55 +0200
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Fixed the description of every single script.
-rw-r--r--npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt6
-rw-r--r--npc/000-0/sailors.txt2
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/astapolos.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/chest.txt8
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/darlin.txt8
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/fexil.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/max.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/mickael.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/muller.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/sapartan.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/shop.txt2
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/silvio.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-1/tarlan.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-0/doors.txt7
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-0/julia.txt9
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-0/note.txt5
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/alige.txt7
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt12
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/chest.txt9
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/dan.txt7
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/devis.txt2
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/hammock.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/knife.txt8
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/peter.txt38
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/q'onan.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-2/doors.txt20
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-3/box.txt16
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt2
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-3/hammock.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-3/nard.txt16
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-3/piousrocket.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt2
-rw-r--r--npc/functions/clientversion.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/functions/savepoint.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/items/croconut.txt8
-rw-r--r--npc/items/oldbook.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/items/poisonedblobime.txt7
-rw-r--r--npc/items/poisonedwater.txt9
41 files changed, 147 insertions, 135 deletions
diff --git a/npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt b/npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt
index 3d58c5111..e7743a630 100644
--- a/npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Vasily_Makarov
+// Description:
+// Sleeping and snoring NPC.
000-0-0.gat,25,22,0,1 script Q'Onan 302,{
diff --git a/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt
index d3332ff73..48497c3c7 100644
--- a/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Ablu
// Description:
-// Intro scene: Two sailors talking about how the player was found on his raft.
+// Introduction scene where two sailors talk about how the player was found on his raft.
000-0-0.gat,22,17,0,1 script Elmo 309,{
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ OnTalk:
}
000-0-0.gat,21,17,0,1 script Magic Arpan 307,{
- doevent "Elmo::OnTalk"; // Elmo will handle dialogs between both npcs
+ doevent "Elmo::OnTalk"; // Elmo will handle dialogs between both NPCs.
close;
diff --git a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
index 8853604e6..4aa633660 100644
--- a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
// Reid
// 4144
// Description:
-// Start script of Evol Online.
+// Starting script of Evol Online.
000-0.gat,23,20,0,1 script Sailors 305,6,6,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
index ce3420af0..c8666bf1e 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/astapolos.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Random NPC searching some foods on the map.
+// Random NPC searching for some food on the map.
000-1.gat,27,34,0,1 script Astapolos 107,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/chest.txt b/npc/000-1/chest.txt
index f3b8e5de7..346664be4 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/chest.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/chest.txt
@@ -1,13 +1,15 @@
// Evol scripts.
// Authors:
-// Hal9000 (Francesco Miglietta), 4144, Reid
+// Hal9000
+// 4144
+// Reid
// Description:
// An opening treasure chest.
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_TreasureChest
// Values:
-// 0: Not opened.
-// 1: Opened.
+// 0 Not opened.
+// 1 Opened.
000-1.gat,58,31,0 script Chest#1 316;2,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
index 1d1e695a1..7d7bf58ca 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/darlin.txt
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Darlin discussion from 10 meters tall mat.
+// Darlin talks from the top of the tall mast.
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_Darlin
// Values:
-// 0 Never speak
-// 1 Speak+Quest
+// 0 Does not speak
+// 1 Speak & Quest
000-1.gat,25,26,0,1 script Darlin 103,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/fexil.txt b/npc/000-1/fexil.txt
index f3f46702e..87d101a76 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/fexil.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/fexil.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Merchant.
+// Newbie merchant.
000-1.gat,83,98,0,1 script Fexil 105,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/max.txt b/npc/000-1/max.txt
index 7a9d992d0..8e8ca0d38 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/max.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/max.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Friend of Sapartan, he gives some info on how to find what Gugli asked to search.
+// Friend of Sapartan, he gives some information on how to find what Gugli asked to search.
000-1.gat,28,42,0,1 script Max 105,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
index f9ebea041..596401e03 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Mickael, a sailor which gives some information to the player.
+// Sailor who gives some informations to the player.
000-1.gat,24,32,0,1 script Mickael 106,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/muller.txt b/npc/000-1/muller.txt
index 582fde41d..2a294145d 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/muller.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/muller.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Random NPC searching some foods on the map.
+// A random NPC searching for some food on the map.
000-1.gat,23,31,0,1 script Q'Muller 104,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/sapartan.txt b/npc/000-1/sapartan.txt
index 0cbd32e60..627c7d91c 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/sapartan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/sapartan.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Friend of Max, he gives some info about Artis.
+// Friend of Max, he gives some information about Artis.
000-1.gat,29,43,0,1 script Sapartan 314,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/shop.txt b/npc/000-1/shop.txt
index 2c2fcd0a3..1a5000755 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/shop.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/shop.txt
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
// Fexil's shop bag.
diff --git a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
index 4f0b688a4..4fe8f08dd 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/silvio.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Pervert sailor which think that he is supperior at everything.
+// Pervert and arrogant sailor.
000-1.gat,42,42,0,1 script Silvio 312,{
diff --git a/npc/000-1/tarlan.txt b/npc/000-1/tarlan.txt
index 73c0be1f8..4f32acd6f 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/tarlan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/tarlan.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Sailor hitting a palm tree, and which is being hitted back by a croconut.
+// Sailor hitting a palm tree, then being struck a falling croconut.
000-1.gat,35,43,0,1 script Tarlan 315,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt b/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt
index 282d36624..a3eb23f03 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Drunken easteregg about player's past activity.
+// Drunk easteregg telling about the player's past.
000-2-0.gat,20,23,0,1 script BillyBons 311;3,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/doors.txt b/npc/000-2-0/doors.txt
index 1055a0ed8..3c8e46e4d 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-0/doors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-0/doors.txt
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
-// Reid
+// Author:
+// Reid
// Description:
-// Door NPC
-
+// Door NPC.
000-2-0.gat,20,27,0,1 script AreaNPC 0,0,0,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt
index 58c1ad8de..48320d277 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt
@@ -3,15 +3,14 @@
// Vasily_Makarov
// 4144
// Description:
-// Allow change language and some speaking
-//
-// 2 bits Array:
+// Allows to change language and talks about what happened to him.
+// 2 Bits Array:
// ShipQuests
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_Julia
// Values:
-// 0 first touch
-// 1 already touched
+// 0 First touch.
+// 1 Already touched.
000-2-0.gat,27,24,0,0 script Julia 304,2,10;5,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/note.txt b/npc/000-2-0/note.txt
index 6d5324c9c..c20f6e994 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-0/note.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-0/note.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,9 @@
// Evol scripts.
// Authors:
-// Reid, WildX
+// Reid
+// WildX
// Description:
-// Note which regroup the 6 main rules of Evol Online.
+// A small note presenting the 6 main rules of Evol Online.
000-2-0.gat,29,25,0 script Note 999;2,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/alige.txt b/npc/000-2-1/alige.txt
index 4aee0a303..c3212ddc1 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/alige.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/alige.txt
@@ -4,15 +4,14 @@
// Ablu
// Reid
// Description:
-// Hidden NPC on a ship'ground hole.
-//
+// Hidden in a ship's hole.
// 2 bits array:
// ShipQuests
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_Alige
// Values:
-// 0 first talking (before food)
-// 1 already talked
+// 0 First talking (before food).
+// 1 Already talked.
000-2-1.gat,33,32,0,1 script AligeTrigger 0,1,1,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt b/npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt
index c24cb4f31..af90979ab 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt
@@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Ablu
// Description:
-// Magic Arpan which tells new player how they came here.
+// Tells to the player how he got here.
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_Arpan
// Values:
-// 0: Have not talked to Arpan yet
-// 1: Talked to Arpan. Need to get cloths
-// 2: Got cloths
-// 3: Got cloths + equipped them
+// 0 Has not talked to Arpan yet.
+// 1 Talked to Arpan and needs to get the clothes.
+// 2 Has the clothes.
+// 3 Has and equipped the clothes.
000-2-1.gat,39,36,0,1 script LeftDoorCheck 0,0,0,{
set @q, geta2(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Arpan);
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/chest.txt b/npc/000-2-1/chest.txt
index f2be8103a..a2c7b90c5 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/chest.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/chest.txt
@@ -1,13 +1,14 @@
// Evol scripts.
// Authors:
-// 4144, Reid
+// 4144
+// Reid
// Description:
-// A box with clothes for every new player.
+// A box with clothes for new players.
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_Arpan
// Values:
-// 1: Talked to Arpan. Need to get cloths
-// 2: Got cloths
+// 1 Talked to Arpan and needs to get clothes.
+// 2 Has the clothes.
000-2-1.gat,41,37,0 script Chest#0 317;2,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt b/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt
index 750d5aaec..8b20ecd2f 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/dan.txt
@@ -1,10 +1,9 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Two kind of dialogues are stepped on this script,
-// Dan will randomly apply a random conversation and
-// an other one much directed to one of the future quest of Artis.
+// There are two kinds of dialogues in this script.
+// Dan will randomly choose between a useless sentence, and a quest in Artis.
000-2-1.gat, 22,31,0,1 script Dan 101;2,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/devis.txt b/npc/000-2-1/devis.txt
index 632de4487..2614333be 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/devis.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/devis.txt
@@ -2,6 +2,8 @@
// Authors:
// Vasily_Makarov
// Reid
+// Description:
+// Sleeping and grumbling NPC.
000-2-1.gat,22,38,0,1 script Devis 310;2,{
mesn;
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/hammock.txt b/npc/000-2-1/hammock.txt
index d05ca0637..7ec63f909 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/hammock.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/hammock.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Animated hammock of middle level of the ship.
+// Animated hammock at the mid level of the ship.
000-2-1.gat,22,27,0 script #hammock1 904,1,0{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/knife.txt b/npc/000-2-1/knife.txt
index 7b7cb33c9..37f342ca0 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/knife.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/knife.txt
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Ablu
// Description:
-// Knife on the table
+// Knife on the table.
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_Knife
// Values:
-// 0 default -> not taken
-// 1 knife taken
+// 0 Default, not taken.
+// 1 Knife taken.
000-2-1.gat,40,24,0,2 script #name 100;2,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt b/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt
index c0e7c253b..47c4c23a7 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt
@@ -6,31 +6,31 @@
// Ablu
// alastrim
// Description:
-// Rat killer NPC
+// Rat hunter.
// 4 bits array:
// ShipQuests
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_Peter
// Values:
-// 0 did not start the quest
-// 1 task given
-// 2 task given + reward expected
-// 3 task completed without reward
-// 4 asked for reward after completing it
-// 5 task done + reward given
-// "000-2-2.gat" - map with mobs
-// "$@RAT_SAILOR_HELPER$" - Name of the participant
-// "$@RAT_SAILOR_DEATHS - Number of deaths when the paticipant starts the fight
+// 0 Did not start the quest.
+// 1 Task given.
+// 2 Task given and reward expected.
+// 3 Task completed without reward.
+// 4 Asked for reward after completion of the task.
+// 5 Task done and reward given.
+// "000-2-2.gat" - map with mobs.
+// "$@RAT_SAILOR_HELPER$" - Name of the participant.
+// "$@RAT_SAILOR_DEATHS - Number of deaths when the paticipant starts the fight.
// "$@RAT_SAILOR_CONTROL" - Explanation of each index of the array:
-// [1] = Shows status of Ratto number 1 (1 is dead and 0 is alive)
-// [2] = Shows status of Ratto number 2 (1 is dead and 0 is alive)
-// [3] = Shows status of Ratto number 3 (1 is dead and 0 is alive)
-// [4] = Shows status of Ratto number 4 (1 is dead and 0 is alive)
-// [5] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 1 died
-// [6] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 2 died
-// [7] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 3 died
-// [8] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 4 died
-// [9] = Shows how many seconds passed since the player started the quest
+// [1] = Shows status of Ratto number 1 (1 is dead and 0 is alive).
+// [2] = Shows status of Ratto number 2 (1 is dead and 0 is alive).
+// [3] = Shows status of Ratto number 3 (1 is dead and 0 is alive).
+// [4] = Shows status of Ratto number 4 (1 is dead and 0 is alive).
+// [5] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 1 died.
+// [6] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 2 died.
+// [7] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 3 died.
+// [8] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 4 died.
+// [9] = Shows how many seconds passed since the player started the quest.
000-2-1.gat,61,34,0,1 script AreaNPC 0,0,1,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/q'onan.txt b/npc/000-2-1/q'onan.txt
index f581b465a..43693b098 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/q'onan.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/q'onan.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Vasily_Makarov
+// Description:
+// Sleeping and snorring NPC.
000-2-1.gat,43,38,0,1 script Q'Onan 302;2,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt b/npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt
index 470e93453..8aff9c16e 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Save locations in 000-2-1 map.
+// Saves locations in 000-2-1 map.
000-2-1.gat,30,37,0,2 script #name 900;2,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-2/doors.txt b/npc/000-2-2/doors.txt
index 325f382cb..ef9cf757a 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-2/doors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-2/doors.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
// Ablu
// alastrim
// Description:
-// Ratto killer NPC
+// Ratto killer.
000-2-2.gat,48,29,0,1 script DoorUpwards 0,0,0,{
@@ -43,15 +43,15 @@ OnTouch:
000-2-2.gat,47,30,0,1 script RattosControl 32767,{
// $@RAT_SAILOR_CONTROL array explanation:
-// [1] = Shows status of Ratto number 1 (1 is dead and 0 is alive)
-// [2] = Shows status of Ratto number 2 (1 is dead and 0 is alive)
-// [3] = Shows status of Ratto number 3 (1 is dead and 0 is alive)
-// [4] = Shows status of Ratto number 4 (1 is dead and 0 is alive)
-// [5] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 1 died
-// [6] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 2 died
-// [7] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 3 died
-// [8] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 4 died
-// [9] = Shows how many seconds passed since the player started the quest
+// [1] = Shows status of Ratto number 1 (1 is dead and 0 is alive).
+// [2] = Shows status of Ratto number 2 (1 is dead and 0 is alive).
+// [3] = Shows status of Ratto number 3 (1 is dead and 0 is alive).
+// [4] = Shows status of Ratto number 4 (1 is dead and 0 is alive).
+// [5] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 1 died.
+// [6] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 2 died.
+// [7] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 3 died.
+// [8] = Shows how many seconds passed since Ratto number 4 died.
+// [9] = Shows how many seconds passed since the player started the quest.
OnSpawn:
areamonster "000-2-2.gat",23, 19, 50, 40,"Ratto",1005,1,"RattosControl::OnRatto1Death";
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/box.txt b/npc/000-2-3/box.txt
index 1e0e984f2..5dd91f3d1 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/box.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/box.txt
@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Cap'tain Nard dialogs.
-// Nard will done the introduction by a little quest,
-// This quest is meant to teach the player how to manipulate a weapon, but also to bring some foods to the ship.
+// Captain Nard dialogs.
+// Nard does the introduction with a small quest.
+// This quest is meant to teach the player how to use a weapon,and to bring food to the ship.
// 2 bits array:
// ShipQuests
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_NardBox
// Values:
-// 0 Intro of the box and of Nard, it's displayed when the player never spoke to Nard, nor his box.
-// 1 Nard spoke and he gave you access to the outdoor of the ship.
-// 2 You complete the quest.
-// 3 You open the chest, you complete the introduction.
+// 0 Introduction of the box and Nard. This is displayed when the player never spoke to Nard or his box.
+// 1 Nard spoke and gave access to the outdoor of the ship.
+// 2 Completed the quest.
+// 3 Opened the chest and finished the introduction.
000-2-3.gat,25,24,0 script Box 102;1,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt
index 4a4231e81..f5b58ed5f 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
// Elmo's second dialog.
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/hammock.txt b/npc/000-2-3/hammock.txt
index 1afd66d81..65858e022 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/hammock.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/hammock.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Animated hammock of top level of the Ship.
+// Animated hammock at the top level of the ship.
000-2-3.gat,28,24,0,2 script #name 904,1,0{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt
index ceef7e774..c5972586a 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt
@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Cap'tain Nard dialogs.
-// Nard will done the introduction by a little quest,
-// This quest is meant to learn at the player how to manipulate a weapon, but also to bring some foods to the ship.
+// Captain Nard dialogs.
+// Nard does the introduction with a small quest.
+// This quest is meant to teach the player how to use a weapon,and to bring food to the ship.
// 2 bits array:
// ShipQuests
// Variable:
// ShipQuests_NardBox
// Values:
-// 0 Intro of the box and of Nard, it's displayed when the player never spoke to Nard, nor his box.
-// 1 Nard spoke and he gave you access to the outdoor of the ship.
-// 2 You complete the quest.
-// 3 You open the chest, you complete the introduction.
+// 0 Introduction of the box and Nard. This is displayed when the player never spoke to Nard or his box.
+// 1 Nard spoke and gave access to the outdoor of the ship.
+// 2 Completed the quest.
+// 3 Opened the chest and finished the introduction.
000-2-3.gat,25,26,0,1 script Nard 306;5,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/piousrocket.txt b/npc/000-2-3/piousrocket.txt
index 4d889e981..7dc73ee0b 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/piousrocket.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/piousrocket.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Ablu
// Description:
-// Jumping pious.
+// Jumping piou.
000-2-3.gat,27,23,4,2 script #name 308;3,{
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt b/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt
index 5533d7e00..52eba82ff 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
// Reid
// Ablu
// Description:
-// End of intro with Nard and Elmo talking about the player.
+// End of introduction with Nard and Elmo talking about the player.
000-2-3.gat,20,26,0,0 script AreaTop 0,1,0,{
diff --git a/npc/functions/clientversion.txt b/npc/functions/clientversion.txt
index 770039287..9e9eb4cd2 100644
--- a/npc/functions/clientversion.txt
+++ b/npc/functions/clientversion.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// 4144
// Description:
-// Function checking client version and report if it too old.
+// Function checking the client version and reports if it is too old.
function script CheckClientVersion {
if (getclientversion("") > 3) return;
diff --git a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt
index 5af618124..1e5e9211d 100644
--- a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt
+++ b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Add new save point location
+// Adds a new save point location.
function script SavePoint {
diff --git a/npc/items/croconut.txt b/npc/items/croconut.txt
index fe53ae9e0..427385a29 100644
--- a/npc/items/croconut.txt
+++ b/npc/items/croconut.txt
@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
// Evol scripts.
// Authors:
-// 4144, Reid
+// 4144
+// Reid
// Description:
-// Allow to cut a croconut in multiple part.
+// Allows to cut a Croconut in multiple parts.
//
-// Multiple choice possible for L_Weapon:
+// Possible choices for L_Weapon:
// rif(countitem(35xx, 1), l(getitemname("xx"))), l_Weak,
// rif(countitem(35yy, 1), l(getitemname("yy"))), l_Good,
-
000-2-1.gat,0,0,0 script Croconut 0,{
OnUse:
diff --git a/npc/items/oldbook.txt b/npc/items/oldbook.txt
index 8a50717c6..f28d30b69 100644
--- a/npc/items/oldbook.txt
+++ b/npc/items/oldbook.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
// Evol scripts.
-// Authors:
+// Author:
// Reid
// Description:
-// Read the Old Book
+// Reads the Old Book.
000-2-1.gat,0,0,1 script OldBook 0,{
diff --git a/npc/items/poisonedblobime.txt b/npc/items/poisonedblobime.txt
index 28d23bea0..e8900ac6a 100644
--- a/npc/items/poisonedblobime.txt
+++ b/npc/items/poisonedblobime.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,11 @@
// Evol scripts.
// Authors:
-// Alastrim, Vasily_Makarov, Reid
+// Alastrim
+// Vasily_Makarov
+// Reid
// Description:
-// 1/2 bad luck to be poisoned.
+// 1/2 chances to get poisoned.
+// 1/2 chances to get healed (1 HP).
function script usePoisonedBlobime {
set @temp, rand(2);
diff --git a/npc/items/poisonedwater.txt b/npc/items/poisonedwater.txt
index 66e7280f3..7722b7946 100644
--- a/npc/items/poisonedwater.txt
+++ b/npc/items/poisonedwater.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,11 @@
// Evol scripts.
// Authors:
-// Alastrim, Vasily_Makarov, Reid
-// Description:
-// Heal of 15hp and add 1/4 bad luck to be poisoned.
+// Alastrim
+// Vasily_Makarov
+// Reid
+// Description:
+// 1/4 chances to get poisoned.
+// 3/4 chances to get healed (15 HP).
function script usePoisonedWater {
set @temp, rand(4);