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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/guides/guides_umb.txt')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/guides/guides_umb.txt | 44 |
1 files changed, 14 insertions, 30 deletions
diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt b/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt index 7d35ec46b..71fc6d4d0 100644 --- a/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt +++ b/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt @@ -3,28 +3,22 @@ //===== By: ==================================================
//= Dizzy, Translated by Celest
//===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.2
+//= 1.4
//===== Compatible With: =====================================
//= eAthena 1.0 +
//===== Description: =========================================
-//=
+//= Umbala tour guide
//===== Additional Comments: =================================
//= 1.1 Fixed location command format [Lupus]
//= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]
+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]
//============================================================
-
-
-// Umbala tour guide
-//===========================================================================
umbala.gat,128,94,3 script Ricard 702,{
mes "[Ricard]";
- mes "This sure is an odd place,";
- mes "perhaps due to the fact that it hasn't been developed,";
- mes "the roads here can be very perilous.";
+ mes "This sure is an odd place, perhaps due to the fact that it hasn't been developed, and the roads here can be very perilous.";
next;
mes "[Ricard]";
- mes "Good thing i've already been here ";
- mes "for quite some time, so i know the details of the village quite well,";
+ mes "Good thing I've already been here for quite some time, so i know the details of the village quite well.";
mes "You may ask me for directions if you want.";
next;
menu "View buildings",-,"Clear indications",L_MENU_2,"Cancel",L_end1;
@@ -35,49 +29,39 @@ umbala.gat,128,94,3 script Ricard 702,{ menu "Village Chieftain's house",-,"Village Shaman's house",L_room2,"Weapon shop",L_room3,"Equipment shop",L_room4,"Bungee Jumping Spot",L_room5,"Cancel",L_end2;
mes "[Ricard]";
- mes "The chieftain lives ^FF0000here^000000,";
- mes "only he understands the languages of outsiders,";
- mes "perhaps you should see him first.";
+ mes "The chieftain lives ^FF0000here^000000, only he understands the languages of outsiders, perhaps you should see him first.";
viewpoint 1,68,251,1,0xFF0000;
close;
L_room2:
mes "[Ricard]";
- mes "The shaman is known to possess mysterious powers,";
- mes "his house would be right ^996600here^000000,";
- mes "it is said that he can manipulate the elements of the Earth easily!";
+ mes "The shaman is known to possess mysterious powers, his house would be right ^996600here^000000, it is said that he can manipulate the elements of the Earth easily!";
viewpoint 1,218,187,2,0x996600;
close;
L_room3:
mes "[Ricard]";
- mes "The weapon shop is ^009933over there^000000,";
- mes "because of threats from the outside world,";
- mes "they have been stocking up on";
- mes "all kinds of weapons.";
+ mes "The weapon shop is ^009933over there^000000, because of threats from the outside world, they have been stocking up on all kinds of weapons.";
viewpoint 1,125,155,3,0x009933;
close;
L_room4:
mes "[Ricard]";
- mes "^3333FFThat^000000 would be the equipment shop,";
- mes "they sell all types of useful equipment";
- mes "you should have a look there before continueing your travels.";
+ mes "^3333FFThat^000000 would be the equipment shop, they sell all types of useful equipment.";
+ mes "You should have a look there before continueing your travels.";
viewpoint 1,136,127,4,0x3333FF;
close;
L_room5:
mes "[Ricard]";
- mes "In Umbala there is a 'Bungee Jumping Spot' not seen anywhere else in the world";
- mes "as you can see ^66CC33over here^000000,";
- mes "you can try it out if you're feeling brave enough.";
+ mes "In Umbala there is a 'Bungee Jumping Spot' not seen anywhere else in the world as you can see ^66CC33over here^000000,";
+ mes "You can try it out if you're feeling brave enough.";
viewpoint 1,138,198,5,0x66CC33;
close;
L_end2:
mes "[Ricard]";
- mes "To remove all indications of the minimap";
- mes "come back and talk to me again.";
+ mes "To remove all indications of the minimap come back and talk to me again.";
close;
L_MENU_2:
@@ -87,7 +71,7 @@ L_MENU_2: viewpoint 2,136,127,4,0x3333FF;
viewpoint 2,138,198,5,0x66CC33;
mes "[Ricard]";
- mes "I removed all the indications,";
+ mes "I have removed all the indications.";
mes "If you still need any directions, come back and talk to me again.";
close;
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