Some typo fixes by IVBela.

git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@6015 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

1 files changed, 16 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt b/npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt
index 9b10239d6..d75f05e00 100644
--- a/npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt
+++ b/npc/quests/skills/novice_skills.txt
@@ -14,6 +14,7 @@
 //= 1.3 Fixed a Zeny exploit, made more variables clear

 //= on finishing quests. [Lupus]

 //= 1.4 Fixed exploits [Lupus]

+//= 1.4a Fixed some typos [IVBela]

 //============================================================ 

 

 

@@ -35,7 +36,7 @@ prt_in.gat,235,133,4	script	Nurse Aid	90,{
 

 	M_Yep:

 		mes "[Nurse Aid]";

-		mes "Well don't feel bad.  It can be very difficult fighting those nasty monsters in the begining.";

+		mes "Well don't feel bad.  It can be very difficult fighting those nasty monsters in the beginning.";

 		next;

 		mes "[Nurse Aid]";

 		mes "I know because I've been treating a lot people lately who have been fighting them.";

@@ -59,7 +60,7 @@ prt_in.gat,235,133,4	script	Nurse Aid	90,{
 			mes "You can get the bandage from the^0000ff 'Newbie Assistant'^000000 located on the second floor of the Castle.";

 			next;

 			mes "[Nurse Aid]";

-			mes "Once you get job level 3 and have all of the items come back and see me ok.";

+			mes "Once you get job level 3 and have all of the items come back and see me, OK?";

 			set FIRSTAID,1;

 			close;				

 

@@ -87,7 +88,7 @@ L_GetAid:
 	close;

 

 L_GotAid:

-	mes "Well hello again.  I sure hope the First Aid skill has been helpfull to you.  Make sure to continue your hard work and don't forget to rest and heal!";

+	mes "Well hello again.  I really hope the First Aid skill has been helpful to you.  Make sure to continue your hard work and don't forget to rest and heal!";

 	close;

 

 }

@@ -99,7 +100,7 @@ prt_in.gat,73,87,2	script	Bulma	98,{
 	if(BaseJob == Job_Novice) goto L_Novice;

 

 L_Other:

-	mes "Yeah... I look great.... Afterall, I'm a Knight of the Prontera Chivalry.  Kuhahahaha!";

+	mes "Yeah... I look great.... After all, I'm a Knight of the Prontera Chivalry.  Kuhahahaha!";

 	emotion e_heh;

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

@@ -110,7 +111,7 @@ L_Other:
 L_Novice:

 	if(JobLevel >= 7) goto L_Start;

 	mes "Hello my young friend.  You remind me of myself when I was young.....";

-	mes "Heh heh, I sure miss those days..... Wow... It's funny to think about those years now......";

+	mes "Heh heh, I really miss those days..... Wow... It's funny to think about those years now......";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

 	mes "They were difficult.... thankfully you can use the ^5555FFPlay Dead^000000 skill when you reach a ^5555FFjob level of 7^000000.";

@@ -120,11 +121,11 @@ L_Novice:
 L_Start:

 	if(PLAYDEAD == 1) goto L_GetSkill;

 	if(getskilllv(143)>0) goto L_GotSkill;

-	mes "Hello my young friend.  You remind me of myself when I was young..... Heh heh, I sure miss those days.....";

+	mes "Hello my young friend.  You remind me of myself when I was young..... Heh heh, I really miss those days.....";

 	mes "Look at me acting all sentimental like some old man........";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

-	mes "Sorry about that.  Anyhow, I just want you to know that if you work hard and are patient, you too will recieve the job you desire.";

+	mes "Sorry about that.  Anyhow, I just want you to know that if you work hard and are patient, you too will receive the job you desire.";

 	mes "It may take some time but stay focused and never loose your determination.";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

@@ -139,7 +140,7 @@ L_Start:
 	mes "This skill allows you to act like you just died making any monster that is currently attacking you leave you alone.";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

-	mes "I myself have used it as a novice and found it to be very usefull.";

+	mes "I myself have used it as a novice and found it to be very useful.";

 	mes "It may sound easy enough, but it takes a lot of hard work and practice to make your performance look believable.";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

@@ -177,10 +178,10 @@ L_GetSkill:
 	mes "Good to see you again.  Alright, lets start your training....";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

-	mes "Let me first introduce to you the concept of 'Method Acting'.  Method Acting stresses the need to undrestand every aspect of the role you are playing.";

+	mes "Let me first introduce to you the concept of 'Method Acting'.  Method Acting stresses the need to understand every aspect of the role you are playing.";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

-	mes "You must learn to think, feel, and even live like your character so that you can understand his/her motivation in any given momement.";

+	mes "You must learn to think, feel, and even live like your character so that you can understand his/her motivation in any given moment.";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

 	mes "Now let us use this technique to develop your ability to Play Dead!";

@@ -192,7 +193,7 @@ L_GetSkill:
 	mes "~ several hours later ~";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

-	mes "Ok, lights, camera, ACTION! Yes... yes... YES!! That's it!! As I watch you laying there I TRULLY believe that you are dead.";

+	mes "OK, lights, camera, ACTION! Yes... yes... YES!! That's it!! As I watch you laying there I TRULY believe that you are dead.";

 	mes "What a wonderful performance! BRAVO! BRAVO!";

 	emotion e_gasp;

 	next;

@@ -214,11 +215,11 @@ L_GetSkill:
 		close;

 

 L_GotSkill:

-	mes "Yeah.... I remember back then..... especially those embarrasing novice years... heh.  Luckily there was Play Dead.";

+	mes "Yeah.... I remember back then..... especially those embarrassing novice years... heh.  Luckily there was Play Dead.";

 	mes "That saved me many times in the past.  I'm sure it has been saving you too.";

 	next;

 	mes "[Bulma]";

-	mes "Hopefully it is something you have been using well.  If you have any friends who are novices, tell them about me.  I will help them out as best I can.";

+	mes "Hopefully it is something you have been using well.  If you have any friends who are novices, tell them about me.  I will help them out as good as I can.";

 	close;

 }

 

@@ -243,13 +244,13 @@ L_Aid:
 	getitem 930,1;

 	set got_bandage,1;

 	mes "[Newbie Assistant]";

-	mes "You'll need it in order for her to teach you her exellent healing technique.";

+	mes "You'll need it in order for her to teach you her excellent healing technique.";

 	next;

 	mes "[Newbie Assistant]";

 	mes "When I watch her work it is like watching an angel that has descended down from the heavens.....";

 	next;

 	mes "[Newbie Assistant]";

-	mes "Her beauty, her grace, sometimes I wish........ (blushes).......... um.... well...err... tell her I said hello.";

+	mes "Her beauty, her grace, sometimes I wish........ (blushes).......... um.... well... err... tell her I said hello.";

 	emotion e_lv;

 	close;

 L_Play: