- Fixed typo on rogue_skills.txt (bugreport:4768)

- Fixed issue on icecream.txt (bugreport:4752)
- Added missing prize on comodo_gambling.txt (bugreport:4748)
- Rescripted the iRO event scripts.
- Updated the Read Me.
- Added 2009 Novice Training Grounds.

git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@14711 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

1 files changed, 104 insertions, 258 deletions

diff --git a/npc/events/valentinesday_2009.txt b/npc/events/valentinesday_2009.txt
index 24eb24e01..a9db606aa 100644
--- a/npc/events/valentinesday_2009.txt
+++ b/npc/events/valentinesday_2009.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ==================================================
 //= Kisuka
 //===== Current Version: =====================================
-//= 1.2
+//= 1.3
 //===== Compatible With: =====================================
 //= eAthena SVN
 //===== Description: =========================================
@@ -20,6 +20,7 @@
 //===== Additional Comments: =================================
 //= 1.0 First version. [Kisuka]
 //= 1.1-1.2 Fixed exploits with unlimited rings and non deleting choco [Lupus]
+//= 1.3 Some Changes. [Kisuka]
 //============================================================
 
 // Marco Bassinio (Chocolate/Chocolate Box maker)
@@ -37,17 +38,12 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 		case 1:
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 			mes "Ahaha, my dear.";
-			mes "This chocolate is";
-			mes "nothing like others.";
-			mes "Every piece bears the";
-			mes "devotion of the person";
-			mes "who made it!";
+			mes "This chocolate is nothing like others.";
+			mes "Every piece bears the devotion of the person who made it!";
 			next;
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-			mes "So, that's why I can't sell";
-			mes "more than 5 of them at a time.";
-			mes "If you really really want more,";
-			mes "then talk to me again.";
+			mes "So, that's why I can't sell more than 5 of them at a time.";
+			mes "If you really really want more, then talk to me again.";
 			mes "How many do you want anyway?";
 			next;
 			while(.@input <= 0 || .@input > 5) {
@@ -55,29 +51,22 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 				if (.@input < 1) {
 					mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 					mes "Oh, it's such a shame!";
-					mes "I'm sure you'll miss";
-					mes "this opportunity and";
-					mes "regret you didn't buy it.";
+					mes "I'm sure you'll miss this opportunity and regret you didn't buy it.";
 					next;
 					mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-					mes "Remember, you can never";
-					mes "find this anywhere else!";
-					mes "Come back anytime,";
-					mes "when you change your mind.";
+					mes "Remember, you can never find this anywhere else!";
+					mes "Come back anytime, when you change your mind.";
 					close;
 				}
 				if (.@input > 5) {
 					mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 					mes "Ugh.. Didn't I tell you?";
 					mes "5 is the maximum!";
-					mes "I can't sell more than";
-					mes "that to the same person.";
+					mes "I can't sell more than that to the same person.";
 					next;
 					mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-					mes "And you know it's not";
-					mes "like an everyday meal.";
-					mes "Eating too much is not";
-					mes "really good for you.";
+					mes "And you know it's not like an everyday meal.";
+					mes "Eating too much is not really good for you.";
 					next;
 				}
 			}
@@ -90,60 +79,40 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 			set .@price, .@input * 5000;
 			if (Zeny < .@price) {
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "Looks like you don't have";
-				mes "enough zeny with ya.";
-				mes "Maybe you should borrow";
-				mes "some zeny from a friend.";
-				mes "Cuz, I'm not gonna";
-				mes "be here everyday.";
+				mes "Looks like you don't have enough zeny with ya.";
+				mes "Maybe you should borrow some zeny from a friend.";
+				mes "Cuz, I'm not gonna be here everyday.";
 				close;
 			}else{
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 				mes "Good for you!";
 				mes "It's also perfect as a gift!";
-				mes "You know you can't get this";
-				mes "kind of chocolate normally.";
+				mes "You know you can't get this kind of chocolate normally.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "If you want more,";
-				mes "you should come back.";
-				mes "Might be a good idea to";
-				mes "buy some more while";
-				mes "you have a chance...!";
+				mes "If you want more, you should come back.";
+				mes "Might be a good idea to buy some more while you have a chance...!";
 				set Zeny,Zeny - .@price;
 				getitem 558,.@input;
 				close;
 			}
 		case 2:
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-			mes "If you want to gift-wrap";
-			mes "the chocolate, of course,";
-			mes "you need chocolate,";
-			mes "plus, wrapping paper,";
-			mes "wrapping strap and a box.";
+			mes "If you want to gift-wrap the chocolate, of course, you need chocolate, plus, wrapping paper, wrapping strap and a box.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-			mes "You also need to pay";
-			mes "500 zeny to carve your";
-			mes "name on the box.";
+			mes "You also need to pay 500 zeny to carve your name on the box.";
 			mes "Are you all prepared...?";
 			next;
 			if(countitem(7175) < 1 || countitem(7174) < 1 || countitem(7948) < 1 || Zeny < 500) {
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "Hmm.. Looks like you don't";
-				mes "have enough materials to";
-				mes "decorate the gift box..";
-				mes "You can't just put your gift";
-				mes "into some plain looking box..";
+				mes "Hmm.. Looks like you don't have enough materials to decorate the gift box..";
+				mes "You can't just put your gift into some plain looking box..";
 				mes "Don't you think?";
 				next;
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "You need to bring some";
-				mes "wrapping paper,";
-				mes "wrapping strap, and a box.";
-				mes "Oh, also bring 500 zeny,";
-				mes "and don't forget to bring your";
-				mes "true loving heart with you!!";
+				mes "You need to bring some wrapping paper, wrapping strap, and a box.";
+				mes "Oh, also bring 500 zeny, and don't forget to bring your true loving heart with you!!";
 				close;
 			}
 			if(countitem(558) < 1) {
@@ -153,10 +122,7 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 				mes "You know I'm not an alchemist or anything.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-				mes "You're not saying that you";
-				mes "want an empty chocolate box";
-				mes "without any chocolate in it,";
-				mes "am I right?";
+				mes "You're not saying that you want an empty chocolate box without any chocolate in it, am I right?";
 				close;				
 			}
 			if (!checkweight(12744,1)) {
@@ -167,11 +133,9 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 			}
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 			mes "Here, look!";
-			mes "It's your chocolate box";
-			mes "with your name on it.";
+			mes "It's your chocolate box with your name on it.";
 			mes "Isn't it fabulous?";
-			mes "See, your name looks";
-			mes "great on the box!";
+			mes "See, your name looks great on the box!";
 			next;
 			delitem 558,1;
 			delitem 7175,1;
@@ -186,15 +150,11 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 		case 3:
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
 			mes "Oh, it's such a shame!";
-			mes "I'm sure you'll miss";
-			mes "this opportunity and";
-			mes "regret you didn't buy it.";
+			mes "I'm sure you'll miss this opportunity and regret you didn't buy it.";
 			next;
 			mes "[Marco Bassinio]";
-			mes "Remember, you can never";
-			mes "find this anywhere else!";
-			mes "Come back anytime,";
-			mes "when you change your mind.";
+			mes "Remember, you can never find this anywhere else!";
+			mes "Come back anytime, when you change your mind.";
 			close;
 	}
 }
@@ -203,9 +163,7 @@ prontera,164,174,4	script	Trader#Val09	58,{
 prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 	mes "[Packs Trader]";
 	mes "Hello.";
-	mes "I am a Packs Trader,";
-	mes "I sell paper boxes and";
-	mes "supplies for packing presents.";
+	mes "I am a Packs Trader, I sell paper boxes and supplies for packing presents.";
 	next;
 	while(1) {
 		mes "[Packs Trader]";
@@ -214,18 +172,15 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 		switch(select("Packing Paper:Packing Ribbon:Box:Cancel.")) {
 			case 1:
 				mes "[Packs Trader]";
-				mes "It's 200 zeny for";
-				mes "1 Packing Paper.";
+				mes "It's 200 zeny for 1 Packing Paper.";
 				mes "How many do you want?";
-				mes "You can't buy more";
-				mes "than 10 items at once.";
+				mes "You can't buy more than 10 items at once.";
 				next;
 				input .@input;
 				if (.@input <= 0) {
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Nothing to buy.";
-					mes "Come back when";
-					mes "you need something.";
+					mes "Come back when you need something.";
 					close;
 				}
 				if (.@input > 10) {
@@ -250,9 +205,7 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}else{
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Here they are.";
-					mes "Hope it makes your";
-					mes "Valentine's Day";
-					mes "more pleasing!";
+					mes "Hope it makes your Valentine's Day more pleasing!";
 					set Zeny,Zeny-.@price;
 					getitem 7175,.@input;
 					next;
@@ -260,18 +213,15 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}
 			case 2:
 				mes "[Packs Trader]";
-				mes "It's 200 zeny for";
-				mes "1 Packing Ribbon.";
+				mes "It's 200 zeny for 1 Packing Ribbon.";
 				mes "How many do you want?";
-				mes "You can't buy more";
-				mes "than 10 items at once.";
+				mes "You can't buy more than 10 items at once.";
 				next;
 				input .@input;
 				if (.@input <= 0) {
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Nothing to buy.";
-					mes "Come back when";
-					mes "you need something.";
+					mes "Come back when you need something.";
 					close;
 				}
 				if (.@input > 10) {
@@ -296,9 +246,7 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}else{
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Here they are.";
-					mes "Hope it makes your";
-					mes "Valentine's Day";
-					mes "more pleasing!";
+					mes "Hope it makes your Valentine's Day more pleasing!";
 					set Zeny,Zeny-.@price;
 					getitem 7174,.@input;
 					next;
@@ -306,18 +254,15 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}
 			case 3:
 				mes "[Packs Trader]";
-				mes "It's 600 zeny for";
-				mes "1 Box.";
+				mes "It's 600 zeny for 1 Box.";
 				mes "How many do you want?";
-				mes "You can't buy more";
-				mes "than 10 items at once.";
+				mes "You can't buy more than 10 items at once.";
 				next;
 				input .@input;
 				if (.@input <= 0) {
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Nothing to buy.";
-					mes "Come back when";
-					mes "you need something.";
+					mes "Come back when you need something.";
 					close;
 				}
 				if (.@input > 10) {
@@ -342,9 +287,7 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 				}else{
 					mes "[Packs Trader]";
 					mes "Here they are.";
-					mes "Hope it makes your";
-					mes "Valentine's Day";
-					mes "more pleasing!";
+					mes "Hope it makes your Valentine's Day more pleasing!";
 					set Zeny,Zeny-.@price;
 					getitem 7948,.@input;
 					next;
@@ -353,8 +296,7 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 			case 4:
 				mes "[Packs Trader]";
 				mes "Goodbye!";
-				mes "And enjoy your";
-				mes "Valentine's Day.";
+				mes "And enjoy your Valentine's Day.";
 				close;
 		}
 	}
@@ -364,102 +306,66 @@ prontera,147,171,5	script	Packs Trader#Val09	58,{
 prontera,154,185,5	script	Event Ring Maker#Val09	721,{
 	if (BaseLevel < 75) {
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "Hello, I only make the";
-		mes "Valentine rings to those";
-		mes "experienced adventurers";
-		mes "Level 75 or above.";
+		mes "Hello, I only make the Valentine rings to those experienced adventurer Level 75 or above.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "You're not fully";
-		mes "experienced yet.";
-		mes "Come back when you're";
-		mes "experienced enough to";
-		mes "handle the quests.";
+		mes "You're not fully experienced yet.";
+		mes "Come back when you're experienced enough to handle the quests.";
 		close;
 	}
 	
 	if (iROval09ring >= 1) {
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "The box with the ring,";
-		mes "carved with your name,";
-		mes "is for the one you love.";
+		mes "The box with the ring, carved with your name, is for the one you love.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "As for the rings that you";
-		mes "receive from others, they";
-		mes "should all be registered";
-		mes "with the Vote Manager.";
-		mes "She is standing near";
-		mes "the Prontera Fountain.";
+		mes "As for the rings that you receive from others, they should all be registered with the Vote Manager.";
+		mes "She is standing near the Prontera Fountain.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "Only the most popular";
-		mes "male and female are";
-		mes "subjected to getting rewards.";
-		mes "Be aware, and always";
-		mes "try to stay popular!";
+		mes "Only the most popular male and female are subjected to getting rewards.";
+		mes "Be aware, and always try to stay popular!";
 		close;
 	}
 	
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
 	mes "Hi, there, how are ya?";
-	mes "Come to me if you're";
-	mes "interested in the event,";
-	mes "'Who's Valentine's Hottest?'";
+	mes "Come to me if you're interested in the event, 'Who's Valentine's Hottest?'";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "I make the most precious";
-	mes "rings that you can give";
-	mes "to your sweethearts.";
-	mes "Those rings are very special";
-	mes "because I carve";
-	mes "your names on them!";
+	mes "I make the most precious rings that you can give to your sweethearts.";
+	mes "Those rings are very special because I carve your names on them!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
 	mes "Isn't it exciting?";
 	mes "Isn't it such a brilliant idea?";
-	mes "Give these special rings";
-	mes "to your sweethearts!";
+	mes "Give these special rings to your sweethearts!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "You should hurry 'cuz";
-	mes "this event will only";
-	mes "last for two weeks.";
-	mes "Give that special someone";
-	mes "a gift of a Valentine's ring.";
+	mes "You should hurry 'cuz this event will only last for two weeks.";
+	mes "Give that special someone a gift of a Valentine's ring.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "Remember, you can only";
-	mes "generate the ring once.";
-	mes "You also need Wrapping Paper,";
-	mes "Wrapping Strap and a Box";
-	mes "to make the ring.";
+	mes "Remember, you can only generate the ring once.";
+	mes "You also need Wrapping Paper, Wrapping Strap and a Box to make the ring.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "So you better be sure";
-	mes "of who you give this to.";
-	mes "By the way,";
-	mes "It costs 1,000 zeny.";
+	mes "So you better be sure of who you give this to.";
+	mes "By the way, It costs 1,000 zeny.";
 	mes "Would you like to make one?";
 	next;
 	if(select("Hmm.. I gotta give it a second thought...:Sure.") == 1) {
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
 		mes "Alrighty!";
-		mes "You can't put a rush";
-		mes "on such a thing like this.";
-		mes "Think about what";
-		mes "you truly want.";
+		mes "You can't put a rush on such a thing like this.";
+		mes "Think about what you truly want.";
 		mes "Just follow your heart!";
 		close;
 	}
 	if(countitem(7175) < 1 || countitem(7174) < 1 || countitem(7948) < 1 || Zeny < 1000) {
 		mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-		mes "Well, you don't have";
-		mes "enough materials";
-		mes "to make a gift box.";
-		mes "Check what you have,";
-		mes "and come back later";
-		mes "with all the materials.";
+		mes "Well, you don't have enough materials to make a gift box.";
+		mes "Check what you have, and come back later with all the materials.";
 		close;
 	}
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
@@ -477,51 +383,33 @@ prontera,154,185,5	script	Event Ring Maker#Val09	721,{
 		getnameditem 12743,strcharinfo(0);
 	}
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "Here, the most precious";
-	mes "ring in the world!";
-	mes "Don't forget, you can never";
-	mes "make this ring again.";
+	mes "Here, the most precious ring in the world!";
+	mes "Don't forget, you can never make this ring again.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "You must pick out the one";
-	mes "that you really really love,";
-	mes "and give this ring";
-	mes "to that person.";
+	mes "You must pick out the one that you really really love, and give this ring to that person.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Event Ring Maker]";
-	mes "Of course, you've got to";
-	mes "get rings from others,";
-	mes "that's the way you can";
-	mes "participate in the voting, right?";
-	mes "Challenge yourself to become";
-	mes "Valentine's Hottest!";
+	mes "Of course, you've got to get rings from others, that's the way you can participate in the voting, right?";
+	mes "Challenge yourself to become Valentine's Hottest!";
 	close;	
 }
 
 // Valentine Vote Manager (Registers votes)
 prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 	mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-	mes "Hello, I'm the Valentine's";
-	mes "Vote Manager.";
-	mes "I'm in charge of collecting";
-	mes "rings for this event!";
+	mes "Hello, I'm the Valentine's Vote Manager.";
+	mes "I'm in charge of collecting rings for this event!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-	mes "I register the rings";
-	mes "you get from others";
-	mes "and I calculate the";
-	mes "total number of rings.";
+	mes "I register the rings you get from others and I calculate the total number of rings.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-	mes "You know what I do besides";
-	mes "just counting those rings?";
-	mes "I can tell you the adventurer's";
-	mes "name who's got the";
-	mes "most number of votes.";
+	mes "You know what I do besides just counting those rings?";
+	mes "I can tell you the adventurer's name who's got the most number of votes.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-	mes "Plus, you can also find out how";
-	mes "many votes he/she got.";
+	mes "Plus, you can also find out how many votes he/she got.";
 	next;
 	while (1) {
 		mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
@@ -530,15 +418,10 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 		switch(select("Please register my rings.:Please count my votes.:Nothing, for now.")) {
 			case 1:
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-				mes "Please tell me how many";
-				mes "rings you want to register.";
+				mes "Please tell me how many rings you want to register.";
 				next;
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-				mes "When you write the";
-				mes "number of the rings,";
-				mes "the number shouldn't be";
-				mes "larger than the number of";
-				mes "rings you actually have.";
+				mes "When you write the number of the rings, the number shouldn't be larger than the number of rings you actually have.";
 				mes "'0', cancels everything.";
 				next;
 				input .@input;
@@ -569,8 +452,7 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 					}
 					
 					mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-					mes "I'll take those silver rings,";
-					mes "and count the votes for you.";
+					mes "I'll take those silver rings, and count the votes for you.";
 					mes "Thank you for participating.";
 					delitem 7947,.@input;
 					set Val09Rings,Val09Rings+.@input;
@@ -598,8 +480,7 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 					}
 					
 					mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
-					mes "I'll take those gold rings,";
-					mes "and count the votes for you.";
+					mes "I'll take those gold rings, and count the votes for you.";
 					mes "Thank you for participating.";
 					delitem 7946,.@input;
 					set Val09Rings,Val09Rings+.@input;
@@ -613,8 +494,7 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 			case 2:
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
 				mes "Let's see...";
-				mes "You have registered..";
-				mes ".."+Val09Rings+" rings so far.";
+				mes "You have registered...."+Val09Rings+" rings so far.";
 				mes "and...";
 				next;
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
@@ -629,8 +509,7 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 				mes "[Valentine Vote Manager]";
 				mes "Hey, you can be popular too!";
 				mes "Anyone can... really!";
-				mes "Though you have to try a lot";
-				mes "harder, but still~ Hahaha!";
+				mes "Though you have to try a lot harder, but still~ Hahaha!";
 				close;
 		}
 	}
@@ -640,16 +519,12 @@ prontera,157,185,4	script	Valentine Vote Manager#v	113,{
 prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 	if (Sex) {
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "Monsieur~! What brings";
-		mes "you to my beautiful atelier?";
+		mes "Monsieur~! What brings you to my beautiful atelier?";
 		mes "What is it that you want?";
-		mes "Well, my sparkling eyes";
-		mes "get dried and lose their shine";
-		mes "if not for the pretty little lady.";
+		mes "Well, my sparkling eyes get dried and lose their shine if not for the pretty little lady.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "Please leave me alone unless";
-		mes "you have business with me.";
+		mes "Please leave me alone unless you have business with me.";
 		mes "Haaaa~ I'm a busy person.";
 		mes "Don't bother me....";
 		mes "Annoying, annoying, annoying~~!";
@@ -658,11 +533,8 @@ prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 	
 	mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 	mes "Oh, Mademoiselle!";
-	mes "This little trifling space";
-	mes "felt like heaven the";
-	mes "minute you walked in!";
-	mes "Can I help you with";
-	mes "anything, if it's alright?";
+	mes "This little trifling space felt like heaven the minute you walked in!";
+	mes "Can I help you with anything, if it's alright?";
 	next;
 	if(select("Please, make me some chocolate.:Don't bother. I'm just passing by.") == 2) {
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
@@ -680,51 +552,36 @@ prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 	if(countitem(558) < 3) {
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Ahhh, Mademoiselle.";
-		mes "I'm not an alchemist,";
-		mes "or a magician.";
-		mes "I don't just make chocolate";
-		mes "out of anything.";
+		mes "I'm not an alchemist, or a magician.";
+		mes "I don't just make chocolate out of anything.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "I always think of making";
-		mes "chocolate as artistic work.";
+		mes "I always think of making chocolate as artistic work.";
 		mes "You see, I'm no ordinary cook...";
 		mes "I make chocolate with feelings..";
 		mes "messages of loving hearts..";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "I make masterpieces.";
-		mes "No one can imitate";
-		mes "the looks and the taste.";
-		mes "Yes, it's nothing like";
-		mes "ordinary chocolate!";
+		mes "No one can imitate the looks and the taste.";
+		mes "Yes, it's nothing like ordinary chocolate!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "I'm afraid I can't make it";
-		mes "and prove it to you now.";
+		mes "I'm afraid I can't make it and prove it to you now.";
 		mes "This is really a shame!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "I really want to thank";
-		mes "you for visiting me";
-		mes "and if you only bring";
-		mes "^3152ff3 Chocolates^000000,";
-		mes "I'll make you chocolate";
-		mes "like you've never seen...";
+		mes "I really want to thank you for visiting me and if you only bring ^3152ff3 Chocolates^000000, I'll make you chocolate like you've never seen...";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "never tasted before...";
-		mes "Mademoiselle, with your spirit,";
-		mes "I'm sure you can bring";
-		mes "3 pieces of chocolate.";
+		mes "Mademoiselle, with your spirit, I'm sure you can bring 3 pieces of chocolate.";
 		mes "I have no doubt at all.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "So... what do you think?";
 		mes "Can you bring ^3152ff3 Chocolates^000000?";
-		mes "I could get them myself,";
-		mes "but I'm tied up with so much";
-		mes "work as you see right now.";
+		mes "I could get them myself, but I'm tied up with so much work as you see right now.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Adios, Mademoiselle.....";
@@ -739,28 +596,20 @@ prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 		}
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Oh, Mademoiselle!";
-		mes "I'll make the best chocolate";
-		mes "with the pieces you've brought.";
-		mes "I'm going to put the light of";
-		mes "your eyes into this chocolate";
-		mes "that no one can resist.";
+		mes "I'll make the best chocolate with the pieces you've brought.";
+		mes "I'm going to put the light of your eyes into this chocolate that no one can resist.";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
-		mes "It'll be stronger than a";
-		mes "sweet sweet love potion.....";
+		mes "It'll be stronger than a sweet sweet love potion.....";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Un, Deux, Trois, Quatre.....";
-		mes "Just like the ugly duckling that";
-		mes "turned to a beautiful swan-";
-		mes "Ordinary chocolate pieces are";
-		mes "becoming a piece of art!";
+		mes "Just like the ugly duckling that turned to a beautiful swan-";
+		mes "Ordinary chocolate pieces are becoming a piece of art!";
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "They're changing!";
-		mes "They're getting warm,";
-		mes "softly changing the shape,";
-		mes "getting stronger again!";
+		mes "They're getting warm, softly changing the shape, getting stronger again!";
 		mes "Oh, is it a master piece or";
 		mes "what...!!";
 		next;
@@ -774,10 +623,7 @@ prt_castle,42,35,3	script	Dessert Manager#Val09	47,{
 		next;
 		mes "[Charles Orleans]";
 		mes "Alright. Mademoiselle,";
-		mes "I hope this is just";
-		mes "what you wanted,";
-		mes "for it bears your";
-		mes "beautiful heart inside.";
+		mes "I hope this is just what you wanted, for it bears your beautiful heart inside.";
 		close;
 	}