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diff --git a/world/map/npc/002-2/bakery.txt b/world/map/npc/002-2/bakery.txt
index 5a21678a..28a16b3a 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/002-2/bakery.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/002-2/bakery.txt
@@ -16,10 +16,9 @@
&& (countitem ("MopoxCurePotion") > 0))
goto L_lace_cupcake;
- mes "\"Would you mind bringing me 6 acorns please? I need them to make flour for the chocolate cakes. I will be so delicious!\"";
+ mes "\"Would you mind bringing me ##B6 acorns##b please? I need them to make flour so I can bake some chocolate cakes. I will be so delicious!\"";
next;
- mes "\"Um, I mean, the cakes will be delicious...\"";
- emotion EMOTE_BLUSH;
+ mes "\"Uh... I mean... the cakes will be delicious...\" %%;";
next;
set @dq_level, 15;
@@ -33,28 +32,28 @@
callfunc "DailyQuest";
next;
- mes "\"And don't forget, our bakery is the best!\"";
+ mes "\"Don't forget: our bakery is the best!\"";
close;
L_lace_chococake:
next;
menu
- "Thanks! Let me have a look around...", L_End,
+ "Thanks! Let me have a look around...", L_End,
"Can you put this potion into a Chocolate Cake?", L_Next,
"Goodbye!", L_End;
L_Next:
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "";
- mes "As you show Riskim the potion, he leans back, away from it.";
- mes "\"Ooooh, I remember that smell...\"";
- mes "\"Elanore's Mopox potion, right? She made me drink that, too...\"";
+ mes "You take the potion out and attempt to show it to Riskim, but he takes a step back.";
+ mes "\"Oh! I remember that smell...\"";
+ mes "\"Elanore's Mopox potion, right? She made me drink that too...\"";
mes "He chuckles.";
- mes "\"Yes, well, you do want to hide that somehow.\"";
+ mes "\"Yes. Well, you definitely want to hide that somehow.\"";
next;
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "";
- mes "\"We'll need extra chocolate for that one. If you can give me ten pieces of chocolate and that potion, plus 400 GP, I will bake you a special Chocolate Cake that hides the taste.\"";
+ mes "\"We'll need extra chocolate for that one. If you can give me ten pieces of chocolate, the Mopox potion, and a payment of 400 GP, I'll bake you a special Chocolate Cake that hides the taste.\"";
next;
menu
"I will get them for you.", L_End,
@@ -76,42 +75,42 @@ L_Continue:
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "";
mes "\"Please have a seat!\"";
- mes "You watch as Riskim melts the chocolate and stirs in the potion, then glazes a cake with the mixture.";
- mes "\"It's a bit more chocolatey than your average chocolate cake, of course...\"";
+ mes "You watch as Riskim melts the chocolate, stirs in the potion, and then glazes a cake with the mixture.";
+ mes "\"It's a bit more chocolaty than your average chocolate cake, so it should help mask that awful taste.\"";
next;
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "";
mes "Riskim hands you the cake.";
- mes "\"Here you are. I hope that this works.\"";
+ mes "\"Here you are! I hope this helps.\"";
close;
L_lacking_Zeny:
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "";
- mes "\"I'm sorry, but I have to charge 400 GP.\"";
+ mes "\"I'm sorry, but I have to charge 400 GP. I've got to make a living somehow.\"";
close;
L_lacking_ingredients:
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "";
- mes "\"Sorry, but I need ten Chocolate Bars AND your cure potion for this. Please come back later when you have everything.\"";
+ mes "\"Sorry, but I need both the ten Chocolate Bars and your potion for this. Please come back later when you have everything.\"";
close;
L_lace_cupcake:
next;
menu
- "Thanks! Let me have a look around...", L_End,
- "Can you put this potion into an Orange Cupcake?", L_More,
+ "Thanks! Let me have a look around...", L_End,
+ "Can mix a potion into an Orange Cupcake?", L_More,
"Goodbye!", L_End;
L_More:
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "";
- mes "\"Orange Cupcakes? Oh dear... I'm sorry, but I have a very bad orange allergy.\"";
+ mes "\"Orange Cupcakes? Oh dear... I'm sorry, but I have a very bad allergy to oranges.\"";
next;
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "";
- mes "\"Perhaps the Chef at Dimond's Cove can help you? We get all our cupcakes from him.\"";
+ mes "\"Perhaps the Chef at Dimond's Cove can help you. We get all of our cupcakes from him.\"";
next;
goto L_End;
@@ -125,6 +124,8 @@ L_End:
mes "[Sara]";
mes "";
mes "\"Hello!\"";
+ mes "\"If you'd like to buy something, just ask Drabur.\"";
+ mes "\"If you need something made-to-order, talk to Riskim.\"";
close;
}
@@ -136,7 +137,7 @@ L_End:
{
mes "[Iormo]";
mes "";
- mes "\"This room can get messy.\"";
+ mes "\"The cake sure is good, but this room can get messy with all the flour.\"";
close;
}
@@ -153,6 +154,6 @@ L_End:
{
mes "[Ontas]";
mes "";
- mes "\"We come here every week. This place has some of the best bread I've ever eaten!\"";
+ mes "\"We come here almost every week! This place has some of the best bread I've ever eaten!\"";
close;
}