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-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt24
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/constable.txt2
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/eomie.txt49
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/ferry_master.txt2
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/gossip.txt49
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/weellos.txt12
6 files changed, 69 insertions, 69 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt
index 6749f0e3..5ad738a9 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
L_1:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"Maggots are soo slimey!\"";
+ mes "\"Maggots are so slimey!\" %%^";
goto L_Close;
L_2:
@@ -26,12 +26,12 @@ L_2:
L_3:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"There are so many monsters; I hate scorpions!\"";
+ mes "\"There are so many monsters! I hate scorpions!\" %%3";
goto L_Close;
L_4:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"When I grow up, I want to be strong enough to kill a scorpion!\"";
+ mes "\"When I grow up, I want to be strong enough to kill a scorpion!\" %%=";
goto L_Close;
L_5:
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ L_5:
L_6:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"Have you tried to eat a roasted maggot? They are sooo yummy! And you feel much healthier afterwards, too!\"";
+ mes "\"Have you tried to eat a roasted maggot? They're sooo yummy! Mommy says they're healthy too!\" %%8";
goto L_Close;
L_7:
@@ -51,23 +51,23 @@ L_7:
L_8:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"That volcano was sooo scary! The earth was shaking and everything was breaking down... but now they have rebuilt everything.\"";
+ mes "\"That earthquake was sooo scary! The earth was shaking and everything was breaking down... but now they've rebuilt everything.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_9:
- mes "\"I know a very bad word. But I must not say it, because monsters will come and get me if I do!\"";
+ mes "\"I know a very bad word. But I can't say it because monsters will come and get me if I do!\"";
next;
menu
"A bad word?", L_tell,
- "Oh, you better keep it for yourself then.", L_Close;
+ "Oh. You better keep it to yourself then.", L_Close;
L_tell:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"Yes, I heard my mother say it once. And she made me promise her to never say it. Never.\"";
+ mes "\"I heard my mother say it once, and she made me promise her to never say it. ##BNever##b!\"";
next;
menu
"If I promise to never tell anyone, can you tell me the word?", L_keepword,
- "I understand, you do not need to tell me...", L_giveword,
+ "I understand. You don't need to tell me...", L_giveword,
"Goodbye!", L_Close;
L_keepword:
@@ -77,13 +77,13 @@ L_keepword:
L_giveword:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "Aisha looks around as she hushes you to silence. After a few seconds, she whispers to you.";
- mes "\"I like you! So I will tell you the bad word. But you can't tell anyone else about it! The bad word is '" + getspellinvocation("aggravate") + "'.\"";
+ mes "Aisha looks around as she leans in and hushes you to silence. After a few seconds, she whispers to you:";
+ mes "\"I like you, so I'll tell you the bad word. But you can't tell anyone else about it! The bad word is '" + getspellinvocation("aggravate") + ".'\"";
next;
mes "[Aisha]";
mes "Terrified, she looks around once more.";
- mes "\"But you mustn't tell anyone!\"";
+ mes "\"But you can't tell anyone!\" %%>";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/constable.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/constable.txt
index 73a74a2f..ecc8a0d4 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/constable.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/constable.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
001-1,50,74,0|script|Constable Perry Graf|150
{
mes "[Constable Perry Graf]";
- mes "\"Hello, make sure the rules are followed.\"";
+ mes "\"Hello. Make sure to follow the rules!\"";
callfunc "GameRules";
close;
}
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/eomie.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/eomie.txt
index 6528ddbe..99085bcf 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/eomie.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/eomie.txt
@@ -33,20 +33,20 @@
if (@state == 8) goto L_GetStuff;
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"I maintain this little spot of grass in the desert.\"";
+ mes "\"I maintain this little oasis in the desert.\"";
if (@state != 7)
goto L_Close;
menu
- "I have this magic fertilizer from Tinris and need a spell cast on it.",L_Next;
+ "I need to learn a spell to use Tinris' magic fertilizer. Can you help me out?",L_Next;
L_Next:
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"Oh? I see, that's a difficult task.";
- mes "I'd be glad to help you, but unfortunately I can't interrupt the magic I use to keep this spot of grass alive.\"";
+ mes "\"Oh? Well, that's a rather difficult task.";
+ mes "I'd be glad to help you, but unfortunately, I can't. If I were to interrupt the magic I use to keep this alive, it would die.\"";
next;
- mes "\"It's unusually hot at the moment, even for this desert area. It might have something to do with the aftereffects of the earthquake.\"";
+ mes "\"It's unusually hot at the moment – even for this desert area – so it's really out of the question.\"";
menu
- "Isn't there any possibility?",L_Continue;
+ "Is there any chance you could help me?",L_Continue;
L_Continue:
mes "She hesitates.";
@@ -57,13 +57,13 @@ L_Continue:
L_GetStuff:
// @state == 8
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"I could try to interrupt my spells to be able to cast the spell on the fertilizer, but then I need to prepare the grass for this.";
- mes "Bring me " + @grass_amount + " Grass Seeds, " + @water_amount + " Bottles of Water and " + @ice_amount + " Ice Cubes.\"";
+ mes "\"I could try to briefly interrupt my magic and then cast the spell on the fertilizer, but I would need to prepare the grass beforehand.";
+ mes "Bring me " + @grass_amount + " " + getitemlink("GrassSeed") + ", " + @water_amount + " " + getitemlink("BottleOfWater") + ", and " + @ice_amount + " " + getitemlink("IceCube") + ".\"";
menu
- "I have it.",L_More,
+ "I've got everything.",L_More,
"Where can I get Grass Seeds?",L_Hurnscald,
- "How can I get Ice Cubes? We're in the desert!",L_Mine,
- "Ok, I'll go and get it.",L_Close;
+ "How can I get Ice Cubes? We're in the middle of the desert!",L_Mine,
+ "Ok. I'll go and get them.",L_Close;
L_More:
if ((countitem("GrassSeed") < @grass_amount) || (countitem("BottleOfWater") < @water_amount) || (countitem("IceCube") < @ice_amount))
goto L_NoItem;
@@ -74,38 +74,37 @@ L_More:
set @state, 9;
callsub S_Update_Mask;
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"Very good.\"";
- mes "She takes the things you brought her and uses them to create a bubble of coolness around the spot of grass.";
+ mes "\"Very good!\"";
+ mes "She takes the ingredients you brought her and uses them to cast a cool mist into the air.";
misceffect sfx_magic_nature;
next;
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"This should last long enough to keep the spot of grass alive until I cast the spell on the fertilizer. And if some of it shrivels I still have the seeds you brought me which I can use to recover it.\"";
+ mes "\"That should last long enough to keep the plants alive while I cast the spell on the fertilizer. Besides, I can replant anything that dies with the seeds you brought me.\"";
next;
- mes "She takes the fertilizer and casts some invocations. After a while she's done and gives it back to you with a smile.";
- misceffect sfx_magic_nature;
+ mes "She takes the fertilizer and casts some invocations. After a minute, she hands the now-glowing substance back to you.";
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"This should help you. I'm glad you're taking care of the plants. Not enough people do that nowadays.\"";
+ mes "\"That should work now. I'm glad you're taking care of the plants! Not enough people do that nowadays.\" %%1";
goto L_Close;
L_Hurnscald: // player asked how to get Grass Seeds
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"Squirrels tend to pick up Grass Seeds as they gather food. You can find them around Hurnscald. To get there you will have to take the ferry in the harbor district.\"";
+ mes "\"Squirrels tend to pick up " + getitemlink("GrassSeed") + " as they gather food. You can find them around Hurnscald if you ride the ferry over.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Mine: // player asked how to get Ice Cubes
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"Hm, that's a difficult task, indeed. Naturally you will find them on the continent of Kaizei, which is high up in the north and covered with snow most time of the year. But it might be difficult to get there.\"";
+ mes "\"Quite the quandary – isn't it? Naturally, you can easily find them on the continent of Kaizei, which is far up north and covered with snow most time of the year. But it might be a bit difficult to get there.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I heard that Ice Goblins were seen in the caves that are around Nivalis. Maybe you can find Ice Cubes in there.\"";
+ mes "\"I heard that Ice Goblins were seen in the caves surrounding Nivalis. Maybe you can find " + getitemlink("IceCube") + " there.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_CastedSpell: // @state >= 9 but below 14
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"The grass wasn't damaged due to the interruption. I hope the magic fertilizer is useful for Anwar.\"";
+ mes "\"Thankfully, the grass wasn't damaged. I hope Anwar finds the magic fertilizer to be useful.\"";
if (@state != 13)
goto L_Close;
menu
- "It was and he created this Silk Headband as a present for you.",L_Present,
+ "It was. He even created this Silk Headband as a present for you!",L_Present,
"(Mumble something and leave)",L_Close;
L_Present:
@@ -116,18 +115,18 @@ L_Present:
set @state, 14;
callsub S_Update_Mask;
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"Oh, this is very friendly! Please tell him I'm very happy about it.\"";
+ mes "\"Oh, that's so nice of him! Please tell him that I really like it!\"";
mes "She smiles.";
goto L_Close;
L_Done: // @state >= 14
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"Hello. I'm happy to see someone like you being dedicated to the needs of plants and people.\"";
+ mes "\"Hello! I'm happy to see someone like you so dedicated to the environment.\" %%8";
goto L_Close;
L_NoItem:
mes "[Eomie]";
- mes "\"Where is it?\"";
+ mes "\"Where is it?\" %%3";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/ferry_master.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/ferry_master.txt
index 9cfb1e74..c1e6cbb6 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/ferry_master.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/ferry_master.txt
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
L_Main:
menu
"How do I use the ferry?", L_Explain,
- "Nothing I guess", L_Close;
+ "Nothing, I guess.", L_Close;
L_Explain:
mes "[Ferry Master]";
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/gossip.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/gossip.txt
index 283de9d7..a2266498 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/gossip.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/gossip.txt
@@ -2,53 +2,56 @@
001-1,66,104,0|script|Gladys|154
{
- mes "[Gladys, Town Gossip]";
- mes "\"Hello deary! I hear some of the most fascinating rumors and bits of news. I just heard a bit more today!\"";
+ mes "[Gladys]";
+ mes "\"Hello deary! I hear some of the most fascinating rumors!\"";
+ next;
mes "\"Would you like me to let you in on the good stuff?\"";
menu
- "Lt. Dausen", L_Intro,
- "Fieri", L_Cook,
- "Sarah", L_Sarah,
- "Sandra", L_Sandra,
- "Desert Mine", L_Desert,
- "Ferry", L_Ferry,
+ "Tell me about Lt. Dausen.", L_Intro,
+ "Tell me about Fieri.", L_Cook,
+ "Tell me about Sarah.", L_Sarah,
+ "Tell me about Sandra.", L_Sandra,
+ "Tell me about the Desert Mine.", L_Desert,
+ "Tell me about the Ferry.", L_Ferry,
"No thanks.", L_No;
L_No:
- mes "[Gladys, Town Gossip]";
- mes "\"Very well. Come back whenever you like. I am always getting juicy bits of news!\"";
+ mes "[Gladys]";
+ mes "\"Very well. Come back later if you want to hear some juicy news!\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Intro:
- mes "[Gladys, Town Gossip]";
- mes "\"Have you met our lovely guard captain yet? He usually keeps a post just outside the gates where he can keep an eye on things. He likes to talk to new adventurers too.\"";
+ mes "[Gladys]";
+ mes "\"Have you met our lovely guard captain yet? He usually keeps post just outside the gates to keep an eye on things. He likes to talk to new adventurers too.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Cook:
- mes "[Gladys, Town Gossip]";
- mes "\"I hear the kitchen at the Magic Insitute of Tulimshar needs help.\"";
+ mes "[Gladys]";
+ mes "\"I hear the kitchen at the Magic Institute of Tulimshar is in need of some help.\"";
next;
- mes "\"The only thing bigger then a wizard's ego is their waistline. Hehe.\"";
+ mes "\"The only thing bigger then a wizard's ego is their waistline. Hehe.\" %%8";
goto L_Close;
L_Sarah:
- mes "[Gladys, Town Gossip]";
- mes "\"Do you believe what parents will let their kids do these days?! I heard about this girl in the south east side of town who does nothing but eat sweets all day! Honestly, what is the world coming to?\"";
+ mes "[Gladys]";
+ mes "\"Do you believe what parents will let their kids do these days?! I heard about this girl in the southeast side of town who does nothing but eat sweets all day! Honestly, what is this world coming to?\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Sandra:
- mes "[Gladys, Town Gossip]";
- mes "\"The students and wizards at the Magic Institute of Tulimshar are always looking for people to gather reagents for spells as they are far too busy studing.\"";
+ mes "[Gladys]";
+ mes "\"The students and wizards at the Magic Institute of Tulimshar are always looking for people to gather the reagents they need for spells as they are far too busy studying to gather the materials themselves.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Desert:
- mes "[Gladys, Town Gossip]";
- mes "\"If you're still looking for adventure, I would suggest talking to some of the guards. I hear there is a monster threat outside the city walls!\"";
+ mes "[Gladys]";
+ mes "\"If you're still looking for adventure, I would suggest talking to some of the guards. I hear there's a sizable monster threat outside the city walls!\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Ferry:
- mes "[Gladys, Town Gossip]";
- mes "I heard that there is a ferry in the north of town that will take people to exotic new places!\"";
+ mes "[Gladys]";
+ mes "\"There's a ferry in the northern part of town that takes travelers to exotic new places!\"";
+ next;
+ mes "\"I haven't been on it myself, but I hear it travels all over the world!\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/weellos.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/weellos.txt
index ae5604f5..e49c6814 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/weellos.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/weellos.txt
@@ -12,26 +12,24 @@
if (isin("001-1", 48, 20, 61, 28)) goto L_In;
mes "[Weellos]";
- mes "\"This is a very historic building. One of the oldest in the area.\"";
+ mes "\"This is a very historic building – in fact, it's one of the oldest in the area.\"";
next;
- mes "\"It's the current seat of the council of wizards.\"";
+ mes "\"It's also the current seat of both the Council of Wizards and the Magic Institute of Tulimshar.\"";
next;
- mes "\"It's also holds the Magic Institute of Tulimshar.\"";
- next;
- mes "\"Part of It's been turned into a museum as well\"";
+ mes "\"Due to its historical significance, part of it has been turned into a museum.\"";
goto L_BeforeClose;
// If the player is inside the fence with Weellos
L_In:
mes "[Weellos]";
- mes "\"What did you think of the historic building?\"";
+ mes "\"What did you think? Isn't the building intriguing?\"";
goto L_BeforeClose;
L_BeforeClose:
if (@kylian != 4)
goto L_Close;
next;
- mes "You wonder if Kylian would be interested to see this building.";
+ mes "You wonder if Kylian would be interested in seeing this historic landmark...";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
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