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-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt18
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt16
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt20
3 files changed, 28 insertions, 26 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt
index dba78c21..de2966b5 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt
@@ -10,29 +10,31 @@
set @state, ((QUEST_NorthTulimshar & NIBBLE_5_MASK) >> NIBBLE_5_SHIFT);
mes "[Adrian]";
- mes "\"Hello. Are you here to get the luggage for some of our passengers?\"";
+ mes "\"Hello. Are you here to pick up some luggage?\"";
if (@state == 1)
menu
- "Yes, Kylian sent me to get his luggage.",L_Get,
+ "Yes. Kylian sent me to get his luggage.",L_Get,
"No.",L_No;
menu
"No.",L_No;
L_No:
+ next;
mes "[Adrian]";
- mes "\"Too bad. I want to go and drink a beer, but I have to wait here until all the luggage is picked up.\"";
+ mes "\"Too bad. I'd like to go get a beer, but I have to wait here until all the luggage is picked up.\"";
mes "He sighs.";
goto L_Close;
L_Get:
+ next;
mes "[Adrian]";
- mes "\"Wonderful! Show me the ticket.\"";
- mes "He checks the paper Kylian gave you and then takes a critical look at you.";
+ mes "\"Wonderful! Please show me your ticket.\"";
+ mes "He checks the paper Kylian gave you and then gives you a critical look.";
next;
getinventorylist;
if ((checkweight("LeatherSuitcase", 1) == 0) || (@inventorylist_count == 100))
goto L_Inventory;
mes "[Adrian]";
- mes "\"Alright, here it is.\"";
+ mes "\"Alright. Here it is. Good luck carrying that thing.\"";
mes "Adrain hands you a very heavy suitcase.";
getitem "LeatherSuitcase", 1;
set @state, 2;
@@ -41,8 +43,8 @@ L_Get:
L_Inventory:
mes "[Adrian]";
- mes "\"The suitcase is rather heavy. You doesn't look as if you can handle that.";
- mes "Maybe if you get rid of some of the other stuff you're carrying.\"";
+ mes "\"The suitcase is rather heavy. No offense, but you don't look like you can carry it.\"";
+ mes "Maybe you should get rid of some of the other stuff you're carrying.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt
index b6159583..ddfddd95 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt
@@ -3,21 +3,21 @@
001-1,43,48,0|script|Ched|113
{
mes "[Ched]";
- mes "\"I'm trying to get a spell to work. It's supposed to combine two potions, but I can't seem to figure out which two those are...\"";
+ mes "\"I'm trying to get a spell to work, but I'm having some trouble.\"";
+ mes "\"It's supposed to combine two potions, but I can't seem to figure out which two to combine...\"";
next;
menu
- "Well, good luck with that!", L_Done,
- "What spell is that?", L_Next;
+ "Good luck with that.", L_Done,
+ "What spell is it?", L_Next;
L_Next:
+ mes "";
mes "[Ched]";
- mes "\"Well, I don't know what it's called... I took it out of `Timbleweed's Advanced Transmutations.' It seems awfully hard to cast, somehow.\"";
+ mes "\"Well, I don't remember what it's called... I took it out of 'Timbleweed's Advanced Transmutations,' but it seems awfully hard to cast.\"";
next;
- mes "[Ched]";
- mes "\"Well, the invocation is `" + getspellinvocation("merge-concentration-potions") + "'. You're supposed to just hold up the potions and cast it, and then they're supposed to merge.\"";
+ mes "\"If you want to try it, the invocation is '" + getspellinvocation("merge-concentration-potions") + ".' I just can't get the hang of it though.\"";
next;
- mes "[Ched]";
- mes "\"Maybe I should go back to `detect magic' until I can cast that one properly.\"";
+ mes "\"Maybe I should go back to practicing '" + getspellinvocation("detect-magic") + "' until I can cast it properly.\" %%6";
goto L_Done;
L_Done:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt
index 39c98ade..e064a60d 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
{
mes "~ wushin ~";
- mes "Tonori swallowed him whole.";
+ mes "\"Tonori swallowed him whole.\"";
close;
}
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
{
mes "~ Nard ~";
- mes "Crushed by a loom.";
+ mes "\"Crushed by a loom.\"";
close;
}
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
{
mes "~ tux9th ~";
- mes "Eaten by bugs.";
+ mes "\"Eaten by bugs.\"";
close;
}
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
{
mes "~ o11c ~";
- mes "He asked for it. So they gave it to him.";
+ mes "\"He asked for it, so they gave it to him.\"";
close;
}
@@ -36,41 +36,41 @@
{
mes "~ " + strcharinfo(0) + " ~";
- mes "The tombstone is blank and the grave freshly dug.";
+ mes "The epitath is blank and the grave freshly dug.";
close;
}
001-1,56,106,0|script|RIP#6|400
{
mes "~ Cassy ~";
- mes "Eaten by trolls.";
+ mes "\"Eaten by trolls.\"";
close;
}
001-1,57,106,0|script|RIP#7|400
{
mes "~ George ~";
- mes "Eaten by Snakes.";
+ mes "\"Eaten by snakes.\"";
close;
}
001-1,58,106,0|script|RIP#8|400
{
mes "~ Kieron ~";
- mes "He was right, monsters were in the cave.";
+ mes "\"He was right; monsters were in the cave.\"";
close;
}
001-1,59,106,0|script|RIP#9|400
{
mes "~ William ~";
- mes "Kieron was definitely right.";
+ mes "\"Kieron was definitely right.\"";
close;
}
001-1,60,106,0|script|RIP#10|400
{
mes "~ Tyer ~";
- mes "An experiement went wrong.";
+ mes "\"An experiement went wrong.\"";
close;
}