1 files changed, 10 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt
index dba78c21..de2966b5 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt
@@ -10,29 +10,31 @@
     set @state, ((QUEST_NorthTulimshar & NIBBLE_5_MASK) >> NIBBLE_5_SHIFT);
 
     mes "[Adrian]";
-    mes "\"Hello. Are you here to get the luggage for some of our passengers?\"";
+    mes "\"Hello. Are you here to pick up some luggage?\"";
     if (@state == 1)
         menu
-            "Yes, Kylian sent me to get his luggage.",L_Get,
+            "Yes. Kylian sent me to get his luggage.",L_Get,
             "No.",L_No;
     menu
         "No.",L_No;
 L_No:
+    next;
     mes "[Adrian]";
-    mes "\"Too bad. I want to go and drink a beer, but I have to wait here until all the luggage is picked up.\"";
+    mes "\"Too bad. I'd like to go get a beer, but I have to wait here until all the luggage is picked up.\"";
     mes "He sighs.";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Get:
+    next;
     mes "[Adrian]";
-    mes "\"Wonderful! Show me the ticket.\"";
-    mes "He checks the paper Kylian gave you and then takes a critical look at you.";
+    mes "\"Wonderful! Please show me your ticket.\"";
+    mes "He checks the paper Kylian gave you and then gives you a critical look.";
     next;
     getinventorylist;
     if ((checkweight("LeatherSuitcase", 1) == 0) || (@inventorylist_count == 100))
         goto L_Inventory;
     mes "[Adrian]";
-    mes "\"Alright, here it is.\"";
+    mes "\"Alright. Here it is. Good luck carrying that thing.\"";
     mes "Adrain hands you a very heavy suitcase.";
     getitem "LeatherSuitcase", 1;
     set @state, 2;
@@ -41,8 +43,8 @@ L_Get:
 
 L_Inventory:
     mes "[Adrian]";
-    mes "\"The suitcase is rather heavy. You doesn't look as if you can handle that.";
-    mes "Maybe if you get rid of some of the other stuff you're carrying.\"";
+    mes "\"The suitcase is rather heavy. No offense, but you don't look like you can carry it.\"";
+    mes "Maybe you should get rid of some of the other stuff you're carrying.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Close: