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diff --git a/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt b/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt
index a422d428..cc8a5357 100644
--- a/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt
+++ b/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
if (sorfina == 1) goto L_Clothes;
mes "[Old Woman]";
- mes "\"Ah, you're waking up. It seems you collapsed after you left the boat that brought you to Tulimshar.";
+ mes "\"Ah, you woke up. It seems you collapsed after you left the boat that brought you to Tulimshar.";
mes "A group of ragtags immediatly took advantage of that and stole all your stuff!\"";
next;
mes "\"My little granddaughter Tanisha saw that, but couldn't do something to stop them.";
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@
next;
mes "[Old Woman]";
mes "\"I'm glad you're feeling better now. You're not used to the hot weather, right?";
- mes "Are you here to look for some work? Many young people come to our Tulimshar for this reason.\"";
+ mes "Are you here to look for a job? Many young people come to our Tulimshar for this reason.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I can tell you some useful things, if you want to hear.\"";
- mes "\"Oh, and by the way my name is Sorfina.\"";
+ mes "\"I can tell you some useful things, if you want to hear.";
+ mes "Oh, and by the way my name is Sorfina.\"";
next;
menu
"That would be great!",L_Tut,
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ L_Tut:
next;
mes "\"Ok, I hope you didn't forget how to walk. Just use the arrow keys or click at the place you want to go to.\"";
next;
- mes "\"And you really should get dressed again. I gave you an old shirt of my son.\"";
+ mes "\"And you really should get dressed again. I gave you an old shirt from my son.\"";
next;
set sorfina, 1;
L_Naked:
@@ -181,7 +181,6 @@ L_Hasan:
next;
mes "\"However, the scorpions poison caused a bad fever and after Hasan had recovered from that, he was even more malicious than before.\"";
mes "She sighs.";
- next;
if (hasan == 1)
set hasan, 2;
close;
@@ -192,7 +191,7 @@ L_SkipTut:
next;
menu
"Thinking about it twice... please tell me.",L_Tut,
- "Yeah, but thanks for the offer. Bye",-;
+ "Yeah, but thanks for the offer. Bye.",-;
mes "[Sorfina]";
mes "\"If you think so. Good luck.\"";
set hasan, 0;