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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sandra.txt')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sandra.txt | 23 |
1 files changed, 11 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sandra.txt b/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sandra.txt index 49d47a8a..45b91ab3 100644 --- a/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sandra.txt +++ b/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sandra.txt @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if (TMW_Quest == 10) goto L_Start; mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"Hunting monsters for potion ingredients can sometimes be a difficult task.\""; + mes "\"Hunting monsters for potion ingredients can sometimes be a difficult task. Maybe you could help me at some point.\""; close; L_Start: @@ -19,19 +19,19 @@ L_Start: L_Opening0: mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"In the outskirts of Tulimshar, there are some scorpions. I need a favor, please help me. Will you?\""; + mes "\"In the outskirts of Tulimshar, there are some scorpions... I need a favor, please help me! Will you?\""; next; goto L_Ask; L_Opening1: mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"When you venture in the outskirts of Tulimshar, you can spot scorpions. Will you help me kill some?\""; + mes "\"When you venture to the outskirts of Tulimshar, you can spot scorpions. Will you help me kill some?\""; next; goto L_Ask; L_Opening2: mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"The scorpion stinger carries many properties used in potions. Will you get some for me?\""; + mes "\"The [Scorpion Stinger] carries many properties used in potions. Would you get some for me?\""; next; goto L_Ask; @@ -43,8 +43,8 @@ L_Opening3: L_Ask: menu - "Yes", L_Yes, - "No", L_No; + "Yes.", L_Yes, + "No.", L_No; L_Yes: set @TEMP, rand(3); @@ -60,27 +60,26 @@ L_Req0: L_Req1: mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"I heard a while ago that scorpion stingers can be used for medical purposes. I need you to help me get 5 [Scorpion Stinger]s.\""; + mes "\"I heard a while ago that stingers from scorpions can be used for medical purposes. I need you to help me get 5 [Scorpion Stinger]s.\""; next; goto L_Set; L_Req2: mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"Bring me 5 [Scorpion Stinger]s. I'll give you something if you do.\""; + mes "\"Bring me 5 [Scorpion Stinger]s. I'll give you something if you do!\""; next; goto L_Set; L_Set: set TMW_Quest,11; mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"Please bring me them!\""; + mes "\"Please get them for me!\""; close; L_Progress: if (countitem("ScorpionStinger") < 5) goto L_NotEnough; mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"Excellent!"; - mes "You brought me 5 [Scorpion Stinger]s!\""; + mes "\"Excellent! You brought me 5 [Scorpion Stinger]s!\""; getinventorylist; if (@inventorylist_count + (countitem("ScorpionStinger") == 5) - (countitem("Arrow") == 0) > 99) goto L_TooMany; delitem "ScorpionStinger", 5; @@ -105,6 +104,6 @@ L_No: L_TooMany: next; mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"You don't have room for my reward. I'll wait until you do.\""; + mes "\"You don't have room for my reward. I'll wait until you do.\""; close; } |