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| -rw-r--r-- | world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | world/map/npc/001-1/entertainer.txt | 10 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | world/map/npc/001-1/luca.txt | 8 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | world/map/npc/001-1/rewards_master.txt | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | world/map/npc/001-1/sandra.txt | 2 |
5 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt index 879ba934..4278bb7a 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ L_Q_sagatha: mes "\"Sagatha! Ah, such a wonderful and mysterious being; the center of many a tale...\""; next; mes "[" + @name$ + "]"; - mes "\"Some say that she is the most powerful witch in all of Argaes. I don't know whether that is true, but I am quite certain that the is the most beautiful of all the witches! Alas, she will let no man touch her...\""; + mes "\"Some say that she is the most powerful witch in all of Argaes. I don't know whether that is true or not, but I am quite certain that she is the most beautiful witch of all! Alas, she will let no man touch her...\""; mes "He sighs."; next; mes "[" + @name$ + "]"; @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ L_Q_sagatha: L_Q_auldsbel: mes "[" + @name$ + "]"; - mes "\"Auldsbel is some wizard from further north, from what I have gathered. He bought a hut near Hurnscald some years back and often comes here to experiment on things, probably because he is not allowed to do these experiments where he comes from.\""; + mes "\"Auldsbel is a wizard further north. From what I have gathered he bought a hut near Hurnscald some years back and often comes here to experiment on things. This is probably because he is not allowed to do these experiments where he comes from.\""; next; goto L_Main; diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/entertainer.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/entertainer.txt index 5fe8cbc3..d31c6232 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/entertainer.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/entertainer.txt @@ -7,17 +7,17 @@ mes "[Entertainer]"; mes "\"Yes how can I help you?\""; menu - "What are those emotions above your head?", L_Learn, - "Nothing I guess", -; + "How are you showing emotions above your head?", L_Learn, + "Never mind", -; goto L_Close; L_Learn: mes "[Entertainer]"; mes "\"They are called emotes, I use them to express how I am feeling"; - mes "I can teach you to do them too\""; + mes "I can teach you if you'd like?\""; menu - "Ok sure", L_Learn2, - "Why would I need to that", -; + "Yes please.", L_Learn2, + "I don't see the point right now.", -; goto L_Close; L_Learn2: diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/luca.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/luca.txt index 73f838c1..758fd2d5 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/luca.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/luca.txt @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ L_teach0_follow: mes "He takes off a pendant he is wearing and holds it up."; next; mes "[Luca the Hunter]"; - mes "\"See that fang at the end of the chain? Keep staring at it at it.\""; + mes "\"See that fang at the end of the chain? Keep staring at it.\""; next; mes "[Luca the Hunter]"; mes "He starts swinging the pendant back and forth."; @@ -161,12 +161,12 @@ L_explain_focus: if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0) mes "\"Right now you can't focus on anything yet, so I'll first have to teach you a simple skill to keep your focus.\""; if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 1) - mes "\"Right now you can only focus on one thing at a time. So if you want to change, you have to forget whatever else you've focused on.\""; + mes "\"Right now you can only focus on one thing at a time. So if you want to change what your focus is, you have to forget whatever else you've focused on.\""; if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) > 1) mes "\"You can focus on " + getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) + " skills right now.\""; next; mes "[Luca the Hunter]"; - mes "\"You can come back to me to focus or unfocus whenever you want, I'm here all day.\""; + mes "\"You can come back to me to focus or unfocus a skill whenever you want, I'm here all day.\""; next; mes "\"For unfocusing you need to bring a potion; a special potion. That potion is not the easiest to get, but I am sure you are able to.\""; next; @@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ L_explain_skills: L_explain_work: mes "[Luca the Hunter]"; - mes "\"Well, skills allow you to be better in some things, or just to do what you couldn't do without them. When you've learned a skill and are focusing on it, then it affects what you do.\""; + mes "\"Well, skills allow you to be better in some things, or allow to do what you couldn't do without them. When you've learned a skill and are focusing on it, then it affects what you do.\""; next; mes "[Luca the Hunter]"; mes "\"Now, when you start out with a skill, you won't be very good at it yet. But if you keep practicing you'll learn how to get better.\""; diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/rewards_master.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/rewards_master.txt index 04cc9ce8..abf85ce8 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/rewards_master.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/rewards_master.txt @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ L_Give_all_loop: L_Give_all_next: next; mes "[Ishi the Rewards Master]"; - mes "\"You have brought lots of items now. You have still " + Mobpt + " monster points. Shall we continue?\""; + mes "\"You have received a lot of items. You still have " + Mobpt + " monster points. Shall we continue?\""; menu "Yes", L_Give_all, "No", L_Close; diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/sandra.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/sandra.txt index 238370dc..10d014dd 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/sandra.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/sandra.txt @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ L_Start: L_Opening0: mes "[Sandra]"; - mes "\"In the outskirts of Tulimshar, there are some scorpions... I need a favor, please help me! Will you?\""; + mes "\"In the outskirts of Tulimshar, there are some scorpions... I need help! Will you help?\""; next; goto L_Ask; |