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authorBen Longbons <b.r.longbons@gmail.com>2012-03-27 13:02:19 -0700
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##3 March 2012
##0
-##0 Two announcments to make:
+##0 Two announcements to make:
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-##0 It seems Tulimshar finally recovers from the impacts
+##0 It seems Tulimshar is finally recovering from the impacts
##0 of the great earthquake.
-##0 The city became much more lively, children playing between the houses,
-##0 farmers go back on their fields and increased trade activity
-##0 has been reported.
+##0 Although the eastern half of the city is still closed,
+##0 it has become much more lively, with children playing between the houses,
+##0 farmers going back to their fields, reports of increased trade activity.
+##0
##0 Surely there are lots of tasks for a young adventurer!
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##0 Near Hurnscald a bunny showed up that looks like an older version