Some minor dialogue fixes on Lora Tay and Agostine.

2 files changed, 79 insertions, 75 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt b/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt
index 7485b70a..6335d7a7 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ L_give_water:
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"If HE can sew petty every-day items for ordinary peasants, then so can I.  Very well, is there anything in particular that you need made?  I shall show you how a proper seamstress operates!\"";
     next;
-    
+
     if (QUEST_WG_state == 12)
         goto L_main_menu2;
     goto L_main_menu;
@@ -256,26 +256,26 @@ L_agostine_proposal:
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"What kind of proposal are you asking of me?\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "I have talked to Agostine and he needs your help.", -,
         "I forgot...", L_main_menu2;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"That cheat! What could he possibly want from me?";
-    mes "We dont even have the same style in seeming. Is this a joke?\"";
+    mes "We don't even have the same style in seeming. Is this a joke?\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
-        "It's no joke. he needs your help in creating a new fashion!", -,
-        "yeah you are right, he was probably joking.", L_end;
-    
+        "It's no joke. He needs your help in creating a new fashion!", -,
+        "Yeah you're right, he was probably joking.", L_end;
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Well it depends what he wants from me.";
     mes "Go see Agostine, ask him what he's planning and I will think about it.\"";
-    
+
     set QUEST_WG_state, 13;
-    
+
     close;
 
 L_proposal_intro:
@@ -292,25 +292,25 @@ L_proposal_show_materials:
     menu
         "Yes, he explained he saw a dress in a dream and gave me these materials.", -,
         "No, that guy is a total wacko.", L_end;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Wow these are such fine materials!";
     mes "These are certainly not for just any ordinary clothes...";
     mes "He must be thinking of something magnificent.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "He said this dress would be his first dress creation and he wanted it to be fabulous!", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Fine I will accept his offer...";
     mes "But the materials he has given you need some sewing on the edges.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
-    mes "\"I will fix them, but I cannot use normal threading to fix this material.";
-    mes "I will need a soft thin thread so I wont spoil the textures.\"";
+    mes "\"I will fix them, but I cannot use normal threading to fix this materials.";
+    mes "I will need a soft thin thread so I won't spoil the textures.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     goto L_proposal_search_items;
 
 L_proposal_search_items:
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ L_proposal_search_items:
     mes "\"Please bring me " + @FINEDRESS_COCOONS + " silk cocoons.";
     mes "This should cover the materials needs and will leave extra for sewing the pieces together later on.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "I will go get them right away!", -,
         "Here you are.", L_proposal_give_items,
@@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ L_proposal_give_items:
         goto L_proposal_not_enough_items;
     delitem "SilkCocoon", @FINEDRESS_COCOONS;
     set QUEST_WG_state, 16;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Great, now I can spin the silk threading and fix this mess made of these fine materials.";
     mes "While I do this, you will need to go get the design drawings from Agostine...";
@@ -349,7 +349,8 @@ L_proposal_retrieve_design:
     mes "\"May you go retrieve the design from Agostine?\"";
     next;
     menu
-        "Certainly I'll be back soon!", -;
+        "Certainly I'll be back soon!", -,
+        "Actually I want something else...", L_main_menu;
     close;
 
 L_proposal_bringing_design:
@@ -358,7 +359,7 @@ L_proposal_bringing_design:
     next;
     menu
         "Here they are!", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Wonderful, this dress design is magnificent!";
     mes "I am done with the threading but I will now need to sew these materials together into the design.\"";
@@ -376,29 +377,32 @@ L_proposal_dress_finished:
     mes "\"Well it was difficult seeming with such fragile materials.";
     mes "But I have done it. The design is finished except for one part of it.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "Wow it looks great, but what's missing?", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Well there are white flare designs on the bottom of the dress.";
     mes "I'm not great with fine cloth design so this might be something Agostine must do on his own.";
     next;
-    
+
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Please take the unfinished dress to him so he may finish the edges with the cloth.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "Okay, can't wait to see the finished product! Thanks for your help!", -;
-    
+
     set QUEST_WG_state, 20;
-    
+
     close;
 
 L_proposal_deliver_dress:
     mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]";
     mes "\"Please take the unfinished dress to him so he may finish the edges with the cloth.\"";
+    menu
+        "I'm on my way.", -,
+        "I have a request...", L_main_menu;
     close;
 
 L_desert_hat:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/020-2/furquest.txt b/world/map/npc/020-2/furquest.txt
index 56b19fcc..0a021fcb 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/020-2/furquest.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/020-2/furquest.txt
@@ -358,38 +358,38 @@ L_State_14:
         goto L_State_13;
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"You are so glamourous, my dear friend!";
-    mes "I have done a very good job on your clothes... But... \"";
+    mes "I have done a very good job on your clothes... But...\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "But?", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
-    mes "\"There is a new fashion ive been dying to try out!";
-    mes "But I dont have all the knowledge in the world about seeming this wonderful fashion.\"";
+    mes "\"There is a new fashion I've been dying to try out!";
+    mes "But I don't have all the knowledge in the world about seeming this wonderful fashion.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "Ah, that's too bad...", L_Close,
         "I know another taylor who might know!", -;
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"What taylor may that be?";
-    mes "I havent been out of Nivalis for quite some time since I have been busy with clothes for the people of the town.";
+    mes "I haven't been out of Nivalis for quite some time since I have been busy with clothes for the people of the town.";
     mes "If you can tell me the name of this great taylor, maybe we can work something out, like a collaboration!\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "Well... There is a taylor in Dimond's Cove who makes pretty good clothing. Her name is Lora Tay.", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"I had almost forgotten about Lora Tay.";
     mes "She has tried to put me out of business a few times long ago.";
     mes "But I am willing to collaborate with her to make this fine fashion come alive.";
     mes "Will you go ask her if she is willing to help sew and seem this fashion I will create?\"";
-    
+
     menu
         "Sure thing! Be back soon.", L_State_14_Accept,
-        "It will never happen. I wont waste my time.", -;
+        "It will never happen. I won't waste my time.", -;
     close;
 
 L_State_14_Accept:
@@ -407,32 +407,32 @@ L_State_15:
     next;
     menu
         "Yes, but she would like to know more information about it and I'm kind of curious myself.", -,
-        "I havent yet, sorry.", L_Close;
-    
+        "I haven't yet, sorry.", L_Close;
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Well I had a dream of a woman in a beautiful dress I would like to recreate from my dream...";
     mes "But the thing is I have never sewn a dress this fabulous in my life!";
     mes "This is why I wanted an experienced taylor to help me with it.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "You must be thinking of fashion a lot if it's in your dreams! I shall bring this information to Lora Tay.", -,
         "You're obsessed, I cant help you.", L_Close;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Please take these materials with you to show Lora Tay the kind of vision I have!";
     mes "These are the finest materials in my whole house and have been saving them for something special such as this.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     message strcharinfo(0), "Agostine gives you a set of fine materials that you carefully put in your backpack.";
     mes "Agostine gives you a set of fine materials that you carefully put in your backpack.";
     next;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Hurry back my friend!\"";
-    
+
     set QUEST_WG_state, 14;
-    
+
     close;
 
 L_State_15_Repeat:
@@ -445,36 +445,36 @@ L_State_16:
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Hello there! Did you tell Lora Tay about the type of fashion I was hoping to create?\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
-        "Yes she is also working on threading to sew the materials together", -,
+        "Yes, she is also working on threading to sew the materials together.", -,
         "Why would I do that for?", L_Close;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Wow she did not only accept but she is willing to sew these materials for me?";
     mes "This is amazing... I was quite worried I would ruin these fine cloths sewing them myself.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Is there anything I can do in the meanwhile?\"";
     next;
     menu
         "Actually she wanted the design drawings to know what it should look like.", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Of course! How could I forget, I drew the designs right after the dream I had.";
     mes "Please take these to Lora Tay and ask her to try and make it as close as she can.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "Sure thing be back soon!", -,
         "... I'll take a nap first.", L_Close;
-    
+
     set QUEST_WG_state, 17;
-    
+
     message strcharinfo(0), "Agostine folds carefully his designs and gives you the paper that you put in your pocket.";
     mes "Agostine folds carefully his designs and gives you the paper that you put in your pocket.";
-    
+
     close;
 
 L_State_16_Repeat:
@@ -490,26 +490,26 @@ L_State_17:
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"But I do notice it is missing something from my design.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
-        "Lora Tay mentioned the bottom has to be edged with cotton cloths but she cannot do the design you wanted", -;
-    
+        "Lora Tay mentioned the bottom has to be edged with cotton cloths but she cannot do the design you wanted.", -;
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
-    mes "\"That's fine. I will finish it with the cloth but it seems I dont have anymore around...\"";
+    mes "\"That's fine. I will finish it with the cloth but it seems I don't have anymore around...\"";
     next;
-    
+
     goto L_State_17_AskItems;
 
 L_State_17_AskItems:
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Do you think you can get some for me? I will need about " + @FINEDRESS_COTTON_CLOTHS + " cotton cloths to finish this master piece.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "Sure thing, I will go get them!", -,
         "Here you are!", L_State_17_GiveItems;
     set QUEST_WG_state, 21;
-    
+
     close;
 
 L_State_17_NotEnoughItems:
@@ -523,7 +523,7 @@ L_State_17_GiveItems:
         goto L_State_17_NotEnoughItems;
     delitem "CottonCloth", @FINEDRESS_COTTON_CLOTHS;
     set QUEST_WG_state, 22;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Great now just a little cloth here........\"";
     next;
@@ -538,45 +538,45 @@ L_State_17_GiveItems:
     mes "The finest dress in my design is finally finished!\"";
     next;
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
-    mes "\"I dont know how I can repay you for all your hard work...\"";
+    mes "\"I don't know how I can repay you for all your hard work...\"";
     next;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Hmmm I know something that will be good for you and for myself!\"";
     next;
-    
+
     menu
         "What is it?", -;
-    
+
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"How about I let you buy the dress off me?";
     mes "This will allow you to have a fine dress and allow me to show the world what I'm capable of.";
-    mes "I would charge " + @FINEDRESS_GP +" gp, which I think is a magnificent price for something this fine.\"";
+    mes "I would charge " + @FINEDRESS_GP +" GP, which I think is a magnificent price for something this fine.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     goto L_State_17_BuyDress;
 
 L_State_17_ProposeBuyDress:
     mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
     mes "\"Did you consider buying the dress off me?";
-    mes "I would charge " + @FINEDRESS_GP +" gp, which I think is a magnificent price for something this fine.\"";
+    mes "I would charge " + @FINEDRESS_GP +" GP, which I think is a magnificent price for something this fine.\"";
     next;
-    
+
     goto L_State_17_BuyDress;
 
 L_State_17_BuyDress:
     menu
-        "Wow that sounds great ill take it!", -,
+        "Wow that sounds great I'll take it!", -,
         "I'll think about it...", L_Close;
-    
+
     getinventorylist;
     if (@inventory_count == 100)
-        goto L_Inventory;
-    
+        goto L_State_17_InventoryFull;
+
     set Zeny, Zeny - @FINEDRESS_GP;
     getitem "FineDress", 1;
     set QUEST_WG_state, 23;
-    
+
     close;
 
 L_State_17_InventoryFull: