Fixed Grammar/Dialogue issues in the Blue Sage Quest

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt
index 805d8a5e..8ded86ff 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt
@@ -19,13 +19,13 @@
 
 L_Quest:
     mes "[Santeri]";
-    mes "\"Welcome. Are you an adventurer? I could need some help.\"";
+    mes "\"Welcome. Are you an adventurer? I could use some help.\"";
     menu
         "I am. What heroic action is needed?",-,
         "How can I help?",-,
         "I'm not interested.",L_Close;
     mes "[Santeri]";
-    mes "\"You see, we're working on repairing all the damaged books and creating new ones for those that are lost.";
+    mes "\"You see, we're working on repairing all of the damaged books and creating new ones for those that are lost.";
     mes "Therefore we need a lot of glue, but our supplies are nearly used up. I need " + @claw_amount + " Yeti Claws as ingredient to make new glue. Do you have that?\"";
     menu
         "Yes, here you go.",-,
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ L_Quest:
 
 L_Done:
     mes "[Santeri]";
-    mes "\"Thanks to you our glue supply is replenished and we can repair those books.\"";
+    mes "\"Thanks to you, our glue supply is replenished and we can repair those books.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_NoItem:
@@ -63,13 +63,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
@@ -79,9 +79,9 @@ L_Visitor:
 
 L_Helper:
     mes "[Santeri]";
-    mes "\"Oh, that's an interesting question. I was really surpised when I heard that he was responsible for the sealing spell. I've worked together with him once in a while, and I have to say, it really was a pleasure. He's very accurate and diligent, but also polite and helpful.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, that's an interesting question. I was really surpised when I heard that he was responsible for the sealing spell. I've worked together with him before, and I have to say, it really was a pleasure. He's very accurate and diligent, but also polite and helpful.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I really wonder what went wrong with that sealing spell, I can't imagine Peetu messing up something such important.\"";
+    mes "\"I really wonder what went wrong with that sealing spell, I can't imagine Peetu messing up something so important.\"";
     if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
         goto L_Close;
     set @investigate, @investigate + 3;