Minor grammar edits to birrod, kimarr, and yerrnk

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/033-1/kimarr.txt b/world/map/npc/033-1/kimarr.txt
index abe8a843..6e4a12ba 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/033-1/kimarr.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/033-1/kimarr.txt
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
     next;
     mes "\"I am Kimarr, hunter and warrior of the Mangarr.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"You are very small, better be careful in this snowy mountains. It is cold and dangerous monsters are here.\"";
+    mes "\"You are very small and must be careful in these snowy mountains. It is cold, and dangerous monsters are here.\"";
     menu
         "Hello, my name is " + strcharinfo(0) + " and I'm not small. I'm a great warrior!",-,
         "I'm " + strcharinfo(0) + ", don't underestimate me. I'm an experienced adventurer!",-,
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ L_Explain_Game:
     mes "[Kimarr]";
     mes "\"In that cave there are living Fluffies. They like to eat apples.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I also saw one of them getting excited about one of that sweet things you call 'cake'.\"";
+    mes "\"I also saw one of them getting excited about one of those sweet things you call 'cake'.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Go to the cave entrance and throw food on the floor to make them come out.\"";
     next;
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ L_Ask:
 
 L_AlreadyGotReward:
     npctalk strcharinfo(0) + " killed " + $@Fluffy_Kills + " Fluffies and has once again proven to be a good hunter.";
-    message strcharinfo(0), "Kimarr: Once again you prove you are worth as a hunter! You killed " + $@Fluffy_Kills + " Fluffies.";
+    message strcharinfo(0), "Kimarr: Once again you prove your worth as a hunter! You killed " + $@Fluffy_Kills + " Fluffies.";
     callsub S_Clean;
     goto L_Close;
 
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ L_Reward1:
 // full at the time, when you next initiate dialog (with @state == 2)
 L_Reward:
     mes "[Kimarr]";
-    mes "\"That was very impressive - now you can call yourself a hunter, " + strcharinfo(0) + ".\"";
+    mes "\"That was very impressive. Now you can call yourself a hunter, " + strcharinfo(0) + ".\"";
     next;
 
     getinventorylist;
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ L_Game:
 
 L_Someone_Else:
     mes "[Kimarr]";
-    mes "\"At the moment someone else is hunting. Let's wait until that hunting has ended.\"";
+    mes "\"Someone else is hunting right now. Let's wait until that hunt has ended.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Attention:
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ OnTimer1000:
 // Checking if player is logged
     if (attachrid($@Fluffy_FighterID) == 0)
         goto L_GotOut;
-// Checking if player is still in the map or used a towell or spell to get out
+// Checking if player is still in the map or used a towel or spell to get out
     if (getareausers("033-1.gat", 79, 28, 88, 42) == 0)
         goto L_GotOut;
     if (PC_DIE_COUNTER > $@Fluffy_PC_Deaths)