Initial spell/grammar check for tutorial

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/npc/042-1/hasan.txt b/npc/042-1/hasan.txt
index db32179d..fc0bf6fd 100644
--- a/npc/042-1/hasan.txt
+++ b/npc/042-1/hasan.txt
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 		"Why not?",-,
 		"Who says that?",-;
 	mes "[Unfriendly Guy]";
-	mes "\"Me, Hasan the mighty, decided to put a toll on this way.\"";
+	mes "\"I, Hasan the Mighty, have decided to put a toll on this path.\"";
 	next;
 L_Toll:
 	mes "[Hasan]";
@@ -32,10 +32,10 @@ L_Toll:
 	if (zeny >= @toll)
 		menu
 			"Ok, here you go.",L_Pay,
-			"What? I don't have so much money!",L_NoPay,
+			"What? I don't have that much money!",L_NoPay,
 			"We'll see if you can stop me!",L_Fight;
 	menu
-		"What? I don't have so much money!",L_NoPay,
+		"What? I don't have that much money!",L_NoPay,
 		"We'll see if you can stop me!",L_Fight;
 	close;
 
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ L_Pay:
 
 L_Cheat:
 	mes "[Hasan]";
-	mes "\"Don't dare to cheat on me!\"";
+	mes "\"Don't you dare try to cheat me!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Trick:
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ L_Trick:
 	mes "\"Are you going to pay now? " + @toll + "GP, and I may let you pass.\"";
 	next;
 	menu
-		"I don't have so much money!",L_NoPay,
+		"I don't have that much money!",L_NoPay,
 		"No. (Scratch your head.)",-;
 	if ($@scorp == 1) goto L_Wait;
 	mes "While you're scratching your head, you see Kaan coming nearer to the cliff above you.";
@@ -93,13 +93,13 @@ L_Trick:
 L_Thank:
 	mes "[Hasan]";
 	mes "\"You - you saved me!";
-	mes "I tried to get your money and you saved me!\"";
+	mes "I tried to take your money and you saved me!\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Hey, you're a really cool person.";
-	mes "I mean, how you finished that ghastly scorpion!";
+	mes "I mean, the way you finished that ghastly scorpion!";
 	mes "Amazing!\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"I tell you something: Cool persons are allowed to pass for free.";
+	mes "\"Let me tell you a secret: Cool persons are allowed to pass for free.";
 	mes "And you can have my Sharp Knife.\"";
 	getitem "SharpKnife", 1;
 	next;
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ L_Thank:
 	menu
 		"Sure, thanks.",-,
 		"I'll try to find the way myself.",L_Explore,
-		"Could you just explain me the way?",L_Directions;
+		"Could you just tell me the way?",L_Directions;
 	warp "001-1.gat", 44, 40;
 	close;
 
@@ -147,15 +147,15 @@ L_Tut_Done:
 	close;
 
 L_Distance:
-	mes "There is a person in some distance. He doesn't seem to notice you, maybe you should go closer.";
+	mes "There is a person off in the distance. He doesn't seem to notice you, maybe you should go closer.";
 	close;
 
 L_Cliff_Up:
-	mes "You see a guy in shaby clothes when you look down the cliff.";
+	mes "You see a guy in shabby clothes when you look down the cliff.";
 	close;
 
 L_SummonAgain:
-	message strcharinfo(0), "Kaan is mad with your interference! He comes near the cliff and throws a rock on the top of your head, and let another scorpion run just near Hasan!";
+	message strcharinfo(0), "Kaan is mad at you for your interference! He walks over to the edge of the cliff and throws a rock on top of your head, then lets another scorpion run just near Hasan!";
 	percentheal -100, 0;
 	attachrid(getcharid(3,$@ScorpionFighter$));
 	message strcharinfo(0), "Kaan: \"Just go while he is distracted and no one is interfering!\"";
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ L_Clean:
 	if (isloggedin(getcharid(3,$@ScorpionFighter$))==0) end;
 	attachrid(getcharid(3,$@ScorpionFighter$));
 	if (PC_DIE_COUNTER > $@ScorpDeath) goto L_MessageDeath;
-	message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan, with his eyes almost closed, trembling with fear, runs toward the scorpion and stabs it with all his strenght! Seems like it took too long and the plan didn't work this time.";
+	message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan, with his eyes almost closed, trembling with fear, runs toward the scorpion and stabs it with all his strength! Seems like you took too long and the plan didn't work this time.";
 	warp "042-1.gat", 112, 64;
 	message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan: \"Hey you! I told you you cannot pass!\"";
 	set $@ScorpionFighter$, "";
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ L_Normal:
 
 L_Scared:
 	warp "042-1.gat", 112, 64;
-	message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan seems to be completely irrational. He waves his sharp knife in the air with his eyes closed and hits you. Maybe you shoudn't get too close or you are going to get hurt.";
+	message strcharinfo(0), "Hasan seems to be completely irrational. He waves his sharp knife in the air with his eyes closed and scratches you. Maybe you shouldn't get too close or you are going to get hurt.";
 	percentheal -10, 0;
 	end;