Spelling and grammar updates in NPC dialog for maps 018 to 032

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt b/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt
index 858a5088..a469ae36 100644
--- a/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt
+++ b/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ L_intro:
 	mes "[Miriam]";
 	mes "\"Yes, I am. Why? Do you think I am not OK? I am OK. You interrupted my meditation. Now I will need hours to calm down and stay quiet! Yes, yes, I know, I'm a fast talker!\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"In fact, I am fast in everything I do! I can kill a Mountain Snake before it even starts to think about atacking me! Yes my friend, in a battle, speed is power!";
+	mes "\"In fact, I am fast in everything I do! I can kill a Mountain Snake before it even starts to think about attacking me! Yes my friend, in a battle, speed is power!";
 	next;
 	menu
 		"Wow! Very impressi...",-;
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ L_canthelp2:
 	next;
 	mes "\"...\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Well, if you don't have time to help, at least don't make things difficult to me!\"";
+	mes "\"Well, if you don't have time to help, at least don't make things difficult for me!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_ask1:
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ L_ask1:
 	next;
 	menu
 		"Yes, I will get what you want!",-,
-		"No, I have not time right now.",L_canthelp2;
+		"No, I have no time right now.",L_canthelp2;
 	set QUEST_MIRIAM, 2;
 	mes "\"Good. So, run and get it!\"";
 	close;
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ L_ask3:
 	mes "[Miriam]";
 	mes "\"You have a small mind, haven't you? I am meditating here and I asked you to bring me stuff, so I can concentrate better.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"And stop asking so silly questions in the future.\"";
+	mes "\"And stop asking such silly questions in the future.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"So, if you really want to help me now, bring me 5 [Concentration Potions] and 10 [Snake Tongues].\"";
 	close;
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ L_notenough:
 
 L_teach:
 	mes "[Miriam]";
-	mes "\"Hmm... do you think you can learn the special speed skill?\"";
+	mes "\"Hmm... do you think you can learn the special Speed skill?\"";
 	next;
 	menu
 		"Yes, I am prepared...", -,
@@ -155,19 +155,19 @@ L_teach:
 
 L_heavyweight:
 	mes "[Miriam]";
-	mes "\"Wow... Why do you bring so many things with you? You must be carrying more than one third of your own weight! I wont teach you unless you get rid of some stuff... \"";
+	mes "\"Wow... Why do you bring so many things with you? You must be carrying more than one third of your own weight! I won't teach you unless you get rid of some stuff... \"";
 	close;
 
 L_heavymetal:
 	mes "[Miriam]";
-	mes "\"Hmm... I see... You want to be one of those lazy slow warriors... wasting all their strenght carrying kilos of metal clothes... Why no one sees the great advantages of a beautiful, flexible, lightweight armor nowadays?\"";
+	mes "\"Hmm... I see... You want to be one of those lazy slow warriors... wasting all their strength carrying kilos of metal clothes... Why does no one see the great advantages of a beautiful, flexible, lightweight armor nowadays?\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Come back here when you get rid of this junk...\"";
 	close;
 
 L_slow:
 	mes "[Miriam]";
-	mes "Oh, wait, wait... " +@agi+ " Agility? Are you serious? What do you do with all your Character points? Put them all to 'Strenght'? Really... I dont even want to know... Come back here when you have a decent character points distribution!\"";
+	mes "Oh, wait, wait... " +@agi+ " Agility? Are you serious? What do you do with all your Character points? Put them all to 'Strength'? Really... I don't even want to know... Come back here when you have a decent character points distribution!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_lowlevel:
@@ -177,14 +177,14 @@ L_lowlevel:
 
 L_offer:
 	mes "[Miriam]";
-	mes "\"Hmm! You look great on these clothes! They look very comfortable too... And it seems like you are not carrying too much weight.\"";
+	mes "\"Hmm! You look great in these clothes! They look very comfortable too... And it seems like you are not carrying too much weight.\"";
 	next;
 	if (!(getskilllv(SKILL_POOL))) goto L_noskill;
 	menu
-		"Yes, I look really good on this " +@torso$+ ".",-;
+		"Yes, I look really good in this " +@torso$+ ".",-;
 	next;
 	mes "[Miriam]";
-	mes "\"I see. I like the way you distributed your Character Points too... " +@agi+ " points to Agility! You really know how to prepare yourself to a good fight!\"";
+	mes "\"I see. I like the way you distributed your Character Points too... " +@agi+ " points to Agility! You really know how to prepare yourself for a good fight!\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Well... Even if you have a potential to be a good fighter, moving the way you do will not help. You need to be fast to avoid the monsters. \"";
 	next;
@@ -192,14 +192,14 @@ L_offer:
 	next;
 	menu
 		"I'm in! What kind of test is it?",-,
-		"I dont think I need more speed right now",L_giveup;
+		"I don't think I need more speed right now",L_giveup;
 	next;
 
 L_test:
 	mes "[Miriam]";
-	mes "\"Great! The test is simple. You need to run as fast as you can from the place where I am sitting to the mountains and talk to Pachua, the chief. When you get there and talk to Pachua, he will send a special smoke signal to me, so I can know how much time it took for you to go there.\"";
+	mes "\"Great! The test is simple. You need to run as fast as you can from the place where I am sitting to the mountains and talk to Pachua, the chief. When you get there and talk to Pachua, he will send a special smoke signal to me, so I can know how much time it took for you to get there.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"If you make it in a good time, I will teach you the special speeding skill, if not, you can always try again. So, are you ready?\"";
+	mes "\"If you make it in a good time, I will teach you the special speeding skill. If not, you can always try again. So, are you ready?\"";
 	next;
 	menu
 		"Yes, let's do it!",-,
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ L_noskill:
 
 L_giveup:
 	mes "[Miriam]";
-	mes "\"Oh, that is bad... But if you change your mind, come back!\"";
+	mes "\"Oh, that is too bad... But if you change your mind, come back!\"";
 	set QUEST_MIRIAM, 4;
 	close;