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authorWushin <pasekei@gmail.com>2015-05-02 22:33:10 -0500
committerWushin <pasekei@gmail.com>2015-05-02 22:33:10 -0500
commit69f419fed293d22f19f5e2db6c604432834053a1 (patch)
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Merge pull request #61 from nashley/message_edits
Some grammar/spelling/meaning edits for server messages.
-rw-r--r--src/map/chrif.cpp84
-rw-r--r--src/map/script-fun.cpp36
2 files changed, 60 insertions, 60 deletions
diff --git a/src/map/chrif.cpp b/src/map/chrif.cpp
index 3ffeaf2..37efc4e 100644
--- a/src/map/chrif.cpp
+++ b/src/map/chrif.cpp
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ int chrif_changemapserverack(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b06>& fixed)
if (fixed.error == 1)
{
if (battle_config.error_log)
- PRINTF("map server change failed.\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("Changing the map server failed.\n"_fmt);
pc_authfail(sd->status_key.account_id);
return 0;
}
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ int chrif_connectack(Session *s, const Packet_Fixed<0x2af9>& fixed)
{
if (fixed.code)
{
- PRINTF("Connected to char-server failed %d.\n"_fmt, fixed.code);
+ PRINTF("Connecting to char-server failed %d.\n"_fmt, fixed.code);
exit(1);
}
PRINTF("Connected to char-server (connection #%d).\n"_fmt, s);
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ int chrif_sendmapack(Session *, Packet_Fixed<0x2afb> fixed)
{
if (fixed.unknown) //impossible
{
- PRINTF("chrif : send map list to char server failed %d\n"_fmt,
+ PRINTF("chrif: sending the map list to char-server failed %d\n"_fmt,
fixed.unknown);
exit(1);
}
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ void chrif_char_ask_name(AccountId id, CharName character_name, short operation_
fixed_0e.operation = operation_type; // type of operation
if (operation_type == 2)
fixed_0e.ban_add = modif;
- PRINTF("chrif : sended 0x2b0e\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("chrif: sent 0x2b0e\n"_fmt);
send_fpacket<0x2b0e, 44>(char_session, fixed_0e);
}
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ void chrif_char_ask_name(AccountId id, CharName character_name, short operation_
* 4: unban
* 5: changesex
* type of answer:
- * 0: login-server resquest done
+ * 0: login-server request done
* 1: player not found
* 2: gm level too low
* 3: login-server offline
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ int chrif_char_ask_name_answer(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b0f>& fixed)
{
AString output;
if (fixed.error == 1) // player not found
- output = STRPRINTF("The player '%s' doesn't exist."_fmt,
+ output = STRPRINTF("The player, '%s,' doesn't exist."_fmt,
player_name);
else
{
@@ -428,20 +428,20 @@ int chrif_char_ask_name_answer(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b0f>& fixed)
case 1: // block
switch (fixed.error)
{
- case 0: // login-server resquest done
+ case 0: // login-server request done
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server has been asked to block the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server has been asked to block '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
//case 1: // player not found
case 2: // gm level too low
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Your GM level don't authorise you to block the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Your GM level doesn't authorize you to block the player '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
case 3: // login-server offline
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server is offline. Impossible to block the the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server is offline, so it's impossible to block '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
}
@@ -449,20 +449,20 @@ int chrif_char_ask_name_answer(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b0f>& fixed)
case 2: // ban
switch (fixed.error)
{
- case 0: // login-server resquest done
+ case 0: // login-server request done
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server has been asked to ban the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server has been asked to ban '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
//case 1: // player not found
case 2: // gm level too low
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Your GM level don't authorise you to ban the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Your GM level doesn't authorize you to ban '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
case 3: // login-server offline
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server is offline. Impossible to ban the the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server is offline, so it's impossible to ban '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
}
@@ -470,20 +470,20 @@ int chrif_char_ask_name_answer(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b0f>& fixed)
case 3: // unblock
switch (fixed.error)
{
- case 0: // login-server resquest done
+ case 0: // login-server request done
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server has been asked to unblock the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server has been asked to unblock '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
//case 1: // player not found
case 2: // gm level too low
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Your GM level don't authorise you to unblock the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Your GM level doesn't authorize you to unblock '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
case 3: // login-server offline
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server is offline. Impossible to unblock the the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server is offline, so it's impossible to unblock '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
}
@@ -491,20 +491,20 @@ int chrif_char_ask_name_answer(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b0f>& fixed)
case 4: // unban
switch (fixed.error)
{
- case 0: // login-server resquest done
+ case 0: // login-server request done
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server has been asked to unban the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server has been asked to unban '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
//case 1: // player not found
case 2: // gm level too low
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Your GM level don't authorise you to unban the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Your GM level doesn't authorize you to unban '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
case 3: // login-server offline
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server is offline. Impossible to unban the the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server is offline, so it's impossible to unban '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
}
@@ -512,20 +512,20 @@ int chrif_char_ask_name_answer(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b0f>& fixed)
case 5: // changesex
switch (fixed.error)
{
- case 0: // login-server resquest done
+ case 0: // login-server request done
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server has been asked to change the sex of the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server has been asked to change the sex of '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
//case 1: // player not found
case 2: // gm level too low
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Your GM level don't authorise you to change the sex of the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Your GM level doesn't authorize you to change the sex of '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
case 3: // login-server offline
output = STRPRINTF(
- "Login-server is offline. Impossible to change the sex of the the player '%s'."_fmt,
+ "Login-server is offline, so it's impossible to change the sex of '%s'."_fmt,
player_name);
break;
}
@@ -536,7 +536,7 @@ int chrif_char_ask_name_answer(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b0f>& fixed)
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess, output);
}
else
- PRINTF("chrif_char_ask_name_answer failed - player not online.\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("chrif_char_ask_name_answer failed because the player is not online.\n"_fmt);
return 0;
}
@@ -704,14 +704,14 @@ int chrif_accountdeletion(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b13>& fixed)
{
sd->login_id1++; // change identify, because if player come back in char within the 5 seconds, he can change its characters
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
- "Your account has been deleted (disconnection)..."_s);
+ "Your account has been deleted. You will now be disconnected..."_s);
clif_setwaitclose(sd->sess); // forced to disconnect for the change
}
}
else
{
if (sd != nullptr)
- PRINTF("chrif_accountdeletion failed - player not online.\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("chrif_accountdeletion failed because the player is not online.\n"_fmt);
}
return 0;
@@ -741,11 +741,11 @@ int chrif_accountban(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b14>& fixed)
{ // status or final date of a banishment
case 1: // 0 = Unregistered ID
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
- "Your account has 'Unregistered'."_s);
+ "Your account has an unregistered ID."_s);
break;
case 2: // 1 = Incorrect Password
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
- "Your account has an 'Incorrect Password'..."_s);
+ "Your password is incorrect."_s);
break;
case 3: // 2 = This ID is expired
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
@@ -753,7 +753,7 @@ int chrif_accountban(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b14>& fixed)
break;
case 4: // 3 = Rejected from Server
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
- "Your account has been rejected from server."_s);
+ "Your account has been rejected by the server."_s);
break;
case 5: // 4 = You have been blocked by the GM Team
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
@@ -761,19 +761,19 @@ int chrif_accountban(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b14>& fixed)
break;
case 6: // 5 = Your Game's EXE file is not the latest version
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
- "Your Game's EXE file is not the latest version."_s);
+ "You need to update your client."_s);
break;
case 7: // 6 = Your are Prohibited to log in until %s
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
- "Your account has been prohibited to log in."_s);
+ "Your account has been prohibited from logging in."_s);
break;
case 8: // 7 = Server is jammed due to over populated
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
- "Server is jammed due to over populated."_s);
+ "The server is overpopulated."_s);
break;
case 9: // 8 = No MSG (actually, all states after 9 except 99 are No MSG, use only this)
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
- "Your account has not more authorised."_s);
+ "Your account must be authorized."_s);
break;
case 100: // 99 = This ID has been totally erased
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
@@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ int chrif_accountban(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b14>& fixed)
break;
default:
clif_displaymessage(sd->sess,
- "Your account has not more authorised."_s);
+ "Your account must be authorized."_s);
break;
}
}
@@ -800,7 +800,7 @@ int chrif_accountban(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b14>& fixed)
else
{
if (sd != nullptr)
- PRINTF("chrif_accountban failed - player not online.\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("chrif_accountban failed because the player is not online.\n"_fmt);
}
return 0;
@@ -813,7 +813,7 @@ int chrif_accountban(Session *, const Packet_Fixed<0x2b14>& fixed)
static
int chrif_recvgmaccounts(Session *s, const std::vector<Packet_Repeat<0x2b15>>& repeat)
{
- PRINTF("From login-server: receiving of %d GM accounts information.\n"_fmt,
+ PRINTF("Receiving information on %d GM accounts from login-server.\n"_fmt,
pc_read_gm_account(s, repeat));
return 0;
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ static
void chrif_delete(Session *s)
{
assert (s == char_session);
- PRINTF("Map-server can't connect to char-server (connection #%d).\n"_fmt,
+ PRINTF("map-server can't connect to char-server (connection #%d).\n"_fmt,
s);
char_session = nullptr;
}
@@ -1012,7 +1012,7 @@ void chrif_parse(Session *s)
return;
if (battle_config.error_log)
- PRINTF("chrif_parse : unknown packet %d %d\n"_fmt, s,
+ PRINTF("chrif_parse: unknown packet %d %d\n"_fmt, s,
packet_id);
s->set_eof();
return;
@@ -1066,7 +1066,7 @@ void check_connect_char_server(TimerData *, tick_t)
{
if (!char_session)
{
- PRINTF("Attempt to connect to char-server...\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("Attempting to connect to char-server...\n"_fmt);
chrif_state = 0;
char_session = make_connection(map_conf.char_ip, map_conf.char_port,
SessionParsers{.func_parse= chrif_parse, .func_delete= chrif_delete});
diff --git a/src/map/script-fun.cpp b/src/map/script-fun.cpp
index 010b095..142debf 100644
--- a/src/map/script-fun.cpp
+++ b/src/map/script-fun.cpp
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ void builtin_goto(ScriptState *st)
{
if (!AARG(0).is<ScriptDataPos>())
{
- PRINTF("script: goto: not label !\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("script: goto: that's not a label!\n"_fmt);
st->state = ScriptEndState::END;
return;
}
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ void builtin_callfunc(ScriptState *st)
}
OMATCH_CASE_NONE ()
{
- PRINTF("script:callfunc: function not found! [%s]\n"_fmt, str);
+ PRINTF("script: callfunc: function not found! [%s]\n"_fmt, str);
st->state = ScriptEndState::END;
}
}
@@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ void builtin_setarray(ScriptState *st)
if (prefix != '$' && prefix != '@')
{
- PRINTF("builtin_setarray: illegal scope !\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("builtin_setarray: illegal scope!\n"_fmt);
return;
}
if (prefix != '$')
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ void builtin_cleararray(ScriptState *st)
if (prefix != '$' && prefix != '@')
{
- PRINTF("builtin_cleararray: illegal scope !\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("builtin_cleararray: illegal scope!\n"_fmt);
return;
}
if (prefix != '$')
@@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ void builtin_getarraysize(ScriptState *st)
if (prefix != '$' && prefix != '@')
{
- PRINTF("builtin_copyarray: illegal scope !\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("builtin_copyarray: illegal scope!\n"_fmt);
return;
}
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ void builtin_getelementofarray(ScriptState *st)
int i = conv_num(st, &AARG(1));
if (i > 255 || i < 0)
{
- PRINTF("script: getelementofarray (operator[]): param2 illegal number %d\n"_fmt,
+ PRINTF("script: getelementofarray (operator[]): param2 illegal number: %d\n"_fmt,
i);
push_int<ScriptDataInt>(st->stack, 0);
}
@@ -672,7 +672,7 @@ void builtin_getelementofarray(ScriptState *st)
}
else
{
- PRINTF("script: getelementofarray (operator[]): param1 not name !\n"_fmt);
+ PRINTF("script: getelementofarray (operator[]): param1 not named!\n"_fmt);
push_int<ScriptDataInt>(st->stack, 0);
}
}
@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ void builtin_countitem(ScriptState *st)
else
{
if (battle_config.error_log)
- PRINTF("wrong item ID : countitem (%i)\n"_fmt, nameid);
+ PRINTF("wrong item ID: countitem (%i)\n"_fmt, nameid);
}
push_int<ScriptDataInt>(st->stack, count);
@@ -788,7 +788,7 @@ void builtin_checkweight(ScriptState *st)
amount = conv_num(st, &AARG(1));
if (amount <= 0 || !nameid)
{
- //if get wrong item ID or amount<=0, don't count weight of non existing items
+ //If it gets the wrong item ID or the amount<=0, don't count its weight (assume it's a non-existent item)
push_int<ScriptDataInt>(st->stack, 0);
return;
}
@@ -940,7 +940,7 @@ void builtin_delitem(ScriptState *st)
if (!nameid || amount <= 0)
{
- //by Lupus. Don't run FOR if u got wrong item ID or amount<=0
+ //By Lupus. Don't run FOR if you've got the wrong item ID or amount<=0
return;
}
@@ -1949,7 +1949,7 @@ static
void builtin_debugmes(ScriptState *st)
{
RString mes = conv_str(st, &AARG(0));
- PRINTF("script debug : %d %d : %s\n"_fmt,
+ PRINTF("script debug: %d %d: '%s'\n"_fmt,
st->rid, st->oid, mes);
}
@@ -2585,7 +2585,7 @@ void builtin_npcwarp(ScriptState *st)
if (!nd)
{
- PRINTF("builtin_npcwarp: no such npc: %s\n"_fmt, npc);
+ PRINTF("builtin_npcwarp: no such npc: '%s'\n"_fmt, npc);
return;
}
@@ -2628,7 +2628,7 @@ void builtin_npcareawarp(ScriptState *st)
if (!nd)
{
- PRINTF("builtin_npcareawarp: no such npc: %s\n"_fmt, npc);
+ PRINTF("builtin_npcareawarp: no such npc: '%s'\n"_fmt, npc);
return;
}
@@ -2873,7 +2873,7 @@ void builtin_shop(ScriptState *st)
nd = npc_name2id(name);
if (!nd)
{
- PRINTF("builtin_shop: no such npc: %s\n"_fmt, name);
+ PRINTF("builtin_shop: no such npc: '%s'\n"_fmt, name);
return;
}
@@ -2906,7 +2906,7 @@ void builtin_fakenpcname(ScriptState *st)
dumb_ptr<npc_data> nd = npc_name2id(name);
if (!nd)
{
- PRINTF("builtin_fakenpcname: no such npc: %s\n"_fmt, name);
+ PRINTF("builtin_fakenpcname: no such npc: '%s'\n"_fmt, name);
return;
}
nd->name = newname;
@@ -2968,7 +2968,7 @@ void builtin_strnpcinfo(ScriptState *st)
nd = npc_name2id(npc);
if (!nd)
{
- PRINTF("builtin_strnpcinfo: no such npc: %s\n"_fmt, npc);
+ PRINTF("builtin_strnpcinfo: no such npc: '%s'\n"_fmt, npc);
return;
}
} else {
@@ -3008,7 +3008,7 @@ void builtin_getnpcx(ScriptState *st)
nd = npc_name2id(name);
if (!nd)
{
- PRINTF("builtin_getnpcx: no such npc: %s\n"_fmt, name);
+ PRINTF("builtin_getnpcx: no such npc: '%s'\n"_fmt, name);
return;
}
} else {
@@ -3032,7 +3032,7 @@ void builtin_getnpcy(ScriptState *st)
nd = npc_name2id(name);
if (!nd)
{
- PRINTF("builtin_getnpcy: no such npc: %s\n"_fmt, name);
+ PRINTF("builtin_getnpcy: no such npc: '%s'\n"_fmt, name);
return;
}
} else {