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diff --git a/world/map/npc/017-4/waric.txt b/world/map/npc/017-4/waric.txt
index 340f2959..663d6c07 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/017-4/waric.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/017-4/waric.txt
@@ -27,25 +27,25 @@
if (OrumQuest > 15) goto L_Mistrust;
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"You! You're really more insistent than it's good for you...\"";
+ mes "\"You! You really are far too persistent to know what is good for you!\"";
mes "He turns towards Orum.";
next;
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"It seems your ridiculous Guarding Spirit failed his task.";
- mes "Deal with this, we really can't afford more of this distractions.\"";
+ mes "\"It seems your ridiculous Guarding Spirit has failed at his task.";
+ mes "Deal with this. We cannot afford any more of these distractions.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Mistrust:
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"So you say you want to help us? You don't look very competent.";
- mes "Also, I don't see what motivates you to do this.\"";
+ mes "\"So, you say you want to help us? You do not look very competent.";
+ mes "Also, I do not see what motivation you have to help.\"";
next;
- mes "\"Show your usefulness, then I might take you serious.\"";
+ mes "\"Demonstrate your worth and I might take you seriously.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Flower1:
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"You placed the first flower. I'm surprised, I didn't expect you to actually stay and be useful.\"";
+ mes "\"You placed the first flower. Why, I am surprised! I did not expect you to actually stay and become useful.\"";
goto L_Close;
// TODO: enable this when adding the spells
// also add logic to the other label's dialogs/eventually change their dialog to fit better
@@ -60,8 +60,8 @@ L_Flower1:
if (!@killed_mouboo && !@cut_tree)
goto L_Undecided;
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"Hm. Actually, I could do that. You seem to have some potential.";
- mes "But first go on with the next summoning artifact.\"";
+ mes "\"Hmm. I suppose I could do that. You seem to have some potential.";
+ mes "First, proceed with the next summoning artifact.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Flower2:
@@ -71,18 +71,18 @@ L_Flower2:
L_Flower3:
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"I saw that you helped to create the third flower which you just placed. Good.\"";
+ mes "\"I saw that you helped to create and place the third flower. Good.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Flower4:
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"We're very close to reach our goal, now that you've placed the fourth flower. Keep it up.\"";
+ mes "\"Now that you have placed the fourth flower, we are very close to reaching our goal. Keep it up.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Flower5:
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"Hahaha, excellent. You handled the creation of our pentagram very well. I'll keep that in mind.";
- mes "I advised Orum to give you some reward, did you already talk to him?\"";
+ mes "\"Hahaha, excellent. You handled the creation of our pentagram very well. I will be keeping that in mind.";
+ mes "I have advised Orum to give you a reward. Go now and speak with him.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Spells:
@@ -93,14 +93,14 @@ L_Spells:
L_Undecided:
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"Well. I could. But I'm not sure you're trustworthy.\"";
+ mes "\"Well, I could. However, I am not sure you are all that trustworthy.\"";
next;
- mes "\"How can I know you're not going to run to Sagatha with what I'd teach you?\"";
+ mes "\"How do I know you will not run off to Sagatha with what I would be teaching you?\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Sagatha:
mes "[Waric]";
- mes "\"You're already a student of Sagatha. I won't teach you anything.\"";
+ mes "\"You are already a student of Sagatha. I will not teach you anything!\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close:
@@ -142,4 +142,4 @@ L_Close:
OnInit:
if (!debug)
disablenpc "DebugFlowerP";
-}
+} \ No newline at end of file