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Diffstat (limited to 'npc/042-2/sorfina.txt')
| -rw-r--r-- | npc/042-2/sorfina.txt | 13 |
1 files changed, 6 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt b/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt index a422d428..cc8a5357 100644 --- a/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt +++ b/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ if (sorfina == 1) goto L_Clothes; mes "[Old Woman]"; - mes "\"Ah, you're waking up. It seems you collapsed after you left the boat that brought you to Tulimshar."; + mes "\"Ah, you woke up. It seems you collapsed after you left the boat that brought you to Tulimshar."; mes "A group of ragtags immediatly took advantage of that and stole all your stuff!\""; next; mes "\"My little granddaughter Tanisha saw that, but couldn't do something to stop them."; @@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ next; mes "[Old Woman]"; mes "\"I'm glad you're feeling better now. You're not used to the hot weather, right?"; - mes "Are you here to look for some work? Many young people come to our Tulimshar for this reason.\""; + mes "Are you here to look for a job? Many young people come to our Tulimshar for this reason.\""; next; - mes "\"I can tell you some useful things, if you want to hear.\""; - mes "\"Oh, and by the way my name is Sorfina.\""; + mes "\"I can tell you some useful things, if you want to hear."; + mes "Oh, and by the way my name is Sorfina.\""; next; menu "That would be great!",L_Tut, @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ L_Tut: next; mes "\"Ok, I hope you didn't forget how to walk. Just use the arrow keys or click at the place you want to go to.\""; next; - mes "\"And you really should get dressed again. I gave you an old shirt of my son.\""; + mes "\"And you really should get dressed again. I gave you an old shirt from my son.\""; next; set sorfina, 1; L_Naked: @@ -181,7 +181,6 @@ L_Hasan: next; mes "\"However, the scorpions poison caused a bad fever and after Hasan had recovered from that, he was even more malicious than before.\""; mes "She sighs."; - next; if (hasan == 1) set hasan, 2; close; @@ -192,7 +191,7 @@ L_SkipTut: next; menu "Thinking about it twice... please tell me.",L_Tut, - "Yeah, but thanks for the offer. Bye",-; + "Yeah, but thanks for the offer. Bye.",-; mes "[Sorfina]"; mes "\"If you think so. Good luck.\""; set hasan, 0; |