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| -rw-r--r-- | world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt | 17 |
2 files changed, 9 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt b/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt index f678cce2..c72a17f7 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ L_Block: end; L_Weak: - message strcharinfo(0), "I cannot enter. The magic is to strong. Maybe I should train some more."; + message strcharinfo(0), "I cannot enter. The magic is too strong. Maybe I should train some more."; end; } diff --git a/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt b/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt index 9522ebd4..d61437e2 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt @@ -45,11 +45,11 @@ L_Talk: goto L_Talk1; if (@talk == 2) goto L_Talk2; - mes "The old man reads a book and looks up when he sees you comming"; - mes "He looks at you angrily"; + mes "The old man reads a book and looks up when he sees you coming."; + mes "He looks at you angrily."; next; mes "[Mirak]"; - mes "\"Hi my name is Mirak. You might have the impression that I am nice, but I am NOT! I want to be left alone to read at piece! I tried that at my mansion in Port City but it did not work. My damn brother, he always kept going on about Bat Wings...\""; + mes "\"Hi, my name is Mirak. You might have the impression that I am nice, but I am NOT! I want to be left alone to read in peace! I tried that at my mansion in Port City but it did not work. My damn brother, he always kept going on about Bat Wings...\""; next; mes "Suddenly his face gets red. He breathes slowly three times..."; next; @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ L_Talk2: mes "[Mirak]"; mes "\"What do you want?!\""; menu - "Nothing", -, + "Nothing.", -, "Money!", L_Quest; mes "[Mirak]"; mes "\"Ahhhh! Get lost, or you'll regret it!\""; @@ -82,7 +82,6 @@ L_Talk2: close; L_Quest: - set @dq_cost, DailyQuestPoints; set @dq_money, 20; set @dq_exp, 20; @@ -94,9 +93,9 @@ L_Quest: goto L_Exit; L_TooSoon: - mes "Mirak looks up sees you and gets angry"; + mes "Mirak looks up, sees you, and gets angry."; mes "[Mirak]"; - mes "\"I told you not to bother me again! Thats why I paid you!\""; + mes "\"I told you not to bother me again! That's why I paid you!\""; goto L_Kill; L_Kill: @@ -106,10 +105,10 @@ L_Kill: callsub S_Update_Mask_Annoy; set Mirak_Bantime, gettimetick(2) + 30; // Real: 86400; set Mirak_Questtime, 0; - mes "The old man stands up and looks at you angier than ever. He mumbles something and your head explodes."; + mes "The old man stands up and looks at you angrier than ever. He mumbles something and your head explodes."; next; mes "[Mirak]"; - mes "\"That's what you get for annoying me! I studied under the Mage of Tulimshar!"; + mes "\"That's what you get for annoying me! I studied under the Mages of Tulimshar!"; mes "I feel better now.\""; next; mes "The old man sits back down and continues to read."; |