I adjusted some dialog in entertainer.txt rewards_master.txt sandra.txt luca.txt bard.txt

5 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt
index 879ba934..4278bb7a 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ L_Q_sagatha:
     mes "\"Sagatha!  Ah, such a wonderful and mysterious being; the center of many a tale...\"";
     next;
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
-    mes "\"Some say that she is the most powerful witch in all of Argaes.  I don't know whether that is true, but I am quite certain that the is the most beautiful of all the witches!  Alas, she will let no man touch her...\"";
+    mes "\"Some say that she is the most powerful witch in all of Argaes.  I don't know whether that is true or not, but I am quite certain that she is the most beautiful witch of all!  Alas, she will let no man touch her...\"";
     mes "He sighs.";
     next;
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ L_Q_sagatha:
 
 L_Q_auldsbel:
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
-    mes "\"Auldsbel is some wizard from further north, from what I have gathered.  He bought a hut near Hurnscald some years back and often comes here to experiment on things, probably because he is not allowed to do these experiments where he comes from.\"";
+    mes "\"Auldsbel is a wizard further north. From what I have gathered he bought a hut near Hurnscald some years back and often comes here to experiment on things. This is probably because he is not allowed to do these experiments where he comes from.\"";
     next;
     goto L_Main;
 
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/entertainer.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/entertainer.txt
index 5fe8cbc3..d31c6232 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/entertainer.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/entertainer.txt
@@ -7,17 +7,17 @@
     mes "[Entertainer]";
     mes "\"Yes how can I help you?\"";
     menu
-        "What are those emotions above your head?", L_Learn,
-        "Nothing I guess", -;
+        "How are you showing emotions above your head?", L_Learn,
+        "Never mind", -;
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Learn:
     mes "[Entertainer]";
     mes "\"They are called emotes, I use them to express how I am feeling";
-    mes "I can teach you to do them too\"";
+    mes "I can teach you if you'd like?\"";
     menu
-        "Ok sure", L_Learn2,
-        "Why would I need to that", -;
+        "Yes please.", L_Learn2,
+        "I don't see the point right now.", -;
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Learn2:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/luca.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/luca.txt
index 73f838c1..758fd2d5 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/luca.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/luca.txt
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ L_teach0_follow:
     mes "He takes off a pendant he is wearing and holds it up.";
     next;
     mes "[Luca the Hunter]";
-    mes "\"See that fang at the end of the chain? Keep staring at it at it.\"";
+    mes "\"See that fang at the end of the chain? Keep staring at it.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Luca the Hunter]";
     mes "He starts swinging the pendant back and forth.";
@@ -161,12 +161,12 @@ L_explain_focus:
     if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0)
         mes "\"Right now you can't focus on anything yet, so I'll first have to teach you a simple skill to keep your focus.\"";
     if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 1)
-        mes "\"Right now you can only focus on one thing at a time. So if you want to change, you have to forget whatever else you've focused on.\"";
+        mes "\"Right now you can only focus on one thing at a time. So if you want to change what your focus is, you have to forget whatever else you've focused on.\"";
     if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) > 1)
         mes "\"You can focus on " + getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) + " skills right now.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Luca the Hunter]";
-    mes "\"You can come back to me to focus or unfocus whenever you want, I'm here all day.\"";
+    mes "\"You can come back to me to focus or unfocus a skill whenever you want, I'm here all day.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"For unfocusing you need to bring a potion; a special potion. That potion is not the easiest to get, but I am sure you are able to.\"";
     next;
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ L_explain_skills:
 
 L_explain_work:
     mes "[Luca the Hunter]";
-    mes "\"Well, skills allow you to be better in some things, or just to do what you couldn't do without them. When you've learned a skill and are focusing on it, then it affects what you do.\"";
+    mes "\"Well, skills allow you to be better in some things, or allow to do what you couldn't do without them. When you've learned a skill and are focusing on it, then it affects what you do.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Luca the Hunter]";
     mes "\"Now, when you start out with a skill, you won't be very good at it yet. But if you keep practicing you'll learn how to get better.\"";
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/rewards_master.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/rewards_master.txt
index 04cc9ce8..abf85ce8 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/rewards_master.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/rewards_master.txt
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ L_Give_all_loop:
 L_Give_all_next:
     next;
     mes "[Ishi the Rewards Master]";
-    mes "\"You have brought lots of items now. You have still " + Mobpt + " monster points. Shall we continue?\"";
+    mes "\"You have received a lot of items. You still have " + Mobpt + " monster points. Shall we continue?\"";
     menu
         "Yes", L_Give_all,
         "No", L_Close;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/sandra.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/sandra.txt
index 238370dc..10d014dd 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/sandra.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/sandra.txt
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ L_Start:
 
 L_Opening0:
     mes "[Sandra]";
-    mes "\"In the outskirts of Tulimshar, there are some scorpions...  I need a favor, please help me!  Will you?\"";
+    mes "\"In the outskirts of Tulimshar, there are some scorpions...  I need  help!  Will you help?\"";
     next;
     goto L_Ask;