Spelling and grammar corrections for Blue Sage quest.

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt
index c5d0ab12..727d3d21 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 
     mes "You tell him about your conversation with Peetu, how he's blaming himself and his worries about losing his job.";
     next;
-    mes "Oskari keeps silent a moment after you end, pondering. Then he talks to you.";
+    mes "Oskari keeps silent for a moment after you finish, pondering. Then he talks to you.";
     mes "[Oskari]";
     mes "\"You know, Peetu is one of my most experienced and reliable employees. This whole situation is very disquieting, not to say suspicious.\"";
     next;
@@ -32,10 +32,10 @@
     next;
     mes "\"As someone who's not a member of our team you might be able to get a more unbiased view of the situation, besides the fact that all of us are very busy with getting the situation under control again.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I suggest to start by talking to Peetu again to get a precise idea of his workflow and what he thinks that happened.";
-    mes "Oh, and please tell him that I'm not considering firing him in the current situation. That might be needed to calm him down to get meaningful information.\"";
+    mes "\"I suggest to start by talking to Peetu again to get a precise idea of his workflow and what he thinks happened.";
+    mes "Oh, and please tell him that I'm not considering firing him in the current situation. You might need that to calm him down and get meaningful information.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"You should find out if someone observed something unusual during the time before the accident happened.\"";
+    mes "\"You should find out if someone observed anything unusual during the time before the accident happened.\"";
     set @investigate, 2;
     callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate";
     goto L_Close;
@@ -47,16 +47,16 @@ L_Investigate:
         menu
             "I'm still collecting information.",L_Close;
     next;
-    mes "You explain who you talked to, the helpers positive opinion about Peetu and what you found out about the suspicious visitor.";
+    mes "You explain who you talked to, the helpers positive opinions of Peetu and what you found out about the suspicious visitor.";
     mes "[Oskari]";
     mes "\"With a mask you say? This reminds me... wait a moment.\"";
     mes "He turns to his desk and searches through some papers.";
     next;
     mes "[Oskari]";
     mes "\"Mh... yes. It fits together.";
-    mes "Listen, this is a letter from Chief Warrick from Santa's team. It seems they encountered some sabotaging during their preparations for the Christmas time, the letter mentions a masked person as well.\"";
+    mes "Listen, this is a letter from Chief Warrick on Santa's team. It seems they encountered some sabotaging during their preparations for the Christmas time... the letter mentions a masked person as well.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"And there are some reports about cases of unusal behaviour of native animals in various places of Kaizei that came to the Sages notice.\"";
+    mes "\"And there are some reports about cases of unusal behaviour from native animals in various places of Kaizei that came to the Sages notice.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"And now this accident in our house, also a person with a mask... and given the context of the recent frictions within the Sages...\"";
     mes "Oskari seems rather excited.";
@@ -72,9 +72,9 @@ L_Investigate:
     next;
     mes "\"However, taking all these different events into account, I came to the suspicion that there might be a connection. Of course we don't have evidence yet, so I don't want to be too sure. Well, I'll bring this to the Sages' notice.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"You were a great help! I'll inform Nikolai about your involvement in clarifing this matter.\"";
+    mes "\"You were a great help! I'll inform Nikolai about your involvement in clarifying this matter.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"And you should also talk with Peetu, I'm sure he'll be relieved to hear about the clarification of this matter.\"";
+    mes "\"And you should also talk with Peetu, I'm sure he'll be relieved to hear about the clarification of this matter too.\"";
     set @investigate, 11;
     callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate";
     goto L_Close;
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ L_GoodJob:
         "Can you tell me something about the Sages?",-;
 
     mes "[Oskari]";
-    mes "\"Oh, sure. I'm a bit busy right now, but you were a great help, so I think I can take some minutes for you. What do you want to know?\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, sure. I'm a bit busy right now, but you were a great help, so I think I can take a few minutes for you. What do you want to know?\"";
     menu
         "What exactly are the Sages and what do they do?",L_Sages,
         "What was that conflict you were talking about?",L_Conflict,
@@ -99,9 +99,9 @@ L_Sages:
     mes "He sighs.";
     next;
     mes "[Oskari]";
-    mes "\"However, they live in different places all over Kaizei, but they meet sometimes to discuss differents matters. They work hard for the prosperity of this continent, trying to improve the living conditions by both political work and magical researches, with the aid of their helpers.\"";
+    mes "\"However, they live in different places all over Kaizei, but they meet sometimes to discuss different matters. They work hard for the prosperity of this continent, trying to improve the living conditions by both political work and magical research, with the aid of their helpers.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"The politics on Kaizei are rather complicated, the Sages have great influence, but there are also other organziations and groups. Due to the harsh climate on this continent, villages or towns can be cut off the rest of the world for several weeks sometimes, so most of them tend to be rather independent.\"";
+    mes "\"The politics on Kaizei are rather complicated. The Sages have great influence, but there are also other organizations and groups. Due to the harsh climate on this continent, villages or towns can be cut off from the rest of the world for several weeks sometimes, so most of them tend to be rather independent.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Also there's the Order of Ice, an organization which represents the national interests of Kaizei in a rather narrow-minded way compared to the Sages.\"";
     goto L_Close;
@@ -112,9 +112,9 @@ L_Conflict:
     next;
     mes "\"Basically there was a disagreement between the Sages. Usually those things can be solved by discussion, but this time... things got rather personal and one of the members accused Santa of valuing his own interests over the general good.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"This of course is nonsense, Santa would never do that, and it's more that the person accusing him has been suspected to act this way. The other Sages were on Santa's side and I fear this harsh rejection caused a lot of painful feelings.\"";
+    mes "\"This, of course, is nonsense. Santa would never do that, and it's more that the person accusing him has been suspected to act this way. The other Sages were on Santa's side and I fear this harsh rejection caused a lot of painful feelings.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Personally I think that he was jealous about Santa's influence and high position for quite a while. However, he took this as a reason to leave the Sages and based on our insights, so it seems he decided to work against the Sages.";
+    mes "\"Personally I think that he has been jealous of Santa's influence and high position for quite a while. However, he took this as a reason to leave the Sages and based on our insights, it seems he decided to work against the Sages.";
     mes "It really is a shame.\"";
     goto L_Close;