Spell check of new and updated Tulimshar NPCs. -Frost

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/024-1/eomie.txt b/world/map/npc/024-1/eomie.txt
index 0bff69d4..6999eccf 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/024-1/eomie.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/024-1/eomie.txt
@@ -46,10 +46,10 @@
     if (@state != 7)
         goto L_Close;
     menu
-        "I have this magic fertilizer from Tinris and need a spell casted on it.",-;
+        "I have this magic fertilizer from Tinris and need a spell cast on it.",-;
     mes "[Eomie]";
     mes "\"Oh? I see, that's a difficult task.";
-    mes "I'd be glad to help you, but unfortunaly I can't interrupt the magic I use to keep this spot of grass alive.\"";
+    mes "I'd be glad to help you, but unfortunately I can't interrupt the magic I use to keep this spot of grass alive.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"It's unusually hot at the moment, even for this desert area. It might have something to do with the aftereffects of the earthquake.\"";
     menu
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ L_GetStuff: // @state == 8
     menu
         "I have it.",-,
         "Where can I get Grass Seeds?",L_Hurnscald,
-        "How to get Ice Cubes? Where in the desert!",L_Mine,
+        "How can I get Ice Cubes? We're in the desert!",L_Mine,
         "Ok, I'll go and get it.",L_Close;
     if ((countitem("GrassSeed") < @grass_amount) || (countitem("BottleOfWater") < @water_amount) || (countitem("IceCube") < @ice_amount))
         goto L_NoItem;
@@ -75,16 +75,16 @@ L_GetStuff: // @state == 8
     callsub S_Update_Mask;
     mes "[Eomie]";
     mes "\"Very good.\"";
-    mes "She takes the things you brought her and uses them to create some balloon of coolness around the spot of grass.";
+    mes "She takes the things you brought her and uses them to create a bubble of coolness around the spot of grass.";
     misceffect sfx_magic_nature;
     next;
     mes "[Eomie]";
-    mes "\"This should last long enough to keep the spot of grass alive until I casted the spell on the fertilizer. And if some of it shrivels I still have the seeds you brought me which I can use to recover it.\"";
+    mes "\"This should last long enough to keep the spot of grass alive until I cast the spell on the fertilizer. And if some of it shrivels I still have the seeds you brought me which I can use to recover it.\"";
     next;
     mes "She takes the fertilizer and casts some invocations. After a while she's done and gives it back to you with a smile.";
     misceffect sfx_magic_nature;
     mes "[Eomie]";
-    mes "\"This should help you. I'm glad you're taking care about the plants. Not enough people do that nowadays.\"";
+    mes "\"This should help you. I'm glad you're taking care of the plants. Not enough people do that nowadays.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Hurnscald: // player asked how to get Grass Seeds
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ L_Mine: // player asked how to get Ice Cubes
     next;
     mes "\"But I heard that Ice Goblins were seen in this underground palace that was discovered in the desert south of the city. Maybe you can find Ice Cubes in there.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Though they don't let in everyone. Miners, Soldiers and sometimes an adventurer. I suggest to talk to Lieutnant Dausen about that.\"";
+    mes "\"Though they don't let in everyone. Miners, Soldiers and sometimes an adventurer. I suggest you talk to Lieutenant Dausen about that.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_CastedSpell: // @state >= 9 but below 14
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ L_CastedSpell: // @state >= 9 but below 14
     if (@state != 13)
         goto L_Close;
     menu
-        "It was and he created this Silk Headband as present for you.",-,
+        "It was and he created this Silk Headband as a present for you.",-,
         "(Mumble something and leave)",L_Close;
     if (countitem("SilkHeadband") < 1)
         goto L_NoItem;