Dialogue changes to NPCs

Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf."
Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog
Improved grammar and wording
Replaced ". " with ". "
Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – ").

3 files changed, 41 insertions, 41 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/021-2/bakery.txt b/world/map/npc/021-2/bakery.txt
index a063811e..9a494a7a 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/021-2/bakery.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/021-2/bakery.txt
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ L_Next:
     next;
     mes "[Riskim]";
     mes "";
-    mes "\"We'll need extra chocolate for that one.  If you can give me ten pieces of chocolate and that potion, plus 400 GP, I will bake you a special Chocolate Cake that hides the taste.\"";
+    mes "\"We'll need extra chocolate for that one. If you can give me ten pieces of chocolate and that potion, plus 400 GP, I will bake you a special Chocolate Cake that hides the taste.\"";
     next;
     menu
         "I will get them for you.", L_End,
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ L_Continue:
     mes "[Riskim]";
     mes "";
     mes "Riskim hands you the cake.";
-    mes "\"Here you are.  I hope that this works.\"";
+    mes "\"Here you are. I hope that this works.\"";
     close;
 
 L_lacking_Zeny:
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ L_lacking_Zeny:
 L_lacking_ingredients:
     mes "[Riskim]";
     mes "";
-    mes "\"Sorry, but I need ten Chocolate Bars AND your cure potion for this.  Please come back later when you have everything.\"";
+    mes "\"Sorry, but I need ten Chocolate Bars AND your cure potion for this. Please come back later when you have everything.\"";
     close;
 
 L_lace_cupcake:
@@ -153,6 +153,6 @@ L_End:
 {
     mes "[Ontas]";
     mes "";
-    mes "\"We come here every week.  This place has some of the best bread I've ever eaten!\"";
+    mes "\"We come here every week. This place has some of the best bread I've ever eaten!\"";
     close;
 }
diff --git a/world/map/npc/021-2/heathin.txt b/world/map/npc/021-2/heathin.txt
index 07ec1c6a..45f041c5 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/021-2/heathin.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/021-2/heathin.txt
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-//Items for NPC are incomplete.  Makes "simple ring" which can be crafted into a useful ring by Inya and terranite armor.
+//Items for NPC are incomplete. Makes "simple ring" which can be crafted into a useful ring by Inya and terranite armor.
 
 021-2.gat,70,129,0|script|Heathin|147,
 {
@@ -24,14 +24,14 @@
     if (BaseLevel >= 60) goto L_Heathin_Start;
 
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Hello, friend.  I am Heathin, a smith of exotic metals. \"";
+    mes "\"Hello, friend. I am Heathin, a smith of exotic metals. \"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Start:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Hello, friend.  I am Heathin, a smith of exotic metals. \"";
+    mes "\"Hello, friend. I am Heathin, a smith of exotic metals. \"";
     next;
-    mes "\"By the order of the Wizard's Council, I've been commissioned to forge gold ingots from gold pieces.  I need to collect as many gold pieces as I can manage, forge them and give the ingots to the Council.  However, I am but a simple smith and cannot complete this effort by myself.\"";
+    mes "\"By the order of the Wizard's Council, I've been commissioned to forge gold ingots from gold pieces. I need to collect as many gold pieces as I can manage, forge them and give the ingots to the Council. However, I am but a simple smith and cannot complete this effort by myself.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Forging gold ingots is not just a simple matter of gold falling from the sky!  I need individuals that can gather not just the gold, but also help collect Coal to heat my forge.\"";
     next;
@@ -46,17 +46,17 @@ L_Heathin_Start:
 L_Heathin_Help:
     set HEATHIN_QUEST, 1;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Excellent!  I am always glad when someone can be of service not just to me, but to all of Tulimshar.  Please get me 50 Coal and 100,000 gold pieces, and you will be compensated for your efforts.\"";
+    mes "\"Excellent!  I am always glad when someone can be of service not just to me, but to all of Tulimshar. Please get me 50 Coal and 100,000 gold pieces, and you will be compensated for your efforts.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_No:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"That is too bad.  If you change your mind, I shall still be here, attempting to get my commission done.\"";
+    mes "\"That is too bad. If you change your mind, I shall still be here, attempting to get my commission done.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Interested:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Well, when I am crafting these ingots, there are always stray metals left over.  Surely I could forge them into ingots again, but I'd rather ensure that my commission be completed.  I am willing to forge a Simple Ring for you, which could be made more beautiful by a skilled jeweler.\"";
+    mes "\"Well, when I am crafting these ingots, there are always stray metals left over. Surely I could forge them into ingots again, but I'd rather ensure that my commission be completed. I am willing to forge a Simple Ring for you, which could be made more beautiful by a skilled jeweler.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"What you do with the ring after I am done forging it is your own business, but it could come in handy.\"";
     next;
@@ -78,23 +78,23 @@ L_Heathin_Ring_Award:
     delitem "Coal", 50;
     getitem "SimpleRing", 1;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"You have brought the Coal and gold pieces.  This is most excellent!  As promised, I have crafted a ring for you.  Hopefully you will find it useful.\"";
+    mes "\"You have brought the Coal and gold pieces. This is most excellent!  As promised, I have crafted a ring for you. Hopefully you will find it useful.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Time to smelt these gold pieces into ingots.  The Council will be pleased.  Thank you for your efforts!\"";
+    mes "\"Time to smelt these gold pieces into ingots. The Council will be pleased. Thank you for your efforts!\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Ring_Wait:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Hello again.  Making golden ingots keeps me pretty busy.  I certainly hope I can fulfill my commission soon so that I can move on to bigger and better things.\"";
+    mes "\"Hello again. Making golden ingots keeps me pretty busy. I certainly hope I can fulfill my commission soon so that I can move on to bigger and better things.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"The pay is good, certainly, but I am a far better smith than this.  If you can bring me 100,000 gold pieces and 50 Coal, it would surely get me to my goal faster.\"";
+    mes "\"The pay is good, certainly, but I am a far better smith than this. If you can bring me 100,000 gold pieces and 50 Coal, it would surely get me to my goal faster.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"I will be sure to provide an apt award once you are done.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Ring_Thanks:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Thank you again for helping me fulfil my commission.  It has made a signficant dint in what the Council requires of me.  Perhaps I may be of service to you again one day!\"";
+    mes "\"Thank you again for helping me fulfil my commission. It has made a signficant dint in what the Council requires of me. Perhaps I may be of service to you again one day!\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Hood:
@@ -103,20 +103,20 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Hood:
     next;
     mes "\"This metal is almost as strong as steel, but is also very ductile.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"With some effort, I can make this metal form rings tighter than any chain mail.  It isn't the prettiest in hue, but its uses can be many.\"";
+    mes "\"With some effort, I can make this metal form rings tighter than any chain mail. It isn't the prettiest in hue, but its uses can be many.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Unfortunately, it seems to be difficult to gather.  Most that have searched for Terranite Ore either cannot find it or have never returned...\"";
+    mes "\"Unfortunately, it seems to be difficult to gather. Most that have searched for Terranite Ore either cannot find it or have never returned...\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I may be an excellent smith, but I certainly am no combatant.  However, I would enjoy turning this ore into something useful, perhaps some type of armor to help those that may be braver.\"";
+    mes "\"I may be an excellent smith, but I certainly am no combatant. However, I would enjoy turning this ore into something useful, perhaps some type of armor to help those that may be braver.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"So, what do you say?  Are you interested?\"";
     menu
-        "No, thank you.  Maybe later.", L_Heathin_Terranite_No,
+        "No, thank you. Maybe later.", L_Heathin_Terranite_No,
         "Armor, you say?  Definitely!", L_Heathin_Terranite_Yes;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_No:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Ah, that is too bad.  Come by again anytime.\"";
+    mes "\"Ah, that is too bad. Come by again anytime.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Yes:
@@ -126,9 +126,9 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Yes:
     next;
     mes "Heathin thinks for a moment.";
     next;
-    mes "\"Ah, I know!  I will make a helm...  Well, more like a hood, since it will be woven.\"";
+    mes "\"Ah, I know!  I will make a helm... Well, more like a hood, since it will be woven.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"It will require a great amount of heat, if the rumors are to be believed.  For this, I will need 100 Coal to keep my forge burning hot.  I will also need 10 Terranite Ore to make the armor.  Of course, such work does not come cheap.  While I may enjoy my work, my time and effort is very valuable.  To compensate my efforts I will need 200,000 gold pieces.  Please come back with the gold, Coal and ore and I'll make this hood for you.\"";
+    mes "\"It will require a great amount of heat, if the rumors are to be believed. For this, I will need 100 Coal to keep my forge burning hot. I will also need 10 Terranite Ore to make the armor. Of course, such work does not come cheap. While I may enjoy my work, my time and effort is very valuable. To compensate my efforts I will need 200,000 gold pieces. Please come back with the gold, Coal and ore and I'll make this hood for you.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Hood_Forge:
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Hood_Forge:
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Hood_Wait:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"I am very busy right now.  If you could bring me 10 Terranite Ore, 100 Coal and 200,000 gold pieces, I will make that terranite hood for you.\"";
+    mes "\"I am very busy right now. If you could bring me 10 Terranite Ore, 100 Coal and 200,000 gold pieces, I will make that terranite hood for you.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Hood_Ready:
@@ -156,15 +156,15 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Hood_Ready:
     set HEATHIN_QUEST, 5;
     getitem "TerraniteHelmet", 1;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"I am all done with your terranite hood.  I hope you enjoy it!  I have some work to wrap up for the Council, but come back later and I might be able to assist you again.\"";
+    mes "\"I am all done with your terranite hood. I hope you enjoy it!  I have some work to wrap up for the Council, but come back later and I might be able to assist you again.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Legs:
     set HEATHIN_QUEST, 6;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"I am glad you are back!  I've just finished up some more of my commission.  Now I can get back to making terranite armor for you.  This time I will make some pants, but they need more ore, more Coal to heat my forge and of course, more gold for my efforts.\"";
+    mes "\"I am glad you are back!  I've just finished up some more of my commission. Now I can get back to making terranite armor for you. This time I will make some pants, but they need more ore, more Coal to heat my forge and of course, more gold for my efforts.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"To make terranite pants, I need 200 Coal, 30 Terranite Ore and 400,000 gold pieces.  The faster you bring this to me, the faster I can have your terranite pants ready.\"";
+    mes "\"To make terranite pants, I need 200 Coal, 30 Terranite Ore and 400,000 gold pieces. The faster you bring this to me, the faster I can have your terranite pants ready.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Legs_Forge:
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Legs_Forge:
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Legs_Wait:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"I am very busy right now.  If you could bring me 30 Terranite Ore, 200 Coal and 400,000 gold pieces, I will make those terranite pants for you.\"";
+    mes "\"I am very busy right now. If you could bring me 30 Terranite Ore, 200 Coal and 400,000 gold pieces, I will make those terranite pants for you.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Legs_Ready:
@@ -192,15 +192,15 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Legs_Ready:
     set HEATHIN_QUEST, 8;
     getitem "TerraniteLegs", 1;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"I am all done with your terranite pants.  Hope you enjoy them!  I have some more work to complete for the Council.  Come back later and I might be able to assist you again.\"";
+    mes "\"I am all done with your terranite pants. Hope you enjoy them!  I have some more work to complete for the Council. Come back later and I might be able to assist you again.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Chest_Armor:
     set HEATHIN_QUEST, 9;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Good to see you again.  I have just finished up some more of my commission.  Now I can get back to making terranite armor for you.  This time, I will make some terranite chest armor, but it needs more ore, more Coal for my forge and of course, more gold to compensate for my efforts.\"";
+    mes "\"Good to see you again. I have just finished up some more of my commission. Now I can get back to making terranite armor for you. This time, I will make some terranite chest armor, but it needs more ore, more Coal for my forge and of course, more gold to compensate for my efforts.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"To make terranite chest armor, I need 250 Coal, 40 Terranite Ore and 500,000 gold pieces.  The faster you bring this to me, the faster I can have your terranite armor ready.\"";
+    mes "\"To make terranite chest armor, I need 250 Coal, 40 Terranite Ore and 500,000 gold pieces. The faster you bring this to me, the faster I can have your terranite armor ready.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Chest_Armor_Forge:
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Chest_Armor_Forge:
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Chest_Armor_Wait:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"I am very busy right now.  If you could bring me 40 Terranite Ore, 250 Coal and 500,000 gold pieces, I will make that chest armor for you.\"";
+    mes "\"I am very busy right now. If you could bring me 40 Terranite Ore, 250 Coal and 500,000 gold pieces, I will make that chest armor for you.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Chest_Armor_Ready:
@@ -228,14 +228,14 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Chest_Armor_Ready:
     set HEATHIN_QUEST, 11;
     getitem "TerraniteChestArmor", 1;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"I have completed your terranite chest armor.  I hope you enjoy it!  I have some work to wrap up for the Council again, but come back later and I might be able to assist you once more.\"";
+    mes "\"I have completed your terranite chest armor. I hope you enjoy it!  I have some work to wrap up for the Council again, but come back later and I might be able to assist you once more.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"How good to see you.  I have experimented a little with Terranite Ore to see what else can be done with it.  It seems to have some qualities suitable for weapons, but I have only tested it with arrows.  If you would like, I can make Terranite Arrows, but as as with the armor, I need Coal, Terranite Ore and payment for my efforts.\"";
+    mes "\"How good to see you. I have experimented a little with Terranite Ore to see what else can be done with it. It seems to have some qualities suitable for weapons, but I have only tested it with arrows. If you would like, I can make Terranite Arrows, but as as with the armor, I need Coal, Terranite Ore and payment for my efforts.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Also, it might be a while until I have time to see what else I can make with terranite other than arrows, as right now the Council is keeping me rather busy with my commission.  So, would you like some Terranite Arrows?\"";
+    mes "\"Also, it might be a while until I have time to see what else I can make with terranite other than arrows, as right now the Council is keeping me rather busy with my commission. So, would you like some Terranite Arrows?\"";
     menu
         "No, thank you.", L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_No,
         "Sure, I could use some arrows.", L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Yes;
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_No:
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Yes:
     set HEATHIN_QUEST, 12;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Good, good.  I shall begin crafting these arrows as soon as you come back.  However, I cannot just make small handfuls as it would not be worth my time and effort to have my concentration interrupted for small tasks.  I will make 1,000 Terranite Arrows per request, for which I will need "+@TARROW_REQ_TERRA_ORE+" Terranite Ore, "+@TARROW_REQ_COAL+" Coal and "+@TARROW_REQ_GP+" gold pieces.\"";
+    mes "\"Good, good. I shall begin crafting these arrows as soon as you come back. However, I cannot just make small handfuls as it would not be worth my time and effort to have my concentration interrupted for small tasks. I will make 1,000 Terranite Arrows per request, for which I will need "+@TARROW_REQ_TERRA_ORE+" Terranite Ore, "+@TARROW_REQ_COAL+" Coal and "+@TARROW_REQ_GP+" gold pieces.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"See you soon!\"";
     close;
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Forge:
     delitem "TerraniteOre", @TARROW_REQ_TERRA_ORE;
     set Zeny, Zeny - @TARROW_REQ_GP;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Wonderful! You have everything I asked for.  I will start working on the arrows right away.\"";
+    mes "\"Wonderful! You have everything I asked for. I will start working on the arrows right away.\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Wait:
@@ -278,12 +278,12 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Ready:
     set HEATHIN_QUEST, 14;
     getitem "TerraniteArrow", 1000;
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"All done, here you go!  I hope you like them.  I am still working on my commission, but if you ever need any more Terranite Arrows, just come on by with "+@TARROW_REQ_COAL+" Coal, "+@TARROW_REQ_TERRA_ORE+" Terranite Ore and "+@TARROW_REQ_GP+" gold pieces and I will make another 1,000 arrows for you.  By now I have enough Terranite Ore in reserve that you can just trade me my requirements to keep my resources up.  Thank you for all your efforts!\"";
+    mes "\"All done, here you go!  I hope you like them. I am still working on my commission, but if you ever need any more Terranite Arrows, just come on by with "+@TARROW_REQ_COAL+" Coal, "+@TARROW_REQ_TERRA_ORE+" Terranite Ore and "+@TARROW_REQ_GP+" gold pieces and I will make another 1,000 arrows for you. By now I have enough Terranite Ore in reserve that you can just trade me my requirements to keep my resources up. Thank you for all your efforts!\"";
     close;
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Trade:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"Hello, there.  If you have "+@TARROW_REQ_COAL+" Coal, "+@TARROW_REQ_TERRA_ORE+" Terranite Ore and "+@TARROW_REQ_GP+" gold pieces, I will trade you 1,000 Terranite Arrows.  Would you like some Terranite Arrows?\"";
+    mes "\"Hello, there. If you have "+@TARROW_REQ_COAL+" Coal, "+@TARROW_REQ_TERRA_ORE+" Terranite Ore and "+@TARROW_REQ_GP+" gold pieces, I will trade you 1,000 Terranite Arrows. Would you like some Terranite Arrows?\"";
     menu
         "No.", L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Trade_No,
         "Yes.", L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Trade_Yes;
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Trade_Yes:
 
 L_Heathin_Terranite_Arrows_Trade_Wait:
     mes "[Heathin]";
-    mes "\"It seems that you do not have the necessary resources for me to trade you.  Please come back with "+@TARROW_REQ_COAL+" Coal, "+@TARROW_REQ_TERRA_ORE+" Terranite Ore and "+@TARROW_REQ_GP+" gold pieces if you want another 1,000 Terranite Arrows.\"";
+    mes "\"It seems that you do not have the necessary resources for me to trade you. Please come back with "+@TARROW_REQ_COAL+" Coal, "+@TARROW_REQ_TERRA_ORE+" Terranite Ore and "+@TARROW_REQ_GP+" gold pieces if you want another 1,000 Terranite Arrows.\"";
     close;
 
 L_InventoryNoSpace:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/021-2/jhedia.txt b/world/map/npc/021-2/jhedia.txt
index dcb76d47..baf8ee2e 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/021-2/jhedia.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/021-2/jhedia.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     set @Coal_Per, 10;
 
     mes "[Jhedia]";
-    mes "\"I forge Iron Ore into ingots.  Ingots are more useful for skilled smiths, like armorers, because the ore is refined and made into useful units which can be worked with.  To make ingots, I need " + @Iron_Ore_Per + " Iron Ore and " + @Cost_Per_Ingot + " gp per ingot. I also need " + @Coal_Per + " Coal for my forge.\"";
+    mes "\"I forge Iron Ore into ingots. Ingots are more useful for skilled smiths, like armorers, because the ore is refined and made into useful units which can be worked with. To make ingots, I need " + @Iron_Ore_Per + " Iron Ore and " + @Cost_Per_Ingot + " gp per ingot. I also need " + @Coal_Per + " Coal for my forge.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Jhedia]";
     mes "\"How many ingots would you like?\"";