Merge pull request #16 from bigcrunch/master

minor fixes to grammar and spelling on auldsbel.txt

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/011-1/auldsbel.txt b/world/map/npc/011-1/auldsbel.txt
index 66b909f9..6da0b1dc 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/011-1/auldsbel.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/011-1/auldsbel.txt
@@ -775,7 +775,7 @@ L_component_quest_0:
     delitem "MauveHerb", 20;
     set Zeny, Zeny + 2500;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
-    mes "\"Well done, my young friend!  Here are 2,500 GP to compensate you for your efforts.\"";
+    mes "\"Well done, my young friend!  Here is 2,500 GP to compensate you for your efforts.\"";
     mes "[You gain 250 experience points]";
     getexp 250, 0;
     set @Q_component_quest, 1;
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ L_component_quest_1:
     delitem "ConcentrationPotion", 1;
     set Zeny, Zeny + 2500;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
-    mes "\"Ah, excellent, excellent!  These are precisely what I needed.  Here are another 2,500 GP to compensate you for your efforts.\"";
+    mes "\"Ah, excellent, excellent!  These are precisely what I needed.  Here is another 2,500 GP to compensate you for your efforts.\"";
     mes "[You gain 500 experience points]";
     getexp 500, 0;
     set @Q_component_quest, 2;
@@ -821,7 +821,7 @@ L_component_quest_2:
     mes "\"Ah!  Excellent!  Yes, yes, indeed I need help.  I have managed to transmute the components you brought me into a liquid that I believe to be a demetamorphosis stock, but it seems that the details still need some fine-tuning, and I am out of silk cocoons...\"";
     next;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
-    mes "\"I would like to run the next batch of experiments on a larger scale, though.  Would you be so kind as to fetch me some one hundred silk cocoons, please?\"";
+    mes "\"I would like to run the next batch of experiments on a larger scale, though.  Would you be so kind as to fetch me one hundred silk cocoons, please?\"";
     next;
     menu
         "One hundred cocoons, here you are.", -,
@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ L_component_quest_2:
     delitem "SilkCocoon", 100;
     set Zeny, Zeny + 5000;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
-    mes "\"Splendid, splendid!  Here are 5,000 GP for you.\"";
+    mes "\"Splendid, splendid!  Here is 5,000 GP for you.\"";
     mes "Auldsbel attempts to cram the cocoons into his pockets, with little success.  Finally he gives up and takes them into his hut.";
     mes "[You gain 2,000 experience points]";
     getexp 2000, 0;
@@ -875,7 +875,7 @@ L_component_quest_4:
     mes "\"But I was wondering whether creatures that already can auto-transmute-- or metamorphose, as some people call it-- might not allow themselves to be subjected to magical transmutation more easily... Still, all of my demetamorphosis attempts so far have failed.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
-    mes "\"I am thinking of injecting the life force of another creature, perhaps using some astral channelling.  Snakes sound most promising, as they have a similar physical shape but a strong life force.\"";
+    mes "\"I am thinking of injecting the life force of another creature, perhaps using some astral channeling.  Snakes sound most promising, as they have a similar physical shape but a strong life force.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
     mes "\"Could you get me twenty regular, cave, and mountain snake tongues, please?  So a total of sixty tongues.  This is where most of their life force is concentrated, incidentally.\"";
@@ -902,7 +902,7 @@ L_component_quest_4:
     callsub S_update_var;
     next;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
-    mes "Auldsbel focuses on the bundle of snake tongues, which begin to assume a bright red colour, then start to glow.  Yellow sparks drop to the ground, as Auldsbel rolls the tongues into a ball.";
+    mes "Auldsbel focuses on the bundle of snake tongues, which begins to assume a bright red colour, then start to glow.  Yellow sparks drop to the ground, as Auldsbel rolls the tongues into a ball.";
     next;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
     mes "He tosses in a cocoon, then squeezes everything together.  A bright red flash blinds you momentarily.";
@@ -927,7 +927,7 @@ L_component_quest_5:
     delitem "GrassSnakeTongue", 50;
     set Zeny, Zeny + 10000;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
-    mes "\"Excellent!  Here are 10,000 GP for you, and now let's see how this goes.\"";
+    mes "\"Excellent!  Here is 10,000 GP for you, and now let's see how this goes.\"";
     mes "[You gain 100,000 experience points]";
     getexp 100000, 0;
     set @Q_component_quest, 6;
@@ -1098,7 +1098,7 @@ LL_student_start:
     mes "\"Now, listen carefully:  to make a short tank top out of three pieces of cloth, you must use the invocation '" + getspellinvocation("make-short-tanktop") + "'.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]";
-    mes "\"But be careful; transmutations can go wrong, and that can injure you.  When you have some more overall spellcasting practice, come back to me.\"";
+    mes "\"But be careful; transmutations can go wrong, and that can injure you.  When you have more overall spellcasting practice, come back to me.\"";
     next;
     goto L_main_menu;