Dialogue changes to NPCs

Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf."
Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog
Improved grammar and wording
Replaced ". " with ". "
Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – ").

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/010-2/dimonds.txt b/world/map/npc/010-2/dimonds.txt
index 1048a108..09c585e2 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/010-2/dimonds.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/010-2/dimonds.txt
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
     if (@inventorylist_count == 100) goto L_Full_Inv;
 
     mes "[Shannon]";
-    mes "\"Welcome to Dimond's Cove.  We are celebrating Robert Burns with supper and poems.  You provide the supper and I'll provide a poem by Robert Burns.  He was otherwise known as 'The Bard' and wrote many poems.  The music of language is what I love most.  The language of poetry.  While his accent is thick, his poems tell stories that stir the soul.  I'll read a poem by him and you can tell me what you think.\"";
+    mes "\"Welcome to Dimond's Cove. We are celebrating Robert Burns with supper and poems. You provide the supper and I'll provide a poem by Robert Burns. He was otherwise known as 'The Bard' and wrote many poems. The music of language is what I love most. The language of poetry. While his accent is thick, his poems tell stories that stir the soul. I'll read a poem by him and you can tell me what you think.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Before I start, it is traditional to eat, drink and be merry, so help from you will be great and keep me reading.\"";
     next;
@@ -208,13 +208,13 @@
     mes "\"I'm wae to think upo' yon den,\"";
     mes "\"Ev'n for your sake!\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Well, that was the poem.  What do you think of it?\"";
+    mes "\"Well, that was the poem. What do you think of it?\"";
     menu
         "It was a bit long and kind of hard to understand, but thanks for reading.", L_Next;
 
 L_Next:
     mes "[Shannon]";
-    mes "\"Well, thanks for coming to the supper.  Also, thanks for helping me make it through the poem.  Here, take this hat.  When you wear it, wear it with the class you showed me today.  Happy Burns' Supper!\"";
+    mes "\"Well, thanks for coming to the supper. Also, thanks for helping me make it through the poem. Here, take this hat. When you wear it, wear it with the class you showed me today. Happy Burns' Supper!\"";
     getinventorylist;
     if (@inventorylist_count == 100)
         goto L_Full_Inv;
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ L_event_done:
     mes "[Shannon]";
     mes "\"Ah, my dear friend. Good to see you again in this remarkable time of the year.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Welcome to Dimond's Cove.  We are celebrating Robert Burns with supper and poems.  You provide the supper and I'll provide a poem by Robert Burns.  He was otherwise known as 'The Bard' and wrote many poems.  The music of language is I love most.  The language of poetry.  While his accent is thick, his poems tell stories that stir the soul.  I'll read a poem by him and you can tell me what you think.\"";
+    mes "\"Welcome to Dimond's Cove. We are celebrating Robert Burns with supper and poems. You provide the supper and I'll provide a poem by Robert Burns. He was otherwise known as 'The Bard' and wrote many poems. The music of language is I love most. The language of poetry. While his accent is thick, his poems tell stories that stir the soul. I'll read a poem by him and you can tell me what you think.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"O thou! whatever title suit thee,--\"";
     mes "\"Auld Hornie, Satan, Nick, or Clootie!\"";
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ L_event_done:
     mes "\"I'm wae to think upo' yon den,\"";
     mes "\"Ev'n for your sake!\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Well, that was the poem.  What do you think of it?\"";
+    mes "\"Well, that was the poem. What do you think of it?\"";
     menu
         "It was a bit long and kind of hard to understand, but thanks for reading.", L_Close;
 
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ L_MenuItems:
 
     // fallthrough only when player remove the items while in menu, trying to cheat
     // the quest will need to be started again
-    mes "\"What you are offering, you do not have.  Do not try to betray me. Come back when you have better morals.\"";
+    mes "\"What you are offering, you do not have. Do not try to betray me. Come back when you have better morals.\"";
     close;
 
 L_RmItem: