Dialogue changes to NPCs

Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf."
Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog
Improved grammar and wording
Replaced ". " with ". "
Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – ").

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/010-2/chef.txt b/world/map/npc/010-2/chef.txt
index 0f1785d7..9fcc1831 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/010-2/chef.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/010-2/chef.txt
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ L_Next:
     mes "[Chef]";
     mes "";
     mes "You explain Kadiya's situation to him.";
-    mes "\"Hmrmf.  I can't help you; I'm a chef, not a baker!\"";
+    mes "\"Hmrmf. I can't help you; I'm a chef, not a baker!\"";
     close;
 
 L_lace_cupcake:
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ L_Next1:
     mes "[Chef]";
     mes "";
     mes "You explain Kadiya's situation to him.";
-    mes "\"Hmrmf.  I was about to make another batch of orange cupcakes.  Do you have that potion with you?\"";
+    mes "\"Hmrmf. I was about to make another batch of orange cupcakes. Do you have that potion with you?\"";
     next;
     menu
         "No, sorry.", L_bringit,
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ L_Next2:
     next;
     mes "[Chef]";
     mes "";
-    mes "\"Ah yes.  We need to bind the smell in gingerbread.  Bring me three pieces of gingerbread, one orange, and 500 GP for the other ingredients, and I will make you your cupcake.\"";
+    mes "\"Ah yes. We need to bind the smell in gingerbread. Bring me three pieces of gingerbread, one orange, and 500 GP for the other ingredients, and I will make you your cupcake.\"";
     next;
     menu
         "I'll go and get it.", L_End,
@@ -77,18 +77,18 @@ L_Next3:
 
     mes "[Chef]";
     mes "";
-    mes "\"Good, good.  This should work.\"";
+    mes "\"Good, good. This should work.\"";
     mes "He crumbles the gingerbread, mixes it with the potion and some spices, and finally adds some cupcake batter and the orange pieces.";
     next;
     mes "[Chef]";
     mes "";
     mes "\"Take a seat.\"";
-    mes "He fills the mixture into a cupcake form and puts it into the oven.  You watch the cupcake grow for a while.";
+    mes "He fills the mixture into a cupcake form and puts it into the oven. You watch the cupcake grow for a while.";
     mes "Finally, he removes the form and carefully extracts the cupcake.";
     next;
     mes "[Chef]";
     mes "";
-    mes "\"Here you are.  It's a bit bigger than a regular cupcake and will taste a bit like ginger, I think, but otherwise it should be fine.\"";
+    mes "\"Here you are. It's a bit bigger than a regular cupcake and will taste a bit like ginger, I think, but otherwise it should be fine.\"";
     close;
 
 L_no_gingerbread:
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ L_no_orange:
 L_no_Zeny:
     mes "[Chef]";
     mes "";
-    mes "\"No.  I need extra ingredients worth 500 GP, and I expect you to pay for those.\"";
+    mes "\"No. I need extra ingredients worth 500 GP, and I expect you to pay for those.\"";
     close;
 
 L_no_potion: