Dialogue changes to NPCs

Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf."
Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog
Improved grammar and wording
Replaced ". " with ". "
Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – ").

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/009-3/sword.txt b/world/map/npc/009-3/sword.txt
index f0517e96..d419dbaa 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/009-3/sword.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/009-3/sword.txt
@@ -88,11 +88,11 @@ L_PostFlareDart_sister:
 
 L_PostFlareDart_teach:
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
-    mes "\"Beware, mortal... the only spells I can teach thee are those of the school of war.  Dark and dreary spells, that lot!  Pain and misery is all they bring...\"";
+    mes "\"Beware, mortal... the only spells I can teach thee are those of the school of war. Dark and dreary spells, that lot!  Pain and misery is all they bring...\"";
     next;
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
     mes "The sword's voice is growing apprehensive.";
-    mes "\"Once a spell has been learned, it cannot be taken back, no more than a death can be undone.  So be careful, mortal... dost thou truly wish to know the secrets of thus destructive power?\"";
+    mes "\"Once a spell has been learned, it cannot be taken back, no more than a death can be undone. So be careful, mortal... dost thou truly wish to know the secrets of thus destructive power?\"";
     next;
     menu
         "Yes.", L_Next1,
@@ -103,13 +103,13 @@ L_Next1:
     mes "\"So thou art bound to the path of War, as am I, as is my sister...\"";
     next;
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
-    mes "\"So be it, fellow warrior.  Hear the incantation for the blade spell: '" + getspellinvocation("magic-blade") + "'\"";
+    mes "\"So be it, fellow warrior. Hear the incantation for the blade spell: '" + getspellinvocation("magic-blade") + "'\"";
     mes "\"Hold a knife, sharp or regular, when thou speakest it.\"";
     set @Q_status, @STATUS_LEARNED_MAGICBLADE;
     callsub S_update_var;
     next;
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
-    mes "\"But beware... the path of war that thou hast embarked upon is one from which few return.  May luck be on thy side...\"";
+    mes "\"But beware... the path of war that thou hast embarked upon is one from which few return. May luck be on thy side...\"";
     close;
 
 L_PostFlareDart_teach2:
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ L_Close:
 
 L_L2_W11:
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
-    mes "\"Thou hast returned.  That must mean that thy wish to learn the magic of war is still alive?\"";
+    mes "\"Thou hast returned. That must mean that thy wish to learn the magic of war is still alive?\"";
     next;
     menu
         "No, I just wanted to say `hi'.", L_farewell,
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ L_L2_W11:
 
 L_Next2:
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
-    mes "\"If that is thou wishest, I shall not stop thee.  But do not expect to find merriment down this road.\"";
+    mes "\"If that is thou wishest, I shall not stop thee. But do not expect to find merriment down this road.\"";
     mes "\"I must ask that thou sacrificest five thousand monster points for this, however.\"";
     menu
         "No, I don't want that.", L_Close,
@@ -149,20 +149,20 @@ L_Next3:
     callsub S_update_var;
     next;
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
-    mes "\"The spell I shall teach thee is the hail of arrows spell.  It will make arrows fall down from the heavens unto thy enemies.\"";
+    mes "\"The spell I shall teach thee is the hail of arrows spell. It will make arrows fall down from the heavens unto thy enemies.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
-    mes "\"Take twenty arrows, sprinkle sulphur powder over them, and then speak '" + getspellinvocation("arrow-hail") + "'.  Throw them high up in the air, and watch the hail unfold before thy feet.\"";
+    mes "\"Take twenty arrows, sprinkle sulphur powder over them, and then speak '" + getspellinvocation("arrow-hail") + "'. Throw them high up in the air, and watch the hail unfold before thy feet.\"";
     close;
 
 L_L2_almost_done:
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
-    mes "\"Return to my sister now.  I expect that she shall teach thee one more spell.\"";
+    mes "\"Return to my sister now. I expect that she shall teach thee one more spell.\"";
     close;
 
 L_lacking_mobpoints:
     mes "[Magic Sword]";
-    mes "\"Thou lackest the monster points needed to prove thy worthiness.  I shall not reveal more to thee until thou hast slain more monsters.\"";
+    mes "\"Thou lackest the monster points needed to prove thy worthiness. I shall not reveal more to thee until thou hast slain more monsters.\"";
     close;
 
 L_farewell: