Initial spell and grammar check for Rossy quest

1 files changed, 21 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/009-2/olana.txt b/world/map/npc/009-2/olana.txt
index efb3058f..e19c3aeb 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/009-2/olana.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/009-2/olana.txt
@@ -20,19 +20,19 @@
   if (Rossy_Quest == 1 || Rossy_Quest == 2) goto L_Daughter;
 
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Hello. Usually guests don't come here.\"";
+  mes "\"Hello. We don't usually get a lot of guests here.\"";
   next;
-  mes "\"My name is Olana, my father owns this inn. I'm living in Tulimshar, but came to Hurnscald on vacation with my two young daughters, Rossy and Julia.\"";
+  mes "\"My name is Olana and my father owns this inn. I live in Tulimshar, but came to Hurnscald on vacation with my two young daughters, Rossy and Julia.\"";
   if (baselevel < 50) close;
   next;
-  mes "\"I let my two lovely girls play in the woods nearby but they didn't come back yet!\"";
+  mes "\"I let my two lovely girls play in the woods nearby but they haven't come back yet!\"";
   next;
   mes "Olana suddenly looks very pale and starts to shiver.";
   next;
-  mes "\"Oh, I have a bad feeling about this whole situation... If you go to the forest near the swamps, can you see if you find my daughters? I need to know if they are safe.\"";
+  mes "\"I'm starting to get a bad feeling about this... If you go to the forest near the swamps, could you see if you can find my daughters? I need to know if they are safe!\"";
   menu
     "Sure, I can do that.", -,
-    "I am sorry, I don't usually go to this area", L_No;
+    "I am sorry, I don't usually go to that area.", L_No;
   set Rossy_Quest, 1;
   close;
 
@@ -49,10 +49,10 @@ L_No:
 
 L_Help:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Oh yes? Is Rossy alright? That's good. I'm relieved. But what about Julia?\"";
+  mes "\"Oh you did? That's good. I'm relieved. But what about Julia?\"";
   next;
   menu
-    "I didn't find Julia yet, sorry", -;
+    "I haven't found Julia yet, sorry.", -;
   mes "\"Ok. They must be playing hide and seek. Thanks again... I can't express how grateful I am.\"";
   set Rossy_Quest, 3;
   close;
@@ -65,9 +65,9 @@ L_See:
   if (gotcherry == 1) goto L_Task;
   if (countitem("cherry") < 10) goto L_Worried;
   menu
-    "Hi, Rossy asked me to give you this. She says it is a gift from her and from Julia", -;
+    "Hi, Rossy asked me to give you this. She says it is a gift from both her and Julia.", -;
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Ohhh... How sweet... Sometimes Rossy impress me with her kindness. Here. You are spending so much time helping us, and we give nothing back. Take this as a small reward. \"";
+  mes "\"Ohhh... How sweet... Sometimes Rossy impresses me with her kindness. Here...You are spending so much time helping us, and we give nothing back. Take this as a small reward. \"";
   delitem "cherry", 10;
   getexp 1000, 0;
   set zeny, zeny + 1000;
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ L_Task:
 
 L_Cont:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Would you mind giving this letter to my little Rossy? Today is the last day for her final exam, and I know my daughter. If I don't remind her, she will surely forget about it and flunk the exam. I would deliver it myself, but I can't walk, my knees...\"";
+  mes "\"Would you mind giving this letter to my little Rossy? Today is the last day for her final exam, and I know my daughter. If I don't remind her, she will surely forget about it and flunk the exam. I would deliver the letter myself, but I can't walk, my aching knees...\"";
   menu
     "Of course I can. Hand me the letter, I'll give it to Rossy as soon as I see her.", L_Let,
     "No, sorry, I'm not interested in that sort of task. Hand it to her yourself.", L_No;
@@ -91,7 +91,6 @@ L_Cont:
 L_Let:
   mes "[Olana]";
   set Rossy_Quest, 5;
-  set gotcherry, 0;
   mes "\"Thank you again. Please, bring it to her as fast as you can.\"";
   close;
 
@@ -109,12 +108,12 @@ L_Rose:
   menu
     "Hi, Rossy did great in the exam. David told me her potion was flawless.", -;
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Wow! Really? That is great! I would like to congratulate my little Rossy, would you help me?\"";
+  mes "\"Wow! Really? That is great! I would like to congratulate my little Rossy. Would you mind helping me a little more?\"";
   menu
     "Just tell me what to do.", -,
     "No, I'm busy, maybe later.", L_No;
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Can you bring me 15 [Red Rose]s? I would like to give them to Rossy. I am sure she will love it!\"";
+  mes "\"Can you bring me 15 Red Roses? I would like to give them to Rossy. I am sure she will love them!\"";
   menu
     "Ok, I will be back with the roses.", L_RG,
     "I'm allergic to roses, can't even touch them. Sorry.", L_No;
@@ -122,7 +121,7 @@ L_Rose:
 L_RG:
   if (Rossy_Quest == 8) set Rossy_Quest, 9;
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Please, bring me 15 [Red Rose]s as soon as you can.\"";
+  mes "\"Please, bring me 15 Red Roses as soon as you can.\"";
   close;
 
 L_RC:
@@ -142,22 +141,22 @@ L_Allergic:
   mes "\"Did she like my present?\"";
   menu
     "Sure she did...", L_No,
-    "Well, you should known that your daughter is allergic to roses.", -;
+    "Well, you should have known that your daughter is allergic to roses.", -;
   set Rossy_Quest, 12;
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"How stupid I am! Here, take some of my money and buy [Red Tulip]s instead, the same amount. Keep the flowers.\"";
+  mes "\"Oh, how stupid I am! Here, take some of my money and buy Red Tulips instead, the same amount. Keep the flowers.\"";
   set zeny, zeny + 1500;
   next;
-  mes "\"Please, tell Rossy I am really sorry. My mind was in Julia when I asked you to bring the red roses, they are her favorite.\"";
+  mes "\"Please, tell Rossy I am really sorry. My mind was on Julia when I asked you to bring the red roses, they are her favorite.\"";
   menu
     "I will give her the tulips when I see her.", -;
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"And don't forget to tell her that I'm really sorry.\"";
+  mes "\"Thank you. And don't forget to tell her that I'm really sorry.\"";
   close;
 
 L_Give:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\""+ strcharinfo(0) +", please, get 15 [Red Tulip]s and hand them to Rossy. Don't forget to tell her that I'm really sorry.\"";
+  mes "\""+ strcharinfo(0) +", please, get 15 Red Tulips and hand them to Rossy. Don't forget to tell her that I'm really sorry.\"";
   close;
 
 L_Best:
@@ -174,8 +173,8 @@ L_End:
   mes "[Olana]";
   mes "\"Where is Julia? I want to know where she is! Please, find her "+ strcharinfo(0) +"!\"";
   menu
-    "She'll be back soon, trust me, I saved her from an evil spirit.", L_Found,
-    "I didn't see her yet, sorry.", L_No;
+    "She'll be back soon, trust me. I saved her from an evil spirit.", L_Found,
+    "I haven't seen her yet, sorry.", L_No;
 
 L_Found:
   mes "[Olana]";
@@ -195,7 +194,7 @@ L_Clear:
 
 L_FinalEnd:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "*The mother is calmly waiting her daughters to come back for dinner.*";
+  mes "*The mother is calmly waiting for her daughters to come back for dinner.*";
   close;
 
 }