Dialogue changes to NPCs

Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf."
Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog
Improved grammar and wording
Replaced ". " with ". "
Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – ").

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/009-2/lena.txt b/world/map/npc/009-2/lena.txt
index 4b49edf5..d5ce1d8e 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/009-2/lena.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/009-2/lena.txt
@@ -17,23 +17,23 @@
     if (BaseLevel >= 30) goto L_Lena_Start;
 
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"I got ambushed by a group of bandits and one of them stabbed me pretty good.  Hopefully I heal up soon so I can fight this menace.\"";
+    mes "\"I got ambushed by a group of bandits and one of them stabbed me pretty good. Hopefully I heal up soon so I can fight this menace.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Ah, I wish my dear friend Nickos could be here. He's one of the guards in Tulimshar and he'd know how to deal with those outlaws!\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Lena_Start:
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"While wandering through the forest, I was ambushed by bandits.  Though I got them all, one of them stabbed me pretty good.  I'm still healing from that encounter.  I'm worried that the bandit threat may spread.\"";
+    mes "\"While wandering through the forest, I was ambushed by bandits. Though I got them all, one of them stabbed me pretty good. I'm still healing from that encounter. I'm worried that the bandit threat may spread.\"";
     menu
         "Don't worry, I can take out some of these scumbags.", L_Lena_Approves,
-        "I think I left my courage in another pair of pants.  See you later!", L_Lena_No_Fan;
+        "I think I left my courage in another pair of pants. See you later!", L_Lena_No_Fan;
 
 L_Lena_Approves:
     set @state, 1;
     callsub S_Update_Var;
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"You look like you can handle yourself in a fight.  If you can take on this scourge I'll reward you with a hat like mine.  In order to prove your mettle, bring me 10 Bandit Hoods so I know they've met their match.\"";
+    mes "\"You look like you can handle yourself in a fight. If you can take on this scourge I'll reward you with a hat like mine. In order to prove your mettle, bring me 10 Bandit Hoods so I know they've met their match.\"";
     areamonster "008-1.gat",25,60,40,65,"Bandit",1064,3, "::";
     areamonster "011-1.gat",35,40,65,60,"Bandit",1064,3, "::";
     goto L_Close;
@@ -54,21 +54,21 @@ L_Lena_Fairy_Hat:
     delitem "BanditHood", 10;
     getitem "FairyHat", 1;
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"Ah, you've brought me the Bandit Hoods.  As promised, here is a hat like mine.\"";
+    mes "\"Ah, you've brought me the Bandit Hoods. As promised, here is a hat like mine.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Unfortunately, I feel this bandit threat may have grown.  Perhaps they are being lead?  I noticed many of them seem to hang around a cave just west of Hurnscald.  If you could defeat their leader I know they will become less of a threat to Hurnscald.  I'll reward you with armor like mine if you do.  Sound like something you could do?\"";
+    mes "\"Unfortunately, I feel this bandit threat may have grown. Perhaps they are being lead?  I noticed many of them seem to hang around a cave just west of Hurnscald. If you could defeat their leader I know they will become less of a threat to Hurnscald. I'll reward you with armor like mine if you do. Sound like something you could do?\"";
     menu
         "Consider it done!", L_Lena_Bandit_Leader_Yes,
         "Woah there, that sounds a bit harder than what I can succeed at.", L_Lena_NoWay;
 
 L_Lena_NotEnough:
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"You don't have enough Bandit Hoods to prove you are taking care of this threat.  Please come back with 10 Bandit Hoods to show you are taking care of these bandits.\"";
+    mes "\"You don't have enough Bandit Hoods to prove you are taking care of this threat. Please come back with 10 Bandit Hoods to show you are taking care of these bandits.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Lena_Bandit_Leader:
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"I feel this bandit threat may have grown.  Perhaps they are being lead?  I noticed many of them seem to hang around a cave just west of Hurnscald.  If you could defeat their leader I know they will become less of a threat to Hurnscald.  I'll reward you with armor like mine if you do.  Sound like something you could do?\"";
+    mes "\"I feel this bandit threat may have grown. Perhaps they are being lead?  I noticed many of them seem to hang around a cave just west of Hurnscald. If you could defeat their leader I know they will become less of a threat to Hurnscald. I'll reward you with armor like mine if you do. Sound like something you could do?\"";
     menu
         "Consider it done!", L_Lena_Bandit_Leader_Yes,
         "Woah there, that sounds a bit harder than what I can succeed at.", L_Lena_NoWay;
@@ -79,19 +79,19 @@ L_Lena_Bandit_Leader_Yes:
     areamonster "008-1.gat",25,60,40,65,"Bandit",1064,3, "::";
     areamonster "011-1.gat",35,40,65,60,"Bandit",1064,3, "::";
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"You have a brave heart.  Though I know you can succeed on your own, I recommend finding others to help you defeat the bandit leader.  I believe he could pose a significant threat to solitary individuals seeking to challenge him.  Good luck!\"";
+    mes "\"You have a brave heart. Though I know you can succeed on your own, I recommend finding others to help you defeat the bandit leader. I believe he could pose a significant threat to solitary individuals seeking to challenge him. Good luck!\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Lena_NoWay:
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"That is too bad.  Feel free to return at any time.  This bandit threat needs to be pushed back.\"";
+    mes "\"That is too bad. Feel free to return at any time. This bandit threat needs to be pushed back.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Lena_Bandit_Leader_Fail:
     set @state, 3;
     callsub S_Update_Var;
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"You haven't killed the bandit leader yet.  This is a big problem.  Please be careful.\"";
+    mes "\"You haven't killed the bandit leader yet. This is a big problem. Please be careful.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Lena_Success:
@@ -102,17 +102,17 @@ L_Lena_Success:
     callsub S_Update_Var;
     getitem "ForestArmor", 1;
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"Excellent!  You killed the bandit leader.  Here is the armor as I promised you.  Safe journeys!\"";
+    mes "\"Excellent!  You killed the bandit leader. Here is the armor as I promised you. Safe journeys!\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Lena_Done:
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"Thank you for all your help.  With your efforts, we can only hope this scourge doesn't see a resurgence.\"";
+    mes "\"Thank you for all your help. With your efforts, we can only hope this scourge doesn't see a resurgence.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_TooMany:
     mes "[Lena]";
-    mes "\"You have too many items in your inventory.  Please get rid of something so I can reward you.\"";
+    mes "\"You have too many items in your inventory. Please get rid of something so I can reward you.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Close: