Dialogue changes to NPCs

Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf."
Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog
Improved grammar and wording
Replaced ". " with ". "
Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – ").

2 files changed, 24 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-2/casino.txt b/world/map/npc/001-2/casino.txt
index 1c9c61cf..ea29e9bd 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-2/casino.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-2/casino.txt
@@ -119,6 +119,7 @@ L_Close:
 
 001-2.gat,22,69,0|script|Roulette|107,
 {
+    mes "[Croupier]";
     mes "\"Good evening monsieur...";
     mes "How much would you like to bet?\"";
     next;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-2/omar.txt b/world/map/npc/001-2/omar.txt
index 22e0b87d..de442ab6 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-2/omar.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-2/omar.txt
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ L_kadiya_sick:
     mes "[Omar]";
     mes "\"Kadiya has caught Ponderpox, I fear.\"";
     mes "He sighs.";
-    mes "\"She's has been feverish for many days now.  I wish there were something I could do.\"";
+    mes "\"She's has been feverish for many days now. I wish there were something I could do.\"";
     next;
     menu
         "Have you asked Elanore the healer?", L_sick_elanore,
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ L_kadiya_sick:
 
 L_Next:
     mes "[Omar]";
-    mes "\"Well, she is a strong girl.  I am sure that she will get over it eventually.\"";
+    mes "\"Well, she is a strong girl. I am sure that she will get over it eventually.\"";
     mes "He smiles, but you see doubt in his eyes.";
     goto L_Close;
 
@@ -69,12 +69,12 @@ L_sick_elanore:
     mes "[Omar]";
     mes "\"Elanore?\"";
     mes "He frowns.";
-    mes "\"She knows nothing.  I see no point in talking to her.\"";
+    mes "\"She knows nothing. I see no point in talking to her.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_sick_hospital:
     mes "[Omar]";
-    mes "\"Hurnscald is too far away.  I don't think that it would be good for her to go on such a long trip.\"";
+    mes "\"Hurnscald is too far away. I don't think that it would be good for her to go on such a long trip.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_sick_self:
@@ -84,24 +84,24 @@ L_sick_self:
 
 L_didnt_drink:
     mes "[Omar]";
-    mes "\"So she has Mopox, not Ponderpox, you say?  Hmm.  That is much harder to cure, I think.\"";
-    mes "\"I am grateful for the effort you put into brewing a potion for her.  But it does smell vile...\"";
+    mes "\"So she has Mopox, not Ponderpox, you say?  Hmm. That is much harder to cure, I think.\"";
+    mes "\"I am grateful for the effort you put into brewing a potion for her. But it does smell vile...\"";
     next;
     mes "[Omar]";
-    mes "\"I promised my dear wife that I would never make Kadiya eat or drink anything she doesn't like.  So I won't force her to drink this.\"";
+    mes "\"I promised my dear wife that I would never make Kadiya eat or drink anything she doesn't like. So I won't force her to drink this.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Omar]";
     set @Q_status, (@Q_STATUS_WANTS_CHOCOCAKE + rand(2));
     callsub S_update_var;
     if (@Q_status == @Q_STATUS_WANTS_ORANGECUPCAKE)
-        mes "\"If only we could make it smell and taste like orange cupcakes...  she really loves those cupcakes.\"";
+        mes "\"If only we could make it smell and taste like orange cupcakes... she really loves those cupcakes.\"";
     if (@Q_status == @Q_STATUS_WANTS_CHOCOCAKE)
         mes "\"If only this were a chocolate cake and not a potion... she really loves chocolate cakes.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_make_food:
     mes "[Omar]";
-    mes "\"I should stay here to watch over her.  I wish I could think of a way to convince her to drink the potion...\"";
+    mes "\"I should stay here to watch over her. I wish I could think of a way to convince her to drink the potion...\"";
     if (@Q_status == @Q_STATUS_WANTS_ORANGECUPCAKE)
         mes "\"Alas, it is not an orange cupcake.\"";
     if (@Q_status == @Q_STATUS_WANTS_CHOCOCAKE)
@@ -111,12 +111,12 @@ L_make_food:
 L_cured:
     if (@Q_status == @Q_STATUS_COMPLETED) goto L_cured_choice;
     mes "[Omar]";
-    mes "\"She is sleeping now, but she seems to be much better.  I am sure that she will be up and running around again soon.\"";
+    mes "\"She is sleeping now, but she seems to be much better. I am sure that she will be up and running around again soon.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_cured_choice:
     mes "[Omar]";
-    mes "\"I am very grateful for your help.  I really was sure that it was Ponderpox, not Mopox, that she had.\"";
+    mes "\"I am very grateful for your help. I really was sure that it was Ponderpox, not Mopox, that she had.\"";
     next;
     menu
         "Oh, it was nothing.", L_cured_nothing,
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ L_Next1:
 
 L_cured_nothing:
     mes "[Omar]";
-    mes "\"No, this wasn't nothing.  She is everything to me.  Here, you deserve a reward.\"";
+    mes "\"No, this wasn't nothing. She is everything to me. Here, you deserve a reward.\"";
     mes "He hands you a bag of money containing 10,000 GP and two pearls.";
     mes "\"And feel free to drop by again whenever you would like!\"";
     set @Q_status, @Q_STATUS_COMPLETED_NOELANORE;
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ L_cured_elanore:
     next;
     mes "[Omar]";
     mes "Omar shakes his head.";
-    mes "\"I will have to think about this.  Please leave me alone.\"";
+    mes "\"I will have to think about this. Please leave me alone.\"";
     next;
     set @Q_status, @Q_STATUS_COMPLETED_ELANORE;
     callsub S_update_var;
@@ -190,8 +190,8 @@ S_update_var:
     set @Q_status, @Q_kadiya_status;
     if (@Q_status >= @Q_STATUS_COMPLETED) goto L_cured;
 
-    mes "You see a young girl lying in bed.  At first she doesn't seem to notice you approaching.";
-    mes "Finally, she turns her head towards you.  Judging from the sweat on her forehead and look in her eyes, she is suffering from some kind of fever.";
+    mes "You see a young girl lying in bed. At first she doesn't seem to notice you approaching.";
+    mes "Finally, she turns her head towards you. Judging from the sweat on her forehead and look in her eyes, she is suffering from some kind of fever.";
     next;
     mes "[Kadiya]";
     mes "\"Hello,\" she says in a tiny voice.";
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ L_name:
 L_no_candy:
     mes "[Kadiya]";
     mes "She hesitates for a moment.";
-    mes "\"No, thank you.  I don't think I should.\"";
+    mes "\"No, thank you. I don't think I should.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_potion:
@@ -292,26 +292,26 @@ L_do_cure:
     mes "[Kadiya]";
     mes "Kadiya's eyes widen.";
     mes "\"Oh!  Daddy, is it okay if I eat this?\"";
-    mes "Omar nods and smiles.  \"You should eat a bit to regain your strength, sweetheart.\"";
+    mes "Omar nods and smiles. \"You should eat a bit to regain your strength, sweetheart.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Kadiya]";
     mes "Kadiya devours your gift in just a handful of bites.";
     next;
     mes "[Kadiya]";
-    mes "She smiles.  \"Thank you!  I feel better already!\".";
+    mes "She smiles. \"Thank you!  I feel better already!\".";
     next;
     mes "[Kadiya]";
-    mes "She looks much healthier, too.  Omar walks over and touches her forehead.";
-    mes "\"Now that is funny-- your fever has gone down quite a bit!\"";
-    mes "He smiles at you.  \"Thank you for your help!\"";
+    mes "She looks much healthier, too. Omar walks over and touches her forehead.";
+    mes "\"Now that is funny – your fever has gone down quite a bit!\"";
+    mes "He smiles at you. \"Thank you for your help!\"";
     next;
     mes "[Kadiya]";
-    mes "\"You should get some sleep now, sweetheart.  I'm sure that you will be better soon.\"";
+    mes "\"You should get some sleep now, sweetheart. I'm sure that you will be better soon.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_cured:
     mes "[Kadiya]";
-    mes "Kadiya seems to be sleeping calmly.  She looks much less sweaty than earlier; unless you are very much mistaken, her fever has disappeared.";
+    mes "Kadiya seems to be sleeping calmly. She looks much less sweaty than earlier; unless you are very much mistaken, her fever has disappeared.";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Close: