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authorTheKandiman <thekandiman@gmail.com>2011-01-26 23:26:57 -0500
committerTheKandiman <thekandiman@gmail.com>2011-01-26 23:26:57 -0500
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Spelling and grammar updates in NPC dialog for maps 018 to 032
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diff --git a/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt b/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt
index 858a5088..a469ae36 100644
--- a/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt
+++ b/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ L_intro:
mes "[Miriam]";
mes "\"Yes, I am. Why? Do you think I am not OK? I am OK. You interrupted my meditation. Now I will need hours to calm down and stay quiet! Yes, yes, I know, I'm a fast talker!\"";
next;
- mes "\"In fact, I am fast in everything I do! I can kill a Mountain Snake before it even starts to think about atacking me! Yes my friend, in a battle, speed is power!";
+ mes "\"In fact, I am fast in everything I do! I can kill a Mountain Snake before it even starts to think about attacking me! Yes my friend, in a battle, speed is power!";
next;
menu
"Wow! Very impressi...",-;
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ L_canthelp2:
next;
mes "\"...\"";
next;
- mes "\"Well, if you don't have time to help, at least don't make things difficult to me!\"";
+ mes "\"Well, if you don't have time to help, at least don't make things difficult for me!\"";
close;
L_ask1:
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ L_ask1:
next;
menu
"Yes, I will get what you want!",-,
- "No, I have not time right now.",L_canthelp2;
+ "No, I have no time right now.",L_canthelp2;
set QUEST_MIRIAM, 2;
mes "\"Good. So, run and get it!\"";
close;
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ L_ask3:
mes "[Miriam]";
mes "\"You have a small mind, haven't you? I am meditating here and I asked you to bring me stuff, so I can concentrate better.\"";
next;
- mes "\"And stop asking so silly questions in the future.\"";
+ mes "\"And stop asking such silly questions in the future.\"";
next;
mes "\"So, if you really want to help me now, bring me 5 [Concentration Potions] and 10 [Snake Tongues].\"";
close;
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ L_notenough:
L_teach:
mes "[Miriam]";
- mes "\"Hmm... do you think you can learn the special speed skill?\"";
+ mes "\"Hmm... do you think you can learn the special Speed skill?\"";
next;
menu
"Yes, I am prepared...", -,
@@ -155,19 +155,19 @@ L_teach:
L_heavyweight:
mes "[Miriam]";
- mes "\"Wow... Why do you bring so many things with you? You must be carrying more than one third of your own weight! I wont teach you unless you get rid of some stuff... \"";
+ mes "\"Wow... Why do you bring so many things with you? You must be carrying more than one third of your own weight! I won't teach you unless you get rid of some stuff... \"";
close;
L_heavymetal:
mes "[Miriam]";
- mes "\"Hmm... I see... You want to be one of those lazy slow warriors... wasting all their strenght carrying kilos of metal clothes... Why no one sees the great advantages of a beautiful, flexible, lightweight armor nowadays?\"";
+ mes "\"Hmm... I see... You want to be one of those lazy slow warriors... wasting all their strength carrying kilos of metal clothes... Why does no one see the great advantages of a beautiful, flexible, lightweight armor nowadays?\"";
next;
mes "\"Come back here when you get rid of this junk...\"";
close;
L_slow:
mes "[Miriam]";
- mes "Oh, wait, wait... " +@agi+ " Agility? Are you serious? What do you do with all your Character points? Put them all to 'Strenght'? Really... I dont even want to know... Come back here when you have a decent character points distribution!\"";
+ mes "Oh, wait, wait... " +@agi+ " Agility? Are you serious? What do you do with all your Character points? Put them all to 'Strength'? Really... I don't even want to know... Come back here when you have a decent character points distribution!\"";
close;
L_lowlevel:
@@ -177,14 +177,14 @@ L_lowlevel:
L_offer:
mes "[Miriam]";
- mes "\"Hmm! You look great on these clothes! They look very comfortable too... And it seems like you are not carrying too much weight.\"";
+ mes "\"Hmm! You look great in these clothes! They look very comfortable too... And it seems like you are not carrying too much weight.\"";
next;
if (!(getskilllv(SKILL_POOL))) goto L_noskill;
menu
- "Yes, I look really good on this " +@torso$+ ".",-;
+ "Yes, I look really good in this " +@torso$+ ".",-;
next;
mes "[Miriam]";
- mes "\"I see. I like the way you distributed your Character Points too... " +@agi+ " points to Agility! You really know how to prepare yourself to a good fight!\"";
+ mes "\"I see. I like the way you distributed your Character Points too... " +@agi+ " points to Agility! You really know how to prepare yourself for a good fight!\"";
next;
mes "\"Well... Even if you have a potential to be a good fighter, moving the way you do will not help. You need to be fast to avoid the monsters. \"";
next;
@@ -192,14 +192,14 @@ L_offer:
next;
menu
"I'm in! What kind of test is it?",-,
- "I dont think I need more speed right now",L_giveup;
+ "I don't think I need more speed right now",L_giveup;
next;
L_test:
mes "[Miriam]";
- mes "\"Great! The test is simple. You need to run as fast as you can from the place where I am sitting to the mountains and talk to Pachua, the chief. When you get there and talk to Pachua, he will send a special smoke signal to me, so I can know how much time it took for you to go there.\"";
+ mes "\"Great! The test is simple. You need to run as fast as you can from the place where I am sitting to the mountains and talk to Pachua, the chief. When you get there and talk to Pachua, he will send a special smoke signal to me, so I can know how much time it took for you to get there.\"";
next;
- mes "\"If you make it in a good time, I will teach you the special speeding skill, if not, you can always try again. So, are you ready?\"";
+ mes "\"If you make it in a good time, I will teach you the special speeding skill. If not, you can always try again. So, are you ready?\"";
next;
menu
"Yes, let's do it!",-,
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ L_noskill:
L_giveup:
mes "[Miriam]";
- mes "\"Oh, that is bad... But if you change your mind, come back!\"";
+ mes "\"Oh, that is too bad... But if you change your mind, come back!\"";
set QUEST_MIRIAM, 4;
close;