Spelling, grammar, formatting corrections for love triangle quest.

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/diary.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/diary.txt
index 233dc8c5..e3dbc1d6 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/diary.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/diary.txt
@@ -8,24 +8,24 @@
 	end;
 
 L_Diary:
-	mes "You pull out Reid's diary behind a huge poem book. In the back part of the book, you find some entries, which seem to be about Savaric.";
+	mes "You pull out Reid's diary from behind a huge poem book. In the back part of the book, you find some entries which seem to be about Savaric.";
 	next;
-	mes "'Savaric keeps confusing me - one time he is so flirting and slinky, another time he is cold and unfriendly. What is it with this man?'";
+	mes "'Savaric keeps confusing me - one time he is so flirty and slinky, another time he is cold and unfriendly. What is it with this man?'";
 	next;
-	mes "'I need to stay away from him! It's not right, what I am feeling. It seems, Hamond doesn't suspect anything of my feelings - but I know, it's just a matter of time. I need to come to my sense again!'";
+	mes "'I need to stay away from him! It's not right, what I am feeling. It seems Hamond doesn't suspect anything of my feelings - but I know, it's just a matter of time. I need to come to my senses again!'";
 	next;
 	mes "'Oh, this chaos between Savaric and me is getting serious. I was in his room today and he put his arms around me - I wanted to push him away, but I couldn't move. It was such a sweet feeling. I was twisted between my brain saying 'No!' and my body wanting to feel his touch. Then Aldred showed up and Savaric let me go.'";
 	next;
-	mes "The next part is blurred - it seems, Reid was crying while writing.";
+	mes "The next part is blurred - it seems Reid was crying while writing.";
 	mes "'Savaric was talking again about leaving, because he can't find the mana seed. The thought that I would never see him again made me feel like I was falling into a big black hole! I need to decide what to do. But Hamond - I owe him so much. And what about Aldred?'";
 	next;
 	mes "'We kissed each other - oh, I'm feeling so bad. I'm a disloyal slut. But I want it to happen again.'";
 	next;
-	mes "'I told Savaric, we have to stop with it - he was very understanding. But then he started to hold me again and I couldn't resist. I completely don't know, what to do! His touch at my waist, even though over my clothes, made me feel hotter than Hamonds touch ever did.'";
+	mes "'I told Savaric we have to stop with it - he was very understanding. But then he started to hold me again and I couldn't resist. I completely don't know what to do! His touch at my waist, even though over my clothes, made me feel hotter than Hamonds touch ever did.'";
 	next;
-	mes "'I don't know if Hamond suspects us - he was holding me tight all the night, whispering declarations of love in my ears. Oh, I'm feeling so bad.'";
+	mes "'I don't know if Hamond suspects us - he was holding me tight all through the night, whispering declarations of love in my ears. Oh, I'm feeling so bad.'";
 	next;
-	mes "'Hamond won't be here next night - he needs to visit our wine supplier to negotiate the prices. Savaric knows this. I'm feeling so excited - I should go with Hamond, but I told him, I need to take care about the inn, while he's away. Savaric.. '";
+	mes "'Hamond won't be here tomorrow night - he needs to visit our wine supplier to negotiate the prices. Savaric knows this. I'm feeling so excited - I should go with Hamond, but I told him I need to take care of the inn while he's away. Savaric.. '";
 	next;
 	mes "This is the last entry.";
 	if (@reid != 6) goto L_Close;