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authorTheKandiman <thekandiman@gmail.com>2011-01-26 23:26:57 -0500
committerTheKandiman <thekandiman@gmail.com>2011-01-26 23:26:57 -0500
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Spelling and grammar updates in NPC dialog for maps 018 to 032
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-rw-r--r--npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt2
-rw-r--r--npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt12
-rw-r--r--npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt4
-rw-r--r--npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt2
4 files changed, 10 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt
index 18219a82..8fcddf81 100644
--- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt
+++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ L_lace_chococake:
mes "[Riskim]";
mes "\"Please have a seat!\"";
- mes "You watch at Riskim melts the chocolate and stirs in the potion, then glazes a cake with the mixture.";
+ mes "You watch as Riskim melts the chocolate and stirs in the potion, then glazes a cake with the mixture.";
mes "\"It's a bit more chocolatey than your average chocolate cake, of course...\"";
next;
diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt
index 44126aa5..6727ea7d 100644
--- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt
+++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt
@@ -157,8 +157,8 @@ L_State_1:
L_State_2:
mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
mes "\"Well, Winter Gloves are so fashionable for their lovable fur!";
- mes "Only the best furs can be saw for these gloves!";
- mes "But, as you see, I am a tailor, not a hunter! So, why don't you bring me the best fluffy's fur you can see?\"";
+ mes "Only the best furs can be used for these gloves!";
+ mes "But, as you see, I am a tailor, not a hunter! So, why don't you bring me the best fluffy's fur you can find?\"";
set QUEST_WG_state, 3;
next;
menu
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ L_State_4_try:
close;
L_State_4_success:
- mes "Agostine turns into a smile";
+ mes "Agostine breaks into a smile";
next;
mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
mes "\"It's perfect! Perfect! Good job, my friend! I will prepare your gloves right now!\"";
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ L_State_5_pay:
getitem "WinterGloves", 1;
set QUEST_WG_state, 6;
mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
- mes "\"Here they are. You will have the more fashionable hands in the world!\"";
+ mes "\"Here they are. You will have the most fashionable hands in the world!\"";
close;
L_State_5_nocash:
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ L_State_11_try:
close;
L_State_11_success:
- mes "Agostine turns into a smile";
+ mes "Agostine breaks into a smile";
next;
mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]";
mes "\"This one is good enough, my friend. Good job.\"";
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ L_State_12:
mes "And my payment, obviously. 15,000 GP is right.\"";
next;
menu
- "Sure, here it is all.", L_State_12_pay,
+ "Sure, here it all is.", L_State_12_pay,
"I missed something, I will be back soon!", -;
close;
diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt
index 9ecfb219..f4f9d0de 100644
--- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt
+++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
// A clerk
021-2.gat,27,17,0 script Estard 107,{
mes "[Estard]";
- mes "\"Hello what Can I do for you?\"";
+ mes "\"Hello what can I do for you?\"";
next;
L_main:
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ L_marry_too_young:
next;
menu
- "Can I atleast get wedding rings?", L_get_rings,
+ "Can I at least get wedding rings?", L_get_rings,
"Thanks anyways.", -;
close;
diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt
index 556a7141..5d675e3c 100644
--- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt
+++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Yes:
next;
mes "Heathin thinks for a moment.";
next;
- mes "\"Ah, I know! I will make a helm... Well, more like a hood, since it will woven.\"";
+ mes "\"Ah, I know! I will make a helm... Well, more like a hood, since it will be woven.\"";
next;
mes "\"It will require a great amount of heat, if the rumors are to be believed. For this, I will need 100 [Coal] to keep my forge burning hot. I will also need 10 [Terranite Ore] to make the armor. Of course, such work does not come cheap. While I may enjoy my work, my time and effort is very valuable. To compensate my efforts I will need 200,000 gold pieces. Please come back with the gold, [Coal] and ore and I'll make this hood for you.\"";
close;